adilkhan 0 Posted October 26, 2003 salammmm all :hi: tarteeb zindagi koi mushkil tu nahi thei lekin qesmat nay ham ko khath he toty hoy deye , Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted October 26, 2003 ab apnay faislay per khud ulajhnay kayun lagi houn zara si baat per itna bhikarnay kayun lagi houn wo jis mausam ki ab tak muntazir ankhain theen meri is mausam se ab main itna darnay kayun lagi houn mujhay nadeeda ruston per safr karnay ke shouq bhi tha tahkan paon se lipti hai to marnay kayun lagi houn main jis ko kum se kum mahsoos karna chahti thi uski baat ko itna samajnay kayun lagi houn jo meray dil ki galiyon se kabhi guzra nahi tha ab apnay hath se khat us ko likhnay kayun lagi houn badn ke rakh tak bhi rastoon mai nan bachay gi barusti barishon main yon sulaghnay kayun lagi houn wohi suraj hai dukh ka phir ya aisa kiya hoa hai main puthar thi tu akhir ab phigalnay kayun kagi houn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 26, 2003 hey adil kahan tha :hi: w b nice poetry fati :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted October 26, 2003 hey adil kahan tha :hi: w b nice poetry fati :) salam all :hi: hello umair ji yahhi thaa yar , app sunao kesay ho ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted October 27, 2003 WELCOME BACK ADIL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 29, 2003 maanind-e-sham'a majlis-e-shab ashkabaar paayaa al qissaa "Meer" ko hamne be iKHtiyaar paayaa shahar-e-dil ek muddat ujRaa basaa GamoN meiN aaKHir ujaaR denaa uskaa qaraar paayaa itnaa na dil se milte na dil ko kho ke rahate jaisaa kiyaa thaa hamne vaisaa hee yaar paayaa kyaa a'itbaar yaaN kaa phir usko KHvaar dekhaa jisne jahaaN meiN aakar kuchh a'itbaar paayaa aahoN ke sh'ole jis jaa uThe haiN "Meer" se shab vaaN jaa ke subaH dekhaa musht-e-Gubaar paayaa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted October 30, 2003 wah wah sleepy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 1, 2003 nice poetries u both sleepy n sanober :) main lafzon mein kuch bhi izhaar nahi karta "main lafzon mein kuch bhi izhaar nahi karta iska matlab yeh nahi k main tujhe pyar nahi karta chahta hoon main tujhe aaj bhi per teri soch mein apna waqt bekaar nahi karta tamasha na ban jaaye kahin mohabbat meri isi liye apny dard ko namoodaar nahi karta jo kuch mila hai usi mein khush hoon main tere liye khuda se takraar nahi karta par kuch to baat hai teri fitrat mein zalim warna main tujhe chahne ki khata bar bar nahi karta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted November 2, 2003 wah wah bohut khoob umair ji . aap na toh puri mehfil loot li. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 5, 2003 musafir guzarty rehty hain rusty udher he rehty hain, raat bher kun jagty ho hadsy to hoty rehty hain, jany kun chode jatyn hain dil k jo qareeb hoty hain, ajj ankh purnamm kis baat pa, log to bicherty rehty hain, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 5, 2003 thanx jaan ... nice 1 innoncent urs tooo :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 6, 2003 thanx jaan ,and innocent4nu bouhat khoub Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 6, 2003 us ny muj jhoot ki tehmat bandhee thee shaid wo sucha aor main jhoota.......tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 wah wah sanober ..... bohut khoob rahee app kie shaireee :) nice shiar adil urs too :) ..... ab mian kuch arz karitaa hoon ;) Mohabbat Kisay Kehtay hain? "jinhain khud pas-e-wafa nahin woh auj itratay hain inhain kia pata dil-o-mohabbat kisay kehtay hain woh jo bat-ba-bat pa uth ka auron ko bulatay hain inhain kion bataon ka salika-e-shikva kisay kehtay hain manzilon ka asar jub honay lagtay hain madham safar main insan reh jaye tanha to sath chorna kisay kehtay hain rafaqatoon ki daur main aksar hui hum sa bhool chook usay kia pata mohabbat main maf karna kisay kehtay hain jao ja kar apni yadoon ko tatolo aur daikh lo humnava ja ka main kahan kahan roya aur tera manana kisay kehtay hain is tarha sa to shayad koi pathar bhi tera sath na day kabhi shayad ka tujhay bhi ehsaas ho tanhai kisay kehtay hain mujhay har roz har lamha tarpaya tum na rulaya tum na agar yeah zulm nahin mujh pa to jafa kissay kehtay hian woh kehtay hain ka hum sa naraz bhi nahin hain yoon uth ka jana aur wapis na ana 'umair' kisay kehtay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 wah wah sanober ..... bohut khoob rahee app kie shaireee :) nice shiar adil urs too :) ..... ab mian kuch arz karitaa hoon ;) Mohabbat Kisay Kehtay hain? "jinhain khud pas-e-wafa nahin woh auj itratay hain inhain kia pata dil-o-mohabbat kisay kehtay hain woh jo bat-ba-bat pa uth ka auron ko bulatay hain inhain kion bataon ka salika-e-shikva kisay kehtay hain manzilon ka asar jub honay lagtay hain madham safar main insan reh jaye tanha to sath chorna kisay kehtay hain rafaqatoon ki daur main aksar hui hum sa bhool chook usay kia pata mohabbat main maf karna kisay kehtay hain jao ja kar apni yadoon ko tatolo aur daikh lo humnava ja ka main kahan kahan roya aur tera manana kisay kehtay hain is tarha sa to shayad koi pathar bhi tera sath na day kabhi shayad ka tujhay bhi ehsaas ho tanhai kisay kehtay hain mujhay har roz har lamha tarpaya tum na rulaya tum na agar yeah zulm nahin mujh pa to jafa kissay kehtay hian woh kehtay hain ka hum sa naraz bhi nahin hain yoon uth ka jana aur wapis na ana 'umair' kisay kehtay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 7, 2003 jitny khwab achy hoty hai.. sab khwab tery hoty hian.. jitny ankay nam hoti hian sab meri ankain hoti hian.. jinty azab zameen per uterttya hia.. sab azab mery hoty hian jitny herf achy hoty hain.. sab tery name k hoty hain.. jitny batian man kerta hoon sab teri batian hoti hain.. jinty phoolon sy khusbho ati hai sab tery hat choye hoty hain.. tujy shaid phir be bhorosa nhee k ankh meri per sapny tery hoty hain.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 8, 2003 Bujh gaey diay piyar k! "Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye Bewafa Hum Nahin Bewafa Tum Nahin To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye Bewafa Hum Nahin Bewafa Tum Nahin To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye Bewafa Hum Nahin Bewafa Tum Nahin To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale Duniya Jo Pooche To Kya Hum Kahen Koi Yeh Humko Samjaade Thes Lagi To Pal Mein Toot Gaye Sheshe Ke The Kya Sab Vaade Jaata Hai Koi Kyon Sapno Ko Thukraake Payega Yeh Dil Kya Kisi Ko Batake Chalte Chalte Raakh Hum Bin Jale Ho Gaye Bujh Gaye Diye Pyaar Ke Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye Doob Gaya Hai Kaise Dard Mein Dil Aansoon Bhari Hai Ab Aankhen Tanhaiyon Ki Jo Ruth Aa Gayi Ujdi Hui Hai Sab Raahein Socha Tha Paayenge Dono Ek Manzil Ko Raahein Jo Badli To Tumhi Batado Chalte Chalte Gum Kahan Kaple Ho Gaye Kho Gaye Kahan Raste Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye Bewafa Hum Nahin Bewafa Tum Nahin To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 8, 2003 hello ma all new friends its nice to be here wid such a nice jocund company sanober jie aap ki poetry to A1 hai keep that up mein bohut lucky hoon k aisay shairon se meraa paala pada hai very wel done agin all of u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 10, 2003 thanx uamir and welcome arsi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 10, 2003 hey sanober where were u gone :( .... anywaz welcome back now :).. nice poetry .... arsii show ur guts of poetry here ;) filhal meri taraf se kcuh arz hia.... :) Agar hum na hote to "Agar hum na hote to Tumhare chehre ko kanwal kaun kehte Agar hum na hote to Tumhari batoon ko ghazal kaun kehte Agar hum na hote to Tumhari tasweer ki ibadat kaun karta Agar hum na hote to Tumhein is duniyan mein mohabbat kaun Karta Agar himmat ho tum mein,to eik baar Apna ghongat utha kar dekh lena Agar hum na hote to Tumhare chehre ki ziyarat kaun karta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 10, 2003 kuch nahi uair bus coolyar par aanhia hurah tha zaburdust uamir sleepy and inocent nas arsi welcome here Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 11, 2003 thank u very much sanober jie aap ki bada karam k aap ne response diyaa i will keep that up achaa jie yeh lijiye rainbow colours Red is the anger I feel when I hear of all the unnecessary deaths of innocent creatures, Orange is the shimmering yet bloodstained coat of the distressed tiger, Yellow is the sun peeking through the trees and reflecting off the hunter's bloody knife, Green is the polluted ocean with litter carelessly scattered across the oily surface, Blue is the sadness I suffer from when people take fun out of killing, Indigo is the deserted sky where all the birds have been swept to the floor, where they now lie, lifeless, Violet is the feathers steadily moulting from the king of the sky, Black is the dark nothingness when the hunters realize that they have murdered races and races of exotic creatures with the right to live. i hope u would like that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 11, 2003 bohut bohut bohut khoob sanober n arsal u guyss r reall superb :y: ....... aur sanober yar time niikala karo....okkkkk :P LAJAWAB...................:(:( "WO MERE DIL K ZAKHMON KA JAWAB MANGTE RAHE. AUR HAM MUSKURA KAR UNHE LAJAWAB KARET RAHE . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 11, 2003 umair yaar yeh le aur sun tuu dost kisi ka bhi, sitamger na hua thaa auron pe hai woh zulum k mujh pe na hua thaa kesa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 11, 2003 hay nice sanober and umair and u too arsii Share this post Link to post Share on other sites