Asim 0 Posted April 10, 2005 I read it somewhere and felt like sharing with u all, bcoz i have never contributed in this section :P lemme know wht u think of it. Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay To Shayed Hum Bhi Apna Rasta Tabdeel Kar Letay Agar Hum Waqiaa Kam Hoslaa Hotay Muhabbat Mein Marz Bharne Se Pehlay Dawa Tabdeel Kar Letay Tumharay Sath Chalne Per Jo Dil Raazi Nahin Hota Bohat Pehlay Hum Apna Faisala Tabdeel Kar Letay Tumhari Tarah Jeenay Ka Hunar Aata to Phir Shayed Makaan Apna wohi Rakhtay Pata Tabdeel Kar Letay Judaai Bhi Na Hoti Zindagi Bhi Sahal Ho Jati Jo Ek Dusray Se Masla Tabdeel Kar Letay Bohat Dundlaa Geya Hai Yaadoon Ki Rim Jhim Mein Dil Saada Woh Mil Jata To Hum Bhi Aaina Tabdeel Kar Letay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted April 10, 2005 SALAM N WELLCOME HERE ASIM NICE TO SEE U HERE .. U KNOW I WAS LIKE THIS :o ASIM AUR EDAY SHEIR-O-SHAEREE SECTION MAIN .. WELLL ..... KEEP SHEARING WITH US. TAKE CARE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted April 10, 2005 :D yes its strange... i was like that also :P while i was postin this :) yes i sure do hope to be regular in this section sharing stuff Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted April 10, 2005 ok nice ..... waiting . :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuskanKhan 0 Posted April 10, 2005 :o :o :o :o Asim bhai :o woh bhi shair-o-shaire secation main woh bhi poetry kay saath lagta ha Asim bhai aap nay apni ghazal ki is line pay amal kiya ha Makaan Apna wohi Rakhtay Pata Tabdeel Kar Letay Makaan tu wohi ha CY ....haan pata zaroor tabdeel hogaya ha :D good poetry :) next time bhi ghalti say shair-o-shaire ka rukh kar ligea ga :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted April 10, 2005 MuskanKhan> yes ur right shaid ishi line per amal hu gya hai ( ghalti se :P :D ) aap ne tu meri contribution ki tashreeh aur siaq-o-sabaq bi likh daala :P mazeed ye ke us ko meray yahan aane se tasbeeh bi de di :) Yes i will try my best to contribute more... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuskanKhan 0 Posted April 11, 2005 Asim bhai >> itna achi tashree karnay pay kia aap nay tareef kee ha ....ya actually woh line realy aap ki yahan contributation pay fit aarahe ha :D zaroor zaroor :P ...waisay aap ka poetry collection bohat acah ha :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted April 12, 2005 I read it somewhere and felt like sharing with u all, bcoz i have never contributed in this section :Plemme know wht u think of it. Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay To Shayed Hum Bhi Apna Rasta Tabdeel Kar Letay Agar Hum Waqiaa Kam Hoslaa Hotay Muhabbat Mein Marz Bharne Se Pehlay Dawa Tabdeel Kar Letay Tumharay Sath Chalne Per Jo Dil Raazi Nahin Hota Bohat Pehlay Hum Apna Faisala Tabdeel Kar Letay Tumhari Tarah Jeenay Ka Hunar Aata to Phir Shayed Makaan Apna wohi Rakhtay Pata Tabdeel Kar Letay Judaai Bhi Na Hoti Zindagi Bhi Sahal Ho Jati Jo Ek Dusray Se Masla Tabdeel Kar Letay Bohat Dundlaa Geya Hai Yaadoon Ki Rim Jhim Mein Dil Saada Woh Mil Jata To Hum Bhi Aaina Tabdeel Kar Letay :o Asim :P asim waisay yah poetry mein nay hi tumhain send ki thi na :P bhool gaye kia :P achi hai I love that......keep sharing :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted April 12, 2005 :o Asim :Pasim waisay yah poetry mein nay hi tumhain send ki thi na :P bhool gaye kia :P achi hai I love that......keep sharing :) bhool gai? aap ne mera email address apni mailing list main se kub ka nikaal diya hai :( and i did not got this one from you... it was posted by my student at the department forum and i liked it so i posted it here too :) waise ... will u consider me adding to the list again? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted April 12, 2005 bhool gai? aap ne mera email address apni mailing list main se kub ka nikaal diya hai :(and i did not got this one from you... it was posted by my student at the department forum and i liked it so i posted it here too :) waise ... will u consider me adding to the list again? :o Asim ji aap nay asia kasiay soch lia ji u r still in my buddy list........ might i forgot to mail u... :( balqay aaj kal mails bhi kam hi kerti haun ji aap socha rahay ho gay..main nay Syra kay signature Ura diay....Syra nay mera address ura dia yahi soch rahay ho na :P hum samander ki tarhan apna zarf wasee rakhtay hain jee....... so no need to request ji :P kehtay hain na Barishun say dosti achi nahi faraz kacha tera makaan hai, kuch tou khyaal ker. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted April 12, 2005 nahi aisa kuch nahi sooch raha hoon main... thanx for re-adding bcoz i loved ur forwarded emails but tell me one thing ... is ur nick barish :P jis se doosti achi nahi :D lolz and what is the uncle sam doing after the shair? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NInA 2 Posted April 12, 2005 Keep it up Asim. keep sharing the good stuff..!! :~) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted April 13, 2005 Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay To Shayed Hum Bhi Apna Rasta Tabdeel Kar Letay Agar Hum Waqiaa Kam Hoslaa Hotay Muhabbat Mein Marz Bharne Se Pehlay Dawa Tabdeel Kar Letay Tumharay Sath Chalne Per Jo Dil Raazi Nahin Hota Bohat Pehlay Hum Apna Faisala Tabdeel Kar Letay Tumhari Tarah Jeenay Ka Hunar Aata to Phir Shayed Makaan Apna wohi Rakhtay Pata Tabdeel Kar Letay Judaai Bhi Na Hoti Zindagi Bhi Sahal Ho Jati Jo Ek Dusray Se Masla Tabdeel Kar Letay Bohat Dundlaa Geya Hai Yaadoon Ki Rim Jhim Mein Dil Saada Woh Mil Jata To Hum Bhi Aaina Tabdeel Kar Letay Wowwwwwwwwww zaberdast Asim bhai.......pheli sharing he itni zaberdast..its mean ur zoooq of shairi is Goooooooood..so keep sharing..... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted April 13, 2005 nahi aisa kuch nahi sooch raha hoon main...thanx for re-adding bcoz i loved ur forwarded emails but tell me one thing ... is ur nick barish :P jis se doosti achi nahi :D lolz and what is the uncle sam doing after the shair? well Thnx Asim..that u loved only my Mails :P hahah anyways ji my name is barish so dosti zara daihaan say kerna....kahin aap per hi baras jaun aur rahi baat uncle sam ki.......woh tou aap hona aik song yaad aya hai............ teray chahray say nazaer hatti nahi kia hum kerai......... :music: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted April 13, 2005 Barish say yaad ayee aik poem....this is for ur poetry section...and i will send it to u personally too ok so enjoy this one I love it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted April 13, 2005 Pretty Little Girl> thankx satan :P :D Talaash> yes i will try to keep sharing in here... thanx for the appreciation :) Syra> me uncle sam ? :P i did not knew that... waise kya main itna burra hoon ke uncle sam bana diya? koi budla tu nahi laina kiya? bcoz ppl are sick of uncle sam :P :D thanx for posting the shairs here.. bcoz i just sent u a request to send me the enlarged verion :) bcoz the one u sent me via email is hard to read. thanx ppl, see ya. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted April 14, 2005 tou baba asim,,,,,,,,,,attachment dowlaod ker lain na........aqal bari nahi lagti aap ka case main :P waisay u know america ka old name bhi UnCLE SAM hai ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted April 25, 2005 asim u r not there anyways this one I just read ...... considering this a best one for ur section :) hope u will like it BAARISH !!!!! baarish ki wo ik raat kabhi halki halki kabhi yuk dum teeze wo baarish mein bheegna aas pas ke lehratey darakhtoon ka naha jana pholoon ka nikhar jana aur !!!!!achanaq se kisi ka samney aa jana haya se palkoon ka jhuk jana teeze chalti hawaon mein aanchal ka na sambhalna khuli zulfoon ka bikharna motiyoun si bondoon ka perna wo un ki nazroon se bach ke sharam se khud se ulajhna wo waqat ka teezi se beet jana wo humara zindagi ki uljhanoon mein khoo jana wo guzarta waqat yaad ata hai kisi undekhe sapney ki tarha wo baarish ki bondein abhi tuk hawaon mein mojud hain kisi seep mein rakhey moti ki tarha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
