rythm 0 Posted September 25, 2003 okk.. main apko kuch cheez batati hoon.. sari posts nahi parh sakti... so kisi aur shair ke nahi likhoongi.. kioonki i wont be sure .. kahin shayad main koi shair repeat na kar doon.. jo shayad kabhi kisi ne pehle bhi iss poetry ke section main bheje hoon.. so.. main koshish karoongi ki sirf apne banaye huay shair .yaa nazmain likhoon.. - Main ne kaha ki main kaun hoon ussne kaha meri jaan ho manoon to tab main ussko jab woh.. Jaan ki tarha chahay mujhko.. Duur na hone de khud se.. Reh na sakay binn mere.. anso jo girre mera to kahay... Moti bana doon issko.. ager woh samajh jaye to phir jaan bhi main doon ussko.. Ager woh samajh jaye to... plz batana .. yeh meri 1st try thhi.. shuru main main ne AZAAD NAZAMS likhi thhi :D (zara easy hoti hai na. kafia mafia nahi milana parta :D) next wali Kal post karoongi... B) RABI" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted September 25, 2003 WAISE meri sari ki sari Shairi.. aur Bla Bla stuff.. main ne mere MOBBY ke liye likhe hain kabhi jab woh naraz hota hai.. to dukhi shairi.. jab normal mood hota hai to normal shairi.. :D hehehe.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted September 28, 2003 Ik bar kaha thha tumne duuri hai pyar ki dushman mere pyar ko mat bhulao ab ao , a bhi jao Khiyaloon main bulatay ho tum bohat yaad atay ho mujhe aise na yad ao ab ao a bhi jao dhuwaan dhuwaan hua hai kahin ag bujh na jaye dil main aag jalao ab ao a bhi jao koi aas hai mann main socho pyas hai tann main iss pyas ko bujhao ab ao a bhi jao Rabia~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted September 28, 2003 kiu hum ko pyar sikhaya thha kiu dil main aan bassa thha tu aey ishq yeh teri ghalti thhi tujhe kaisi baat ki jaldi thhi kaise main rokoon iss dil ko kaise main kahoon sab bhool gaya uss ne yeh kaha mujhe yaad na kar aey ishq mujhe barbad na kar tere binn to main .. kuch bhi nahi kash mil jaye tu mujhko kabhi iss dil main hai faryad abhi ki ati hai teri yad abhi Rabia~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 28, 2003 OHHHHHHH yeh main kya dekh raha hoon:d...i don believe dat u r dat much good shairaaa.......yar zabardast ab main tumharee poetry kie kya tareef karoon...u know main khud kabhie poetry nahien create karita hoon...saree copy paste karita hoon;)..wesey yeh aapas kie baat hia kise ko batana nahien:lol:...nice poetry rabya coooooooolllllll.........aur han aik sawal ka jawab do ab......yeh MOBBY koun hia???????????????????????????????????? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyatti 0 Posted September 30, 2003 B) nice posts keeo it up!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 8, 2003 The one and only one and the great one just only says you are absouloutly great one just like me well keep it up .shall we contribute in this? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 13, 2003 OHHHHHHH yeh main kya dekh raha hoon:d...i don believe dat u r dat much good shairaaa.......yar zabardast ab main tumharee poetry kie kya tareef karoon...u know main khud kabhie poetry nahien create karita hoon...saree copy paste karita hoon;)..wesey yeh aapas kie baat hia kise ko batana nahien:lol:...nice poetry rabya coooooooolllllll.........aur han aik sawal ka jawab do ab......yeh MOBBY koun hia???????????????????????????????????? Mobby.. is my fiance... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 14, 2003 :hi: Hi rythm Awwwwwwww such lovely poetry.. Mobby sure is a lucky guy ;) I love ur first post... thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts with us Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted October 14, 2003 niceeeee efforts dear rythm... but it seems u r at first stage but anyway it's superb thoughts n ...... slightly romantic... well i'd contribute here .... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 14, 2003 Thnxxxxxx... kiran and shabo... :flower: yes kiran .. i m really at first stage.. but i think that i m not that bad :D RaBbIe" :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 14, 2003 RYTHEM G ab aagay bhi to kuch bolay na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 15, 2003 RYTHEM G ab aagay bhi to kuch bolay na main bolti hi rehti hoon.. wht do mean by agay bhi bolain ;) mujhe agay peechay bolne ki adat nahi hai :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 16, 2003 kafie achey wichar hia rabiya app ke Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 17, 2003 kafie achey wichar hia rabiya app ke konse wichaaar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 17, 2003 aik aur shair.. Teri khawahish iss dil main parwaan charhay dekhoon na tujhko, sooli par yeh jaan charhay :( har damm mujhko pyar hi karte rehna tum.. koshish karna , mere dil ka maan barhay RaBbIe" :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 18, 2003 loag chup chap ha hurgiz inhay ba his na kaho shidata-e ghum sa bhi ban jatay hay pathar chahray Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 18, 2003 so nice shair rabbya :) zabardast...aur sleepism too kya jawabi karawayee ke hisab se shairee karita hia kya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tanhaye 0 Posted October 19, 2003 hi its me tanhye har rastay kay pathar say taqrana hay hamari kismat; ik tara bawafa hona koi bari bat nhin pray fore me may bhut tense hoo plzz my name is sana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tanhaye 0 Posted October 19, 2003 plzzzzz yar pray for me mara aik masla hay jo hal nhin ho raha jo koi bhi mari is bat ko parahay maray liay dua kayyy aallha us kay bhi maslay hal karay ga kionkay jo koi bhi apni zat kay ilawa kisi our kay liay dua karta hay aalha us ki bhi sunta hya so plzzz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted October 19, 2003 zabardast shairi rythm. mobby is lucky . he will b able to listen from u . gr8 poetry.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 20, 2003 plzzzzz yar pray for me mara aik masla hay jo hal nhin ho raha jo koi bhi mari is bat ko parahay maray liay dua kayyy aallha us kay bhi maslay hal karay ga kionkay jo koi bhi apni zat kay ilawa kisi our kay liay dua karta hay aalha us ki bhi sunta hya so plzzz sure i will apnay lia to kabool nahi hoty isi lia ab ma doosro ka lia hi dua karta hu an i promise i will Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 20, 2003 plzzzzz yar pray for me mara aik masla hay jo hal nhin ho raha jo koi bhi mari is bat ko parahay maray liay dua kayyy aallha us kay bhi maslay hal karay ga kionkay jo koi bhi apni zat kay ilawa kisi our kay liay dua karta hay aalha us ki bhi sunta hya so plzzz yes inshAllah sab problems theek ho jayengi.. try to be happy... Allah miaan par poora poora yaqeen karo.. ki usske ilawa aur kon sunay ga humari.. hum unhi se dua karte hain.. InshAllah .. Allah ta'aallah kabhi bhi mayoos nahi karaingay.. bass apne Allah miaan par aur khud par bharosa karo.. sab theek ho jayega.. :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted December 23, 2003 zabardast shairi rythm. mobby is lucky . he will b able to listen from u . gr8 poetry.. sure? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
