Shabo 0 Posted September 13, 2003 Some really good story writing going on here.... Lekin beech mey disagreements kyun aa gaieen? :( If ppl cant continue with the story then plz just read the topic and leave the comments for ppl who wish to contribute with their ideas!! Kiran is NOT taking over the story.. she is participating actively and presenting her ideas for us all to read! So come on u all this is a bit of fun which can be enjoyed by everybody... so dont take it serious ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 Some really good story writing going on here.... Lekin beech mey disagreements kyun aa gaieen? :( If ppl cant continue with the story then plz just read the topic and leave the comments for ppl who wish to contribute with their ideas!! Kiran is NOT taking over the story.. she is participating avtively and presenting her ideas for us all to read! So come on u all this is a bit of fun which can be enjoyed by everybody... so dont take it serious ;) Sx thanks for supporting me shabo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 13, 2003 OoOPs! I M NOT GOOD IN STORY MAKING SHABOO` Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 OoOPs! I M NOT GOOD IN STORY MAKING SHABOO` so what nadan then just leave ur comments :) but try to make it's not such a difficult work or task Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 13, 2003 OoOPs! I M NOT GOOD IN STORY MAKING SHABOO` Story writing is for the "imaginative" ppl but I would have thought u have a good imagination too NaDaN ;) just try and u may surprise urself!! I'm with u Kiran after all iss kahani ka ending bhi tho aap sey sunna hai na :D Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted September 13, 2003 (for ur information wajiha if u didn't read story with full attention) ooops Im Sorrry well, Kiran its not the matter of my attention... I think i missed tht point b4 i went on my immagination ;) now its making me laugh ( mein apni hee story bana rahi thee ) anyways,,, ur contribution is just too GOOD Wajiha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted September 13, 2003 hahahahaha sidd main nahi chorne wali CY bhi tum loog hi to ho jin ki waja se CY pe itni ronak hai warna main kabhi na atti :flower: oh CY Team as well :( ;) oh thx kiran its cooooooool yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar:flower: In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 no need to be thankful it's fact well u r welcome Sidd n wajiha it's ok but i want balanced story as shabo started so we should be careful... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 14, 2003 thanks shabo.. well somebody countinue the story then i will try from my next post! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 thanks shabo..well somebody countinue the story then i will try from my next post! ok nadan... .....Phir yun hota hai ke jaise sadiyon ki musafat ke baad zindagi ne kahin parao (stay) dala hai Nimra abh Sukun se thi abh lagta tha ke woh waqt agay hai jab us se apni naseeb ki khushiyan milne wali hain " HUM BHI MILAIN GI APNE NASIB KI KHUSHIYAN, BAS DEKHA YEH HAI KAB YEH KAMAL HONA HAI..". Nimra dekho beti kon ayya hai... nimra jo apne khayalo main gum thi papa ki awaz pe chunk uthi.."Ji papa" ( kon asakta hai ...) OH....to yeh janab aaj phir agaye....Nimra ne jo Achanak Humran ki Family ko dekha to khushi jaise chupaye nahi chupti thi..... ji nadan it's just for u :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 15, 2003 U r doing soooo well Kiran ;) I think u should continue.. NaDaN may still be thinking :) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 15, 2003 yes u r right!!.. thanks Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 i think shabo we should wait may be she is still making story in her mind.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 15, 2003 actully i have to study the whole story.. jo kay as you gals know i m lazy tu jab pore perh lon ge o i will InshAllha countinue!.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 hahahahaha then leave it nadan tab tak to Nimra ke bache young hojain gain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 15, 2003 :laugh: rite Kiran Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 15, 2003 wohe tu asa na ho na agay ja ker may story ko bilkul he twisted ker don hamran larki or Nimra larka ho..:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 .....abh officially again proposal atta hai HUMRAN ka aur abh ki baar baghair der ke accept ker liya jata hai yahan step mummy dil hi dil main iss shadi ko rokne ki koshish main ser garam hoti hain....yun Humran aur Nimra ka Nikkah confirm hojata hai....aur yun Nimra khuwaboo main din ghuzarne lagte hain.....iss khushi se step mamoo aur ali donno hi jealous hojate hain aur Nimra ka Nikah rokne ke tarike sochte hain..yahan Nikah ki tayariyan zooro shor se horahi hoti hain Nimra aur papa shopping main pura pura din spend ker rahe hote hain.."Nimra utho beta Humran ki mummy ai hain"...Nimra jaldi se fresh hoker papa ke paas jati hai ...aaj ki subha us ke liye naved-e-saher ban ker ai thi aaj woh kisi ke naam se mansoob hone jarahi....aur abhi Humran ki mummy us ke liye Dress leker ai thi ....."kitni haseen lag rahi hai meri chand si beti"...papa ne Nimra ko dulhan ke rop main dekh ker kaha....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted September 15, 2003 Phir joo bhee villian hai woo aa jata hai aur wohee kehta hai joo ussay kehna chayeee u know what i msayin i wont disturb the story SOOOO start from naDan's end MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 Phir joo bhee villian hai woo aa jata hai aur wohee kehta hai joo ussay kehna chayeee  u know what i msayin i wont disturb the story SOOOO start from naDan's end MansOor hey mansoor .... don't disturb my readers... :( ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 15, 2003 haan NaDaN to yeh koun si "naiyi" storyline hogi?? this happens ALL the time on the net :) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 15, 2003 Kiran the story is progressing nicely... wot do u think ab ending ho jani chahiay?? ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 hmmm yeah i think so.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted September 15, 2003 sorry again adat say majboor yeah shadi etni postpone kiyoon hoo rahee hay.fani bhi inteezar may hay.wasay plz osay Nikha parhnay walay MOLVI sahip kay tor par bolvana........:P :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
