NaDaN 0 Posted January 4, 2004 Umair very Nice!!... may bato app kiya ho!!... app CY kay sweeetest Member ho!1 Yaaad Aaayya! :D! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted January 4, 2004 Suraj Hua Madham.... chand bhi chalne laga Main thehra raha, zamin chalne lagi............................. Sajnaaa.. kya Yehi Pyaar Hai ??????? Nalayak yeh pyar nahi EARTHQUAKE hai ! BHAAG ................... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 4, 2004 Adil> :wako: Yeh mail Waqas ne mujhey bhi send ki thi.. its a joke & nothing to do with shairi :P Ai Khuda tera har faisla mujhey manzoor hai Teray samney tera banda BOHOT majboor hai.... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 5, 2004 :) :) :) shabnam jie bohut bohut shukiriya karam nawazish app ki.... hum aa gaye app ke kehiney par ... :)....ajj kal mera mood kafie rude rehta hia to is hisaab se yeh poetry sahie hia :)NA JANAY MAIN BHI KIYA HOON :hi: Hi Umair Thank u so much for coming back at my request.. hey aap k mood ko kya hua?? Be happy always!! ;) Hasb e mamool VERY nice shairi presented by u :D ishq mujhko naheeN, wehshat hee sahee meree wehshat, teree shohrat hee sahee qata`a keeje na ta`alluq ham se kuchch naheeN hai to `adaavat hee sahee mere hone meiN hai kya ruswaaee ? 'ei woh majlis naheeN KHalwat hee sahee ham bhee dushman to naheeN haiN apne GHair ko tujh se mohabbat hee sahee apnee hastee hee se ho, jo kuchch ho ! aagahee gar naheeN GHaflat hee sahee 'umr harchand ke hai barq-e-KHiraam dil ke KHooN karne ki fursat hee sahee ham koee tarq-e-wafa karte haiN na sahee ishq, museebat hee sahee kuchch to de 'ei falak-e-na_insaaf aah-o-fariyaad ki ruKHasat hee sahee ham bhee tasleem kee KHoo Daalenge be_niyaazee teree `aadat hee sahee yaar se cheDa chalee jaay, ???? gar nahee wasl to hasrat hee sahee Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted January 5, 2004 ishq mujhko naheeN, wehshat hee sahee haa wo to mujhay patta hay :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 5, 2004   ishq mujhko naheeN, wehshat hee sahee haa wo to mujhay patta hay :D Aap wapis aa gaiey SLLeepy ji :o Khush amdeed :P Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted January 5, 2004 Adil> :wako:Yeh mail Waqas ne mujhey bhi send ki thi.. its a joke & nothing to do with shairi :P Ai Khuda tera har faisla mujhey manzoor hai Teray samney tera banda BOHOT majboor hai.... Sx shabo ji sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :( mujhy nahi pata thaa ke kesi nay kesi ko ye mail keya hoga , Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted January 5, 2004 Woh khuwab tha, bikhar giya, khiyaal tha mila nahi Magar dil ko kiya huwa, yeh kiyu bujha, pata nahi, Har ek din udaas din , tamaam shab udasiyaan Kisi se kiya bichar gaya , ke jesay kuch bacha nahi! --------------------------------- Mujhe dard-e-dil ka pata na tha mujhe aap kis liye mil gaye Main akelay yun he mazay main tha mujhe aap kis liye mil gaye Yun he apnay apnay safar main gumm kahin door main kahin door tum Chalay jaa rahay thay juda juda mujhe aap kis liye mil gaye ... Na main chaand hoon kisi shaam ka na chiragh hoon kisi baam kaa Main tou rastay ka hoon ek diya mujhe aap kis liye mil gaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted January 5, 2004 main us ko dekh bhi sakti houn aur nahi bhi main us se baat bhi kar sakti houn aur nahi bhi main usey bata bhi sakti houn aur nahi bhi us se kuch poch hi sakti houn per nahi bhi magar agar main us se mil sakti hoti tu kiya hi baat thi usko dekh bhi laiti asani se shaid kahay bagair bhi bohat kuch bata daiti kuch sunay bagair bhi bohat kuch samaj leti magar abhi meri samaj main kuch ata hi nahi.... us se milon tu kaisay milon... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 5, 2004 :weep: aankhon k saagar :weep: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted January 6, 2004 kabhi kabhi yon kayun hota hai chehra koi hota hai aur kisi chehray ka guman guzarta hai phir chund lamhon ki khatir hum ird gird se cut jatay hain yadon ka kush rang jahanoun main but jatay hain na mausam ka hosh hota hai kabhi kabhi yon kayun hota hai -jabar jameel- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 6, 2004 oh very nice adil n Fati... Shabo ??? Dont Dear.. !! Give me BIG smile.... n b happy Always!! :hi: For You My Dearest Friend Shabo!! Koi Tou Hai Koi tou hai... jo mera rasta rokey khara hai... warna! main kabhi ka chal para hota.. kisi anjaan manzil ko Koi tou hai... jo mujh ko yaad rakhta hai duaon main... warna! main keh jis per ziist kay lamhaat bhari hoon kay jis kay dil kay ghaoo itne gherey itney kari hoon vo phir bhi zindagi ki bheer main shamil ho, zinda ho... Koi tou hai... jo mujh ko dobnay say rouk leta hai... warna ziist ki kashti bhanwar main phans kay kab ki gharq-e-dariya ho chuki hoti Koi tou hai... magar yeh kash main bhi jaan sakta kay kisey meri zaroorat hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kidman 0 Posted January 7, 2004 hello, I am Fahd Danish. A new Member of Coolyar, dont know much about this website but I like the topics and I love Shairi but write now I am sharing with you all a very good song of Ahmed Jahanzaib, I really enjoyed this song hope you will like it too Dil ki dhadkan kehti hai aaj kuch hone wala hai Mere huzoor aaj zaroor kuch Daal Mai Kaala Hai Sehmi huwi hai har nazar jaane kya hoga yeh kise khabar Oh! deewaney mere nishaane honge tere dil par Aankh milaayi aankho se haath tere haath mai daala hai Mere hazoor aaj zaroor Kuch Daal Mai Kaala Hai Behke huwe hai mere kadam baanhon mai le le mujhe hamdam Yeh Ishaara tujhe dobaara hoga na phir mere sanam Ab teri marzi kya dekh maine sab ko taala hai Mere hazoor aaj zaroor Kuch Daal Mai Kaala Hai Tum you mujhe choona nahi tumne mujhe abhi jaana nahi Door rehna mujhse na kehna woh saari baatein kabhi Chor do tum un baaton ko yeh sab kuch to bahaana hai Mere hazoor aaj zaroor Kuch Daal Mai Kaala Hai Dil ki dhadkan kehti hai aaj kuch honey wala hai Mere hazoor aaj zaroor Kuch Daal Mai Kaala Hai :inlove: :hi: Fahd. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 7, 2004 Salaam all :hi: Soooo sweet of u NaDaN thanks I loved the shairi!! :hi: Hi Fahd n welcome to the shairi forum.. thanks for taking part!! ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhane ke liye aa aa phir se mujhe choor ke jaane ke liye aa Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 7, 2004 salam all of u guyss :) :hi: 1 of all so kind of u nadan for ur sweet words ...ma pleasure ... :) ...shabnam jie i m perfectly cool now ... woh kya hia k kuch dinon tak meri apney friends se bataon main och neech ho gayee aur phr us baat par thora locha ho gaya dan meri life kie wat lag gayee lakin its fine now.. maine sab ko JADOO KIE JHAPIII di .... wesey thanx for ur dat mail :) ...well done all of u guyss superb poetry post kie hia sab ne.. SHABASH :dKITAB-E-ZINDAGI " KITAB-E-ZINDAGI...!!!!! Kitab-e-zindagi ka wo mera khubsurat baab thaa Youn harf harf parha jaisey wo mera nisaab thaa Sar-e-raah wo mujhey choor ker jo kise aur ka ho lia Wohi shaaks jisey chaha main nay behisaab thaa ...!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 7, 2004 Thanks Shabo n Umair :flower: Kabhi Tum Aaina Daikho Tou Apnay Aap Say Nazrain Choura Laina Kay Akser Baivafa Logoon Ko Jub Wo Aaina Daikhain Tou Aankhain Choore Lagti Hain......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Salamz to all:hi:, i am new user of community and all this is quite new for me......i Rabt kis say tha kissay,kis ka shanasa kon tha sheher bhar tanha tha lekin mujh sa tanha kon tha Mein Samander tha mager weraan tha sahra ki tarha Merey ghar tak chal k aata aesa pyasa kon tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Salaam NaDaN n Umair :hi: Nice poetry u both Molajut> Salaam :hi: ji aiyaan nu.. aap humari mehfil mein tashreef laiey humarey liay fakhar ki baat hai.. u r very welcome here and I hope u participate regularly with ur lovely collection of poetry!!!! Aakh jab band kiyaa kartey hain Saamane aap huaa kartey hain Aap jaisa hee mujhey lagta hai Khwaab mein jis se mila kartey hain Tuu agar chhor k jataa hai to kya Haadsey roz hua kartey hain Naam un ka na koiee un ka pata Loog jo dil mein raha kartey hain Hamane 'rahi' ka chalan sikhaa hai Hum akeley hee chala kartey hain Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
anjna_rahi 0 Posted January 8, 2004 (edited) Silsiley yeh bhi ajeeb hote hain Ghum unko bhi naseeb hote hain Log jo khush naseeb hote hain Hota hai ek hi koi apna Warna saarey raqeeb hote hain Daulat-e-zindagi ki khuwaish hai Log kitne ghareeb hote hain Zakhm hum ko jo atta kerte hain Wohi dil ke tabeeb hote hain Hum ko dushman samajh rahe hain wohi Jo humare habeeb hote hain Dilon mein dard chupaney waley Khowahishon k saleeb hote hain Ishq main mar ke bhi fana na hue Silsiley yeh bhi ajeeb hote hain Edited January 8, 2004 by anjna_rahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Salamz to all fellows:hi: this is my first message on the community page hope u like this.:inlove: kya hoa un waadoon ka Jo karte rahe saari umer Aik pal mein badal gaye Daye gaye hazaroon gham Hum say koi khata na hoi Kis baat ki thi yeh saza Dil bhar gaya shayad Yeh to koi bahana na hoa Sab kuch maana tumhaye Sab kuch samjha tumhaye Itni chahatoon kaye hotaye hoye Woh raqeeb hi pasand aaya tumhaye Kya kya dukh na diyay us naye Kaise kaise zakhm diyay us naye Phir bhi ike pathar dil sanam hi bhaya tumhaye Jaataye jaataye palat kar bhi na dekha tum naye In aankhoon ka num hoona na dekha tum naye Palat kar dekh hi liya hota agar Aik aas to rehti jeenaye ki hamein Woh zindagi jis kaye liyay apna aap bhola baitaye Us ka wajood hi mita diya pal mein Badduwa kar bhi nahin saktaye Dukh tumhaye daye bhi nahin saktaye Laikin kya karein afsoos Doosroon ko dukh dainaye Khude khush reh bhi nahin saktaye. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Tum lakh chupao sene men akhsass hamari chahat ka dil jab bhi tumhra dharka hai , awaz yahha tak aaei hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 8, 2004 :hi: nice poetry! anjna_rahi > welcome here :hi: Molajut> That is ur SECOND post :P zulam karo ya sitam karo hum gila nahin kartay khizan main phool yakinun khila nahin kartay khak main mila do hum ko magar yaad rakhna hum jaise loog dobara mila nahin kartay Zindagi Key Safar Mein Kisi Ko Itna Mat Chaho K Woh Tumhari Chahton Ka Qatil Aur Wafaon Ka Sodagar Ban Jaye!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Mangi thei Faqatt tujh say aik zindagi ki bheek ye kab kaha thaa mujh ko musalsal aazab dey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 8, 2004 thanx nadan n shabnam :) :hi: hey welcome here molajut :y: nice stuff all of u guyss shabash bohut khoob yar :) ab kuch hamari taraf se ;)hosla to de "manzil na de chiragh na de hosla to de tinke ka hee sahee mugar asra to de main ne ye kub kaha k mere huq main ho jawab lekin khamosh q hain tooo koi faisla to de tinke ka hee sahee mugar asra to de busan main tere naam pe khata rha fareb mere khuda kahan hain too apna pata to de tinke ka hee sahee mugar asra to de beshaq mere naseeb pe rukh apna ikhteyar lekin mere naseeb main kia hain bata to de tinke ka hee sahee mugar asra to de manzil na de chiragh na de hosla to de tinke ka hee sahee mugar asra to de Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
