Shabo 0 Posted July 26, 2003 :hi: Hi Asim I have read that b4, but its always nice to read again!! Thanks for sharing.. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ashu 0 Posted July 26, 2003 app meray shair bhi tu parha karo yaar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 28, 2003 salam all :hi: wasalam shabo ji thanksssssss aur app ki shayri wahhhhh buhot khub ;) Tum Aur Main "Hawaoon mein,fizaoon mein Taptey huey sehraaon mein Baraf posh paharon per Behtey huey daryaoon mein Duniya ki her cheez key andar Bil-Aakhir apni aahon mein Tum meri aawaz suno gey Jab tum tau ho gey Par main nahin hoon ga udas theek hai ji hamein hamar he acha hai ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 28, 2003 jab kabhi tera naam letey hain dil sey ham intaqaam letey hain meri barbaadiyon k afasaaney merey yaaron ka naam letey hain bas yahi ik jurm hai apna hum muhabbat sey kaam letey hain har qadam par gire par sikhaa kaise giraton ko thaam letey hain hum bhaTak kar junoon ki rahon mein aql se intaqaam letey hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 28, 2003 salam all of u guyz..... asim bhaie ur shiaree is gr8:)......aur app shabo jie kie baat ka bura na manain masla yeh hia k shabo jie ne kuch ziyada hie shairee parhiee huee hian:p......aur adil n shabo jie both r posting nice shiaree as usual u guyz do.......ajj kal meri tabiyat kuch theek nahien hia :(......is liye net par ana nahien umeed hia u guyzz will pray for ma health........:) INSHALAH I,LL ALSO WRITE NICE SHAIREE LIKE U GUYZ....VERY SOON....... TIL DAN......TC ALL ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 28, 2003 salam all of u guyz..... asim bhaie ur shiaree is gr8:)......aur app shabo jie kie baat ka bura na manain masla yeh hia k shabo jie ne kuch ziyada hie shairee parhiee huee hian:p......aur adil n shabo jie both r posting nice shiaree as usual u guyz do.......ajj kal meri tabiyat kuch theek nahien hia :(......is liye net par ana nahien umeed hia u guyzz will pray for ma health........:) INSHALAH I,LL ALSO WRITE NICE SHAIREE LIKE U GUYZ....VERY SOON....... TIL DAN......TC ALL AUR HAAN MUJH GAREEB K PASS KOIEE BIKE YA GHARI NAHIEN HIA MAIN BEDAL HIE ACHA LAGH RAHA HOON JATEY........:D....... ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted July 29, 2003 Thanks Umair and Shabo, I knew while i was posting that most of you guys must have read or heard that gazal by Ahmed Faraz. Arz kiya hai... 1. utha kar toor dala aina husn-e-raqabat se, woh kal is par bigar bethe ke hum sa dosra kiyon ho. 2. yeh husn walay sab mere tasbeh ke da-ne hein, nazar se phirte jaate hein ibadat hoti jaate hai Thanks and Take Care. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 29, 2003 salam all :hi: jany on ko logo say thei keya shekayatein tanHayon ke Deiss men khud ko bassa deya khud bhi kahi bechar ke tanha saa ho geya mujh ko bhi bhari dunya men tanha bana deya acha ji ab allah hafiz :hi: aur sab nay buhot acha leikha hai , acha ji ab ijaza bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 29, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzz........ thanx shabnam jie .......app kie dua hia ab main MASHALAH theek hoon jie...... adil bhaie wah yar nice shairee,asim bhaie maine app kie shiaree nahien thee pehley parhie mujhey kafie achie laghee app ke poetry....thanx for posting here ,kam se kam hamain bhie achie poetry naseeb huee parihiney ko...... ab aya hoon to kuch pesh karita hoon umeed hia u guyz will surely like dis........ Han Mujhay Us Say Piyar Ho Gaya "HAN MUJHAY US SAY PIYAR HO GAYA EK PAL MAIN NA JANAY KIYA HO GAYA YON TO MAIN ROZ US SAY MILTA HON NA JANAY AAJ USAY DAKTAY HE MUJHAY KIYA HO GAYA WO BHI MUJH SAY IZHAR KAR NA SAKI MAIN BHI NA JANAY KAHAN KHO GAYA AAJ US NAY BOHOT PIYAR SAY POOCHA HAI WO KON HAI JIS SAY TUMHAIN PIYAR HO GAYA MAIN KAISAY US SAY KAHON KAY WO TUM HI HO JAB KEHNA CHAHA TO USKAY INKAR SAY DAR GAYA WO SHAYED PIYAR KARTI HAI MUJH SAY NA JANAY KIYON MUJHAY YE GUMAN HO GAYA KAHEEN AISA NA HO KAY ISI INTEZAR MAIN KOI AA KAY KAHEY WO KISI OR KA HO GAYA NA DAR A DIL KEH DAY AAJ US SAY YE BAT HAN WO TUM HI HO JIS SAY MUJHAY PIYAR HO GAYA how was dat guyzz.....nice na ok bye for now guyzzzz........ TC ALL ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted July 30, 2003 Assalam O' Alaikum Everyone! Apne ahsaas se choo kar mujhe sundal kar do Mein ke sadiyon se adhora hoon mukammal kar do Na tumhe hosh rahe aur na mujhe hosh rahe Is qadar toot ke chaho mujhe pagal kar do Tum hataile ko mere pyar ki mehandi se rango Apni aankhon se mere naam ka kajal kar do Dhoop he dhoop hoon mein toot ke barso mujh par Mein tu sehra hoon mujhe pyar ka badal kar do Uske saaye mein mere khawab mehak uthein gay Mere chehre pe umeedon bhara aanchal kar do Apne hoonton se koi mohar lagao mujh par Aik nazar pyar se dekho mujhe ghayal kar do Take Care and Allah Hafiz :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 30, 2003 salam all :hi: salam umair , wahhhhhhh buhot khub ji , aur asim :) ab kuch men bhi sunao ;) " meri aankhon ko yah hunnar aay main jiddhar dakhon to nazar aay tu mera hamsafar banay jis main kaash!! darpeish wo safar aay jaa baja thy lagay huay pahray kasi rahoon say hum guzar aay barh kay uss ko laga loon galay aarzo hay wo maray ghar aay lamha lamha uuski rahhoon main raho zindagi ban kay wo ager aay !!!!!!! udas acha ji ab <(__l__) l hafiz :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 30, 2003 salam ji :hi: kesay hai sab theek thak hai na , hyyyyy men phir aa geya ji "Nazar jin ko dhond thei hai oh log kaha gaye " chalo uon kelay men kuch leikhta hoo , sheid app ko pasand aaye "Zara Sochna tum bhi " "Kabhi Tanha Ho to Zara Sochna Khamoosh Ratoon Mein Ek Pagal Shakas Milay Ga Tumhein Guzri Yadoon Mein Kitnay Payar Say Jis Ki Mohabat Ko Faramosh Kiya Tha Tum Nay Sisak Sisak Kar Jee Raha Hay Abb Joo Tery Chahatoon Mein Uss Dewanay Ki Mohabat Ko Zara Bhi Na Samjha To Nay Teray Dill Ki Darkanein Basi Thein Jis Ki Darkanoon Mein Jiss Nay Lotaya Tha Tujhe Par Apni Ulfatoon Ka Khazeena Khushbo-e-Gull Ki Tarha To Samai Thi Jiss KI Sansoon Mein Pinhaan Rakha Jiss Nay Apnay Dill Mein Sooz-e-Hijr-o-Wafa Suna Di Apni Dastan-e-Ishq Uss Nay Batoon Hi Batoon Mein Abb Azad Ho Gaya Wo Zindagy Kay Sab Bandhanoon Say Ayaan Tha Tera Hussan-e-Dill Nageen Jiss Ki Ankhoon Mein udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 30, 2003 salam :hi: " tum he zindagi ho " tumhe hi tu zindagi kehta hoon, tumhe hi dekh kar tu main jeeta hoon, tumhara hi khiyaloon main khoya rehta hoon, tumhe hi harwaqt soochta rehta hoon, tumhain hi har dua main mangta hoon, tumhe hi tu bas main chahtah hoon, tumhara hi har ghazal main tasawor karta hoon, tumhare liye hi har sher kehta hoon, jub tum ho mere samne tu itna main karta hoon, ke apni in ankhoon main tum ko basa leta hoon udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 30, 2003 hi! adil tumhari ghazal ka reply SUNO! TUM MUJHE APNI ZINDAGI KEHTE HO MUJHE ISS KA YAQEEN HAI MAGAR MERI EK AUR KHUWAHISH HAI KE...! ISS ZINDAGI KE BAAD KHUDA MUJHE EK AUR ZINDAGI DE TAKAY...! MAIN DEKH SAKOON KE TUM APNI ZINDAGI SE KISI AUR ZINDAGI TAK KA FASLA TUM KITNE ARSE MAIN TAYE KERTE HO??? i hope all of u would like it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 30, 2003 Salam all :hi: wahhhhhhhhh kiran buhot khub , zabardast "JO KABHI APNA NAHI HOSAKTA yeh dil usi ko chahata hai!! humara koi milan hi nahi phir bhi... yeh dil usi ko chahata hai!!!! woh aasman ka tara hai mein zameen ki dhool.. yeh jante hue bhi yeh dil usi ko chahata hai!!! hum saahil ke do kinare hain jo kabhi mil nahi sakte yeh mante hue bhi yeh dil usi ko chahata hai!!! na honge woh humein hasil kabhi janta hai yeh dil bhi sabhi phir bhi aakhir kyoun adil???? yeh dil usi ko chahata hai....!!!! [/color udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 31, 2003 thank u Adil here AGAIN reply...! DIL ABAS BEQARAR KIYA KERNA ABH TERA INTAZAR KIYA KERNA KOSHISHAIN AUR WOH BHI LAHASIL AISI MEHNAT KA YAAR KIYA KERNA JAB KOI HAL NIKAL NAHI SAKTA ILTAJA BAAR BAAR KIYA KERNA JISKO EK HURF KATAL KER DALE AISE DUSHMAN PE WAAR KIYA KERNA JHOOTE SABIT HOWE SAB HI WADE TUJH PER ABH AITEBAR KIYA KERNA "KAIF" MAYOSIYON MILAIN JIS SE AISE MAZI SE PYAAR KIYA KERNA howz it????? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 31, 2003 ab k hum bichray to shayad khawabon main milain jesay bichray huaye phool kitabon main milain (ghis gaya hay) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Salaam all :hi: Hi Umair.. wow that was an awsome poem.. mujhay bohot achi lagi yeh shairi... thanks so much for posting it here :) aag ho to jalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai barf ke pighalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai chaahe ko_ii ruk jaaye chaahe ko_ii rah jaaye qaafilo.n ko chalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai chaahe ko_ii jaisaa bhii ham_safar ho sadiyo.n se raastaa badalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai ye to vaqt ke bas me.n hai ke kitanii mohalat de varnaa baKht Dhakane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai mom kaa badan lekar dhuup me.n nikal aanaa aur phir pighalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai soch kii zamiino.n me.n raaste judaa ho.n to duur jaa nikalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Salaam Asim, Adil & Kiran Some nice shairi posted by u ppl!! Also a big salaam to munnibhai and welcome to the shairi boards... nice shairi u posted, keep going! Hey Adil aap ko kis ka intezar hai ji?? Kuch humey bhi tho batheiyn? :) Bohot achi shairi hai sab ki aur Kiran ki replies bhi bohot khoob ;) aaj to be-sabab udaas hai jii ishq hotaa to ko_ii baat bhii thii jalataa phirataa huu.N kyuu.N do-paharo.n me.n jaane kyaa chiiz kho ga_ii merii vahii.n phirataa huu.N mai.n bhii Khaak ba-sar is bhare shahar me.n hai ek galii chhupataa phirataa hai ishq duniyaa se phailatii jaa rahii hai rusvaa_ii ham_nashii.n kyaa kahuu.N ke vo kyaa hai chho.D ye baat niind u.Dane lagii aaj to vo bhii kuchh Khaamosh saa thaa mai.n ne bhii us se ko_ii baat na kii ek dam us ke haath chuum liye ye mujhe baiThe baiThe kyaa suujhii tuu jo itanaa udaas hai '????' tujhe kyaa ho gayaa bataa to sahii Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 31, 2003 thanks shabo abh tum tareef bhi iss tarah karo ;) to koi baat nahi tareef to tareef hai :P :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted July 31, 2003 salam all :hi: great stuff guys! ok ....my turn now... barson kay baad dekha "shaksh dil-ruba sa" ab zehan mein nahin hai naam , per naam tha bhala sa abroo khichay kichay say , aankhain jhuki jhuki si baatian ruki ruki si , lehja thaka thaka sa alfaz thay , keh awaz kay jugnu safar mein ban jaye jaisay jangalon mein rasta sa khawabon mein khawab uss kay , yaadoon mein yaad uski neendon mein ghul gya ho jaisay woh ratjaga sa pehlay bhi log aye kitnay hi zindagi mein woh har tarha say laikin auroon say tha juda sa agli muhabbaton nay woh na muradiyan deen taza rafaqaton say dil tha dara dara sa kuch yeh keh mudaton say hum bhi nahin thay royay kuch zehar mein bujha tha ehbaab ka dilasa phir yun hua keh sawan aankhon mein aa basay thay phir jaisay keh dil bhi tha aik aabla sa ab such kahain to yaaro humko khabar nahin thi qayamat ban jaye ga ik waqiya zara sa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Kiran I believe a compliment should be paid.. discreetly ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted July 31, 2003 jee sahi kehnday o tusi @shabo.co.uk :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Heyyyy Kiran yeh kya???? Thanks support@cooooolll.com ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
