rukh 25 Posted September 29, 2003 aik tha raja ..aik thee rani donno mer gayee KHATUM kahani very romantic ..very short ..very intrusting :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted September 29, 2003 is main romance kia sensor ho gaya hai :D In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 29, 2003 hahahahahahahah to or kia ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted September 29, 2003 :( PHIR KIA FAYEDA In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 29, 2003 hahaah well said cool meeri as usuall LATE well rukh yaar kiya story hai tumhari ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 30, 2003 phir bhi sidd ko pasand nahi ayee ..:P kiitne simple or achee thee..samjnai ki bat thee ab jo na samjhain to kia kerain :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Waqas 48 Posted September 30, 2003 So the story is over Bechari Nimra ;) Good Work Gals n Guys ab movie par kab kaam shuru ho raha hai :D Waqas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 30, 2003 lo bhi kerlo gal ... waqas ungli (finger) ketwa ker shidoon main shamil hongain..... :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 30, 2003 ahoo aai vee aik tareeqa hay ga apna app dikhan da kai asee vee ithai hay gay:P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 30, 2003 :hi: Hi all u budding authors!! Acha tho Humari Kahani apney ihtetaam thak pahonch gaiee.. nice story writing Rythm OK tho yeh raha humara FIRST DRAFT.. now for the second one:- "ai ladki yeh kin khayalon mey khoiee ho?? jaldi karo sab barthan dhoney k liay parey hain uss k baad khana bhi taiyar karna hai tum ney" .... etc etc :laugh: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 30, 2003 ahoo  aai vee aik tareeqa hay ga  apna app dikhan da kai asee vee ithai hay gay:P :wacko: :wacko: :help: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 30, 2003 oye hoiey k kurriyaan PUNJAB diyaan Rukh ji hun tusi Kiran nu iss gal da matlab v das daiyo ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 30, 2003 MERA MUTLUB YEH THA KAI WAQAS IS TERHA AIK DO SENTENCE LIKH KER YAD DILATAY REHTAY HAIN ... KAI MAIN BHEE HOON YAHAN ... PHIR KIA SAMJHEE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted September 30, 2003 In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 30, 2003 sidd ap kai pass aik hee cap hai os ko bhee sahee sai sir per nahi tikka saktai ..aik to app kai do char bal hain os per bhee itna garoor :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 30, 2003 sidd ap kai pass aik hee cap hai os ko bhee sahee sai sir per nahi tikka saktai ..aik to app kai do char bal hain os per bhee itna garoor :P :laugh: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted September 30, 2003 :hi: Hi all u budding authors!!Acha tho Humari Kahani apney ihtetaam thak pahonch gaiee.. nice story writing Rythm OK tho yeh raha humara FIRST DRAFT.. now for the second one:- "ai ladki yeh kin khayalon mey khoiee ho?? jaldi karo sab barthan dhoney k liay parey hain uss k baad khana bhi taiyar karna hai tum ney" .... etc etc :laugh: Sx shabo phir wahi.. kuch naya socho naa..kuch comedy ya suspense wala kiyoon kay love tu pehli story may tha naa... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 30, 2003 shabo phir wahi.. :hi: Hi Sanum Heyyy nahi PHIR wohi story nahi hogi Yeah sure if any1 can think of a different concept.. tho shuru karo na ;) SUSPENSE.. mmmm sounds good!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted September 30, 2003 NEW STORY raat ka waqt tha..har taraf sanata.door kaheen kotoon kay bhoknay ki awaz arahi thi jo mahool ko ore khoofnak bana rahi thi...sarak bhi weran thi.ajj chand ki 14 thi ore har taraf yeh kahani mashhoor thi k aaj ki raat mal road par ek badroah likalti hay bohat hi khoobsurat larki ki jo kisi car wallay nojawan larkay say lift layti hay ore sobha iski lash jungle may paee jati hay.. Asay may MOHSIN apni car may 70 meter ki raftar say ghar jaa raha tha......... hello shabo dekho manay start tu lay leaa hay ap dekhain...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted October 1, 2003 sidd ap kai pass aik hee cap hai os ko bhee sahee sai sir per nahi tikka saktai ..aik to app kai do char bal hain os per bhee itna garoor :P Ji haan Rukh hamaray paas ek hi cap hai aur wohi cap hum sab ko pehnaatay rehtay hain aap ko bhi tu kaye baar pehnaye hai :P waisay aap khush ho jaye kion ka ab jo naye story sanum nay start ki hai us main aap ka zikar bhi hua sai :P hamarai paas tu phir bhi do char baal hain koi baat nahin bahmi mufahmat say barh jayen gay aap k paas tu woh bhi nahin :P In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted October 1, 2003 aray app to gussa ker gayee :P waissai kuch jamma nahi sidd ji :D sorry sorry sanum story kai beech main intruption ka .. sidd ab nahi kuch bolna .. kion kai mera phir chup rehna mushkil hai ..is ley app hee chup reh jana :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 1, 2003 Nice start to the story Sanum... I will add to it soon ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted October 1, 2003 yeah nice starting... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted October 1, 2003 (edited) Asay may MOHSIN apni car may 70 meter ki raftar say ghar jaa raha tha......... kai aik dum car jhutka kha ker ruk jatee hai ... OH **** mohsin gusay say hath staring per marta hai . .is musebat khanai ko bhi abhi hona .. pata nahi subha kis pagal ki shkal dekhee thee oh nahi nahi maini apnee shkal hee dekhee thee ... .. ab kia keroon petrol khtum ho giya hai ..door door tak kissi insan to kia chunty ka bhi namo nishan nahi ... ammi nai hazar dafa kaha tha petrol pani check ker kai chalna ...per hum LERKAI hotay hee bewakoof hain koi aqal mandoon walee na bat suntai hain na kertai hain... aik dum mohsin kai kanoo main aik cheekh ki awaz atee hai ...... or phir .... ( rukh ur post has been censored... swearing manna hai!!) Edited October 1, 2003 by Shabo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
