ibtisaam 0 Posted March 4, 2006 Ek gulab Tha Bara Udaas Tha Rang bhi us ka tha kuch ora ora sa Shabnam ke ansoo rawan they us k Dil tha us ka kuch bujha bujha sa Bahar ka tha mosam phir bhi na khila tha Dali se tha who apni kuch jhuka jhuka sa Main ne jho dekha usse Pass jha ke pocha usse Kyu hai Udaas to? Kyon kerta ha dil barbad to? Kis ko kerta ha yaad to? Yeh sun ker who rone laga Shabnam ke ansoo se moon dhone laga Aur rote rote bas yeh kehne laga Mera yaar mujh ko chor gaya hai Mera pyaar mujh se muh mor gaya hai Ab main kis ke liye khil jaoon Ab main kis ke liye khushboo mahkaoon Mujhe koun apne dil se lagaye ga Mujh ko koun apni sansoon may basaye ga Mera chaman ojar gaya hai Mera yaar mujh se bichar gaya hai Bas ab to her lamhe us ki yaad hai Bas baqarari hai, tarap hai faryad hai Mujh ko koye mere yaar se mila de Mujh ko koye mera pyar lauta de Woh ayey ga tho khil jaoon gi main Apni zindagi se mil jaoon gi main Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
middnight*****dream 0 Posted March 4, 2006 SALAMZ!!! realy niceeeee i realy like it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted March 4, 2006 w.salam.... bohot Shukriyaa.....mid... :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
middnight*****dream 0 Posted March 4, 2006 B) u r welcome!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted March 4, 2006 Mujh ko koye mere yaar se mila deMujh ko koye mera pyar lauta de Woh ayey ga tho khil jaoon gi main Apni zindagi se mil jaoon gi main ibti siso great 1..................... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuhammadAmjadIqbal 0 Posted March 5, 2006 AUA WR WB Ibtee! Wow... What more could I say? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted March 6, 2006 salam.... amjad.....grrrr8 to have u in my post... :flower: :flower: Shukriyaa for ur reply....... :flower: thanx to everyone.... :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted March 6, 2006 wow!!!! ibti.........u r sweet yar.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted March 6, 2006 good poetry madam ji............ :P :) :D but kis kay liay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted March 6, 2006 ibti its 4 me na............ :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted March 6, 2006 salam.... Shukriyaa ather :flower: laraib>>>>>juzzzz for u sweeeeeeet heart :P :flower: Anoushy....>>>achhi zabardasti hai aapki... :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aryaan 0 Posted March 7, 2006 (edited) Bohat khoob Ibtisaam.... Lajawaab... Edited March 7, 2006 by Aryaan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted March 7, 2006 salam... bohot bohot Shukriyaa Aryaan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites