NaDaN 0 Posted January 12, 2004 Very Nice Mula Jutt, Kiran n Snober!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 12, 2004 :hi: Salaam All Kiran, Molajut, Sanober fantastic poetry thanks for sharing with us!! NaDaN> Congrats on submitting the 1000th reply on this post Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 12, 2004 oH tHANKS Shabo .. mujhay pata he nahe tha!! Thanks :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 12, 2004 Salaam to All Shairi k Shokeen Members NaDaN> ur welcome.. mein ne notice kiya tha na ;) Dartey hain aag sey kahin haath na jal jaiey, Dartey hain waqt sey kahin dair na ho jaiey, Dartey hain maut sey kahin hum bichhar na jaiey Dartey hain AAP sey.. kahin pyar na ho jaiey ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 13, 2004 Woh Shakhs Jo Mera Naseeb Tha jo khyal the na qyaas they wohi log humse bicher gaye meri zindagi ki jo aas they wohi log humse bicher gaye, jinhe maanta nahi hai dil,wohi log hain mere humsafer mujhe her tarhan se jo raas the wohi log humse bicher gaye, mujhe lamha bher ki rafaqaton ke azaab aur satayenge meri umer bher ki jo pyaas thi wohi log humse bicher gaye, yeh khayal saare hain aarzi,yeh gulaab sare hain kaghazi gul-e-arzoo ki jo baas they wohi log humse bicher gaye, jinhe ker saka na qubool mein,woh shareek rah-e-safer hue jo meri talab meri aas they wohi log humse bicher gaye, yeh jo raat din mere saath hain wohi ajnabi ke hain ajnabi woh jo dherkanon ki asaas they wohi log humse bicher gaye Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 13, 2004 wah wah shabnam zabrdast ...koun c poetry kie book hath ayee hia jo itnie posting kie hian well ma pleasure once again :) mola jut yar tumhari posting waqaye kamal hia yara :hi: Shaam Ka Dukh "Kitna ajeeb hota hey muhabbat mien shaam ka dukh merey ghar k anghan mien tanha mien aur shaam ka dukh kiyon nhn thehar jatien lumhoon k liye din ki rahatien kiyon chod jata hey ujala hasaar mien shaam ka dukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 13, 2004 Shabo thanks for noticing me!! n very nice post you both Shabo n Umair Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bugs 0 Posted January 13, 2004 hi evry one a thought mine here it is berh berh ishq day daway piya kerna hain herkatan kaferan wungyan ja ja boway yar diya werna hain gulan kafran wungyan another one unki yad kee odhni bana letay hain tusuver mehboob ka rukh ker khud ko sumjha letay hain nazr-e-ulfat jub na ho mehboob kee hum dil mein mer ker jee uthtay hain another one mehboob ki eik nazr kee aas hoti hai qalub mein eik chah hoti hai tumhein kiya sumjhaein apni beqarari is moj ki apni he eik terp hoti hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 14, 2004 Dil nay tumhari yaad mein sab ko bhula diya Aab Taq hai,Chiragh hai,Laikin Dhwan nahi Ja uss ka Naam likh day Gulabon ki Shaakh par Phoolon k aas pass agar Titliyan nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 14, 2004 thank u saher :) TERI YAADOON KI MEHAK "TERI YAADOON KI MEHAK SAATH LIYE AKSAR HUM DUUR KHWABOON KE JAZERAY MEIN UTTAR JATE HAIN Q K HUM TUM SIRF KHWABOON MEIN MILSAKTAY HAIN MEINE SOCHA HAI AB KE BAR JAB TUM MERE KHWABOON MEIN AAOGEE TO MEIN TUMHARE HUMRAAH UN HASEEN VADIYOON MEIN UTROONGA AUR JO BAAT MEIN TUMSE SADIYOO SE NAHIN KEHPAYA HUN TUMHEIN APNE SAMNAY BITHA KE BARI HIMMAT SE KEHDUNGA,KEHDUNGA KE TUM MERI HOO TUM JO CHAHOO MERI YUKTARFA MOHABBAT KO SAHARA DEDO MERI DOOBTI HUI KASHTI KO SAHARA DEDO MUJHE MALOOM HAI KE TUM WEHAN SE UT KE CHALI JAOGEE AUR MEIN APNI DUNYA MEIN VEERAN REHJAOONGA BAS TUMHARI YAHI CHUND BAATEIN AUR TUMHARI YAADEIN HE TO ASASA HAI MERI ZINDAGI KA ISSI LIYE TERI YAADOON KI MEHAK SAATH LIYE AKSAR HUM DUUR KHWABOON KE JAZERAY MEIN UTAR JATE Q K HUM TUM SIRF KHWABOON HE MEIN MILSAKE HAIN... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 14, 2004 thank u saher :) TERI YAADOON KI MEHAK "TERI YAADOON KI MEHAK SAATH LIYE AKSAR HUM DUUR KHWABOON KE JAZERAY MEIN UTTAR JATE HAIN Q K HUM TUM SIRF KHWABOON MEIN MILSAKTAY HAIN MEINE SOCHA HAI AB KE BAR JAB TUM MERE KHWABOON MEIN AAOGEE TO MEIN TUMHARE HUMRAAH UN HASEEN VADIYOON MEIN UTROONGA AUR JO BAAT MEIN TUMSE SADIYOO SE NAHIN KEHPAYA HUN TUMHEIN APNE SAMNAY BITHA KE BARI HIMMAT SE KEHDUNGA,KEHDUNGA KE TUM MERI HOO TUM JO CHAHOO MERI YUKTARFA MOHABBAT KO SAHARA DEDO MERI DOOBTI HUI KASHTI KO SAHARA DEDO MUJHE MALOOM HAI KE TUM WEHAN SE UT KE CHALI JAOGEE AUR MEIN APNI DUNYA MEIN VEERAN REHJAOONGA BAS TUMHARI YAHI CHUND BAATEIN AUR TUMHARI YAADEIN HE TO ASASA HAI MERI ZINDAGI KA ISSI LIYE TERI YAADOON KI MEHAK SAATH LIYE AKSAR HUM DUUR KHWABOON KE JAZERAY MEIN UTAR JATE Q K HUM TUM SIRF KHWABOON HE MEIN MILSAKE HAIN... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 16, 2004 Asalam O ALIkum to all:hi:... thank u very much Umair bhai yeh to aap ki karam narazi hai k aap ko is khaaksaar ki poetry pasand aae waisay pata chala k shabo sahiba kon si book use kar rahi hain:C. Kya ab bhi meri jhalak khuwab main nazar atee hai tumhain Kya meri har yaad ab bhi raat bhar jagati hai tumhain Har andhere tumhe mujh tak khench lata tha Kya ab bhi koi roshni is tarah bolati hai tumhain Mera har raaz tumhain hawa hi bata jatee thee Kya ab bhi khushbu mere paigham sunatee hai tumhain Meri taqleef per wo ankh main nammi ka aa jana Kya ab bhi meri koi baat rolatee hai tumhain Tumhara har jazba, tumharee ankh mujh se kah detee Kya ab bhi wo kuch na kah kar har baat batati hai tumhain Har awaz pe tumhe mere ane ka hota tha gumaan Kya ab bhi koi aahat yuun satatee hai tumhain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 16, 2004 arey khaksar kie poetry waqayee kamal hia yar... bas is nacheez bandey ne tareef kar di ...aur shabnam kie poetry kie book hath lagh jaye aur kya chahiyee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 16, 2004 "Chehrey pe merey Zulf ko Phailaao kissi Din Kiya Roz garaj-tey ho, baras jaao kissi Din Raazon ki tarha utro merey Dil mein kissi shab dastak pe merey haath ki khul jaao kissi Din Phoolon ki tarha husn ki baarish mein naha loon Badal ki tarha jhoom ke ghir aao kissi Din Khushboo ki tarha guzro merey Dil ki gali say Phoolon ki tarha mujh pe bikhar jaao kissi Din Phir haath ko khairaat miley bund qaba ki Phir Lutf -e- shab-e-wasl ko dohraao kissi Din Guzrein jo merey ghar sey tou ruk jaaein Sitaarey Iss tarha meri Raat ko chamkaao kissi Din Mein Apni har aik saans ussi raat ko dey doon sar rakh ke merey seeney pe so jaao kissi Din Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 16, 2004 Salaam all Salaam Umair, NaDaN, Bugs (its gr8 to c u again!!), junaidrauf & Molajut... some nice poetry submitted by u guys Heyyy Umair poetry book kahaan haat lagi hai... yeh to humare haal e dil hai that I am sharing with u all ;) Shukriya haal aap ne poocha Hum to jaise thay ab bhi waisay hain Aap batlaein aap kaise hain Shukariya haal aap ne poocha Apne ahwaal kya sunaein hum Dil-e-barbaad ab bhi zinda hai Aur barbaad dil k khonay mein Aap ki yaad ab bhi zinda hai Zindagi beqarar aaj bhi hai Aap ka intizaar aaj bhi hai Dhadkanoon ko bichaey betay hain Hum to jaise thay ab bhi waisay hain Khoay khoay se yeh gulaabi nain Pheeka pheeka udaas sa aanchal Yeh pareshaan nazar parehsaan zulf Pehlaa pehlaa sa aankh ka kajal Gahray saaye nazar k aagay hain Kitni raatoon k aap jaagay hain Gaal par aansuun k dhabbay hain Hum to jaise thay ab bhi waisay hain Hum to aazir thay jaan-o-dil le kar Aap hi hauslaa na kar paaye Zindagi ka koi kasoor nahi Aap hi faislaa na kar paaye Chen ab kho k faida kya hai Jaan ab roh k faida kya hai Aadsay aise hotay rahtay hain Hum to jaise thay ab bhi waisay hain Aap batlaein aap kaise hain Shukriya haal aap ne poochaaa!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 16, 2004 wow shabo ..its very nice & quit simple words RAT GAYE AKSER AISA BHI HOTA HAI JAISAI DIL SEENAY MAIN CHUP HO JATA HAI HER SOO IK ANDHYAR GHUP HO JATA HAI IS LAMHAI BUS IK DUA YAD ATEE HAI YA RUB ! TU US KO KHUSH RAKHNA ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 16, 2004 shbanam app ke hal e dil ab yahan tak aa pohinchey hian anywaz nice colection guyss :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 17, 2004 Asalam o ALikum to all :hi: Thank u very much Umair so nice of u and ur collection is also very good SHAB-E-FIRAQ SE IS DIL KO PYAR AB BHI HAI MERI NAZAR KO TERA INTIZAR AB BHI HAI USAY YEH KEHNA KE AB BHI HON ISHAQ SE SARSHAR WO PEHLE PEHLE DINO KA KHUMAR AB BHI HAI ISI TERHA SE SHAB-E-HIJR MAIN TARRAPTE HAIN HAMARE DIL PE TERA AKHTIYAR AB BHI HAI YEH AUR BAAT HAI KE TUM HUM PE MEHARBAN NA HUE DIL-O-JAAN TO TUM PE NISAR AB BHI HAI FARAIB KHA KE BHI HUM TUJH SE BAD GUMAN NA HOE HAMARE DIL KO TERA ATIBAR AB BHI HAI YEH AUR BAAT HAI KA TO MIL SAKA NAHI MUJH KO TERI JUDAI MAIN DIL BE QARAR AB BHI HAI HER EK SANS MAIN AB BHI TUMHARI KUSHBOO HAI TUM HARE DARD SE JAN KO QARAR AB BHI HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 17, 2004 thanks molajut :) IK KAAM KERTAY HAY "becharna ager muqader hai tu phir kuch deer ruk jao bicharne se zara pehle chalo aek kaam kerte hain humaisha sath rehne k woh su waday ju umeedon ko ongli se lagay ifay-e-eyehud ki khwahish main nangay paoun phirte hain chalo aek kaam kerte hain saffar ki raey-e-gani ki khaber un ko sunate hain wapis bolate hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 17, 2004 wesey shabnam hum to app ke hal poch poch k thak gaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted January 17, 2004 hi dosto :hi: kasay hain aap sab .its really after a long time that i am back . aap sab na bohut hi achi achi shayeri kahi hai. its lovely. waqt karta jo wafa aap humeray hotay hum bhi auron ki tarah aap ko pyaray hotay apni taqdeer mein pehla se hi kuch toh ghum hain aur kuch aap ki fitret mein wafa bhi kum hai varnaa jeeti huyi baazi na haraye hotay hum bhi payaasa thay yeh saqi ko bata bhi na sakey samna jaam tha aur jaam utha bhi na sakey kash hum gayratay mehfil ke na maaraye hotay dum ghuta jata hai seena mein phir bhi zinda hain tum se hum kya hum toh zindagi se bhi sherminda hain maar hi jaatay jo yaadon ke na saharay hotay waqt karta jo wafa aap humeray hotay hum bhi auron ki tarah aap ko pyaray hotay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 17, 2004 Mujh ko apni "khud aitmadi" per,Aitmaad iss qader bala ka tha Main hawaon say baat kerta tha,Chand taroon say guftagou bhi thi Behtay pani say lay kay jheel talak,qatra qatra maira shanasa tha Mujh ko baton main derk hasil tha, Saray lafzon pay mairi qudrat thi. Phir howa youn kay "WO" milli mujh ko Us say jub baat kerna chahi tou Husn ki bargah main maira "Confidence" sheekust maan gia Saray lafzon nay sir jhuka dalay, Sari soochon ko rah bhoole gai Aur mairi "khud aitmadi" nay aisa dhooka dia k jub main nay Kehna chaha "unhain" Salam Alaik Tou mujhay bolna hi bhoole gia. Gharz abb mairay dill main khadsha hai, Aik din iss terha na ho ja'ay Kay usay daikh ker, usay mill ker Sans Laina Hi Bhoole Jaon main................. Hi Jaaan!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 17, 2004 Zamaney sey nahi tanhaiee se dartey hain, Pyar sey nahi ruswaiee se dartey hain, Milney ki umang bahot hai Milney k baad teri judai se dartey hain.... Allah Hafiz All :hi: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 18, 2004 nadan>>> ab aitbar khud se khatam ho gaya kya shabnam>>> itna bara ALLAH HAFIZ kaha :P judai ka irada hia kya jaan>>> excellent colection :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 18, 2004 MOHABBAT PALKOON PER KITNAY "MOHABBAT PALKOON PER KITNAY HASEEN KHUWAB SAJATI HAY PHOLOON SAY MEHAKTY KHUWAB SITAROON SAY JIGMIGATY KHUWAB SHABANAM SAY BERASTY KHUWAB. PHIR YEHOON BHI HOOTA HAY KAY PALKOON KI DAALI SAY KHUWABOON KAY SARY PERINDY URE JATAY HAIN AUR AAKHAIN WIRAAN SI REH JATI HAIN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
