Kiran 2 Posted November 6, 2005 (edited) ABH AUR TAB..! KAHA US NE MUJHE TAB TUM SE MOHABBAT THI KAHA MAIN NE MUJHE AAJ BHI TUM SE MOHABBAT HAI WOH TAB KI BAAT KERTI HAI MAIN ABH KI BAAT KERTA HOON MAGAR JO FASLA ABH AUR TAB KE DERMIYAN HAI WOH HUM DONNO SE MILKE SIMETA JA SAKTA NAHI WOH ABH TAK AA NAHI SAKTI MAIN TAB TAK JAA NAHI SAKTA...! Edited November 6, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 7, 2005 very nice kiran ...zaroor yeh mainy he tumhain sunaye ho gee werna tumhara Zoq itna Alla kahan llolzzz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 7, 2005 Nawazish aap ne itni bhi tareef kerdi to ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted November 7, 2005 VERY NICE KIRAN BUT KIS KAY LIAY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 7, 2005 laraib thx mabadulat k liye aur kis k liye <_< Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted November 7, 2005 laraib thx mabadulat k liye aur kis k liye <_< 158849[/snapback] WHO MABADAULAT :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 7, 2005 mabadulat means myself laraib :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted November 7, 2005 mabadulat means myself laraib :) 158889[/snapback] ITNI NICE POEM KISI KO DEIN YA USS KAY NAAM KAR DEIN :luv: YA PHIR MUJHAY DAY DEIN MEIN KISI AUR KO PAAS KAR DOON :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 11, 2005 itni achi cheezen faltoo logon ko nahin dii jatein...... hehehehe hmmm well, very nice kiran.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 14, 2005 vertosis_ather>Faltoo kon hai btw ;) well thx for liking it :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 14, 2005 Faltoo Laraib hai na..... :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 14, 2005 Ather>khaberdar she is my student :angry2: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 14, 2005 And me....? :( sahi hai bhai sahi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 14, 2005 (edited) hmm u r friend :) don't b sad :flower: Edited November 14, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 14, 2005 hurrayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! thankx a lot...... hahahaha Laraib kachi ho gayiii aapkiiiiiiiiiiii..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 14, 2005 (edited) Ather> abh k larai baar baar laraib ko chirha rahe ho Edited November 14, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 15, 2005 hahahaha maza aata hai.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 15, 2005 chalo koi baat nahi that's friendship :) agar laraib ko bura nahi lagta to ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 20, 2005 Tujhay Khaber He Nahi.... Teray faraq kay lamhay shumaar kartay howay Bikhar gay hain tera intazaar kartay howay Tou main bhi khush hoon koi us say ja kar kah day Ager wo khush hay mujhay bey qaraar kartay howay Main muskurata howa aainay main ubhroon ga Woh ro paray ge achanak singhar kartay howay Tujhay khaber he nahi koe toot gia hay Mohabbatoon ko bohat paedaar kartay howay Woh kah rahe the sumander nahi hai aankhoon main Main un main doob gia ahtabaar kartay howay Mujhay khaber thi kah ab loot kar na aaonga Tuj ko yaad kia dard paar kartay howay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 21, 2005 Kirannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.............. what is this hannn?!!! very good yar......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 21, 2005 oho bari udas udas aur dard bhari shairiyan ho rahi hain kiran kya bat hai hmmmmmmm ???? waise very good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 21, 2005 Ather>it's ghazal aur kiya waise i don't sub-standard words :) like yar i hope u won't mind :flower: Majid>aray aur bhi ghum hain zamane main Mohabbat k siwa :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 22, 2005 Tujhay Khaber He Nahi....Teray faraq kay lamhay shumaar kartay howay Bikhar gay hain tera intazaar kartay howay Tou main bhi khush hoon koi us say ja kar kah day Ager wo khush hay mujhay bey qaraar kartay howay Main muskurata howa aainay main ubhroon ga Woh ro paray ge achanak singhar kartay howay Tujhay khaber he nahi koe toot gia hay Mohabbatoon ko bohat paedaar kartay howay Woh kah rahe the sumander nahi hai aankhoon main Main un main doob gia ahtabaar kartay howay Mujhay khaber thi kah ab loot kar na aaonga Tuj ko yaad kia dard paar kartay howay 160678[/snapback] very nice kiran...... .... mujhko jinhone qatal kiya hai...koi unhe batlaye..... meri laash ki pehlu mein woh apna khanjar bhool gaye... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 22, 2005 (edited) BHOLTA KON HAI? WAQT KE GHAO KO HIJAR KE TUND TUFAN KI BEYAKEEN LEHAR MAIN WISAL KE KHUWAB KI DOBTI NAOO KO BHOLTA KON HAI BHOLTA KON HAI APNE KATEEL KE KATEEL KHADO KHAL KO DUKH UTHATE DINNO AUR MAHO SAAL KO BHOLTA KON HAI BHOLTA KON HAI UMER KI SHAKH PER KHILNE WALI US AWALEE SHAM KO BESABAB JO LAGA US ILZAM KO PHIR TERE NAAM KO BHOLTA KON HAI?!? Edited November 22, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 23, 2005 wow!!!! zabardast good going... keep it up.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites