chanda 0 Posted October 13, 2003 Bholna mujjay itna asan nahin hay…. Magar suno, namumkin bhi nahin hay KHizan main jab saray patay Darahtoon ka sath choor jayain gay. Jaab sard haw chalay gi or tum KHood main seemat jao gay. Jaab ghalzal koi tumhain sunay ga Jaab de ga koi choopkay say awaz; Mangnay lago gay jab duaa tum, Dekon gay hathalion ko apni ghoor say tum Mujjay dnoondo gay tum un lakiroon main tub tum… Ho gi phir yai ank zara pur num… Jaab dega na koi sath tumhara, Honay lagay ga yai dushman zamana, Ho gay tum tun tanha Na hoga koi jo sambhaly tum ko, Tum tootnay lago gay bikharnay lago gay Ghusa kon sehay ga tumhara? Dill jab tootay ga hur din hur pul jub… Tub tum jano gay Haan tabhi tum mano gay… Kay main kon thi? Magar tub tuk loog mujjay Pehna kay leja rahain hoon gay; Tub tum rona nahin suno, Hiran tum hona nahin jaan lo Deko na Ab tum rotay kion ho? Ab pachtatay kion ho? Maat ro na ho udass Main rahoon gi kahin na kahin Haan shaid kahin bhi nahin… Mujjai bhoolna asan nahin hay Magar suno na.. NAMUMKIN bhi to nahin hay na…….! ==;==;==;==;==;==;==;==;==;==;==; Dukh ki lehar ne chera hoga Yaad ne kankar phenka hoga Aaj tu mera dil kehta hai Tu is wakt akela hoga Mere choomay huwe haathoon se Auroon ko khat likhta hoga Bheeg chaleen ab raat ki palkain Tu ab thak kar soya hoga Rail ki ghehri seeti sun kar Raat ka jungle goonja hoga Shehar ke khaali station per Koi musaafir utra hoga Aangan mein phir chireyaan boleen Tu ab so kar utha hoga Yaadoon ki jalti shabnam se Phool sa mukhra dhoya hoga Mouti jaisi shakal banaa kar Aaaenay ko tak'ta hoga Shaam huwi ab tu bhi shaayad Apne ghar ko lauta hoga Neeli dhundhli khaamoshi mein Taaroon ki dhun sunta hoga Mera saathi shaam ka taara Tujh se aankh milaata hoga Shaam ke chalte haath ne tujh ko Mera salaam tu bheja hoga Pyaasi karlaati konjoon ne Mera dukh tu sunaaya hoga Mein tu aaj bahut roya hoon Tu bhi shaayad roya hoga tera meet puraana Tujh ko yaad tu aata hoga... ====================== :wub: :wub: :inlove: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyatti 0 Posted October 14, 2003 hey nice post !!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 14, 2003 aray chanda itny lambi post but acchi hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted October 14, 2003 Thx For your nice comments IF your comments continue then i continue the post new and nice poetry.......................... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 15, 2003 so chanda g ab aagay bhi kuch aasa hi post karay ka maza aajay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 16, 2003 so nice chanda :) ye duniya kase mujhay batla de koi "ye duniya kase hay mujhay batla de koi. rota hay kiu koi kisi kay lie umair. usay kiya milta hay samjha day koi zahiri ban than per kiu martay hain log ye mujhay samjha day koi. hum ne jin kay lie khud ko ghuwa diya lakh chaha magar phir bhi kadar na hoe ye duniya kase hay mujhay batla de koi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted October 19, 2003 thokarain maar ker mahfil se uththatay hain humain aur aik paon se damun bhi daba rukha hai hey nice post chanda.. and a really nice avator Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aillia 0 Posted October 19, 2003 sorry i can not under stand so no comments about that but i think is a nice collection aillia hassan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted October 19, 2003 Aillia. welcome again... y cant u understand. dont u know urdu? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 20, 2003 very nice chanda.. humm i think she doesnt understand urdu.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted October 21, 2003 chalo ek bar phir se ajnabi ban jain hum dono na main tum se koee umeed rakhoon dil nawazne ki na tum mairi taraf daikho ghalt undaz nazron se na maire dil ki dharkan larkharae tairi baton se na zahir ho woh tumhari kashmaksh ka raz nazron se tumhain bhi koee uljhan rokti hai paish qadmi se mujhe bhi log kehte hain ke yeh jalwae parae ha :wub: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 21, 2003 nice poetry chanda :) KYA TUM KABEEE ..... "Kya tum kabee koi gazal na gungunao ho gee… Kya tum kabee in rasaatu per na ao gee…. Kya tum kabee chaand ko na dekho o gee… Kya tum kabee gul ko na haath may lo gee… Kya tum kabee baylay ko na apney zulfo may sagao o gee… Kya tum kabee haath may mehdi na lagao gee… Kya tum kabee apnay nazukh paon ko zamen per na rakho gee… Kya tum kabee koi lalee apnay huto per na laga o gee… Kya tum kabee ab kabee barish may na naha gee… Kya tum kabee kisse ahat per na chok gee… Kya tum kabee kisse ka intazar na kar roh gee… Kya tum kabee kanhay per sir na rahk ho gee… Aur agar tum yah na kar paee tu Tum mujh ko kabee na bula pa o gee… Kabee nahi kabee nahi ………………………….. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted October 25, 2003 Very nice Umair.zm Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 26, 2003 Na Kaho....Na Sono "Bheegi si aik raat yeh lay aye yeh kia saath main.. dharkanain jo humain kehnay lagi hain.. Khamooshi ke dermiyan Kab Chahi thi Baat yeh... Dharkain jo Humain Kehnay Lagi hain Na Kahoo...Na Sonoo Khamooshi Guftugo hone lagi hai Zindagi Khuwaab main Khonay Lagi Hai taberain Lay Aaon Main tum Sapnay Day do Mujhe Aisa kia hai itne Kyuun Achay lagtay ho Mujhe... Tum hi jeevan ki Aarzoooo.... Tum hi Jeevan ki Justojoo... Her Aahat Pe Dharkay Dil Kerwat Kerwat Raat Re.. Charoon Oor Chehra Tera Yun Sapnoon ke Deep Jalay.. Sapnay Hain Apne Pyar ke... Rakhna inhain Sambhal Ke... Na Kahoo....Na Sonooo.... Khamooshi Guftugu Hone Lagi Hai.. Zindagi ki Subha Dhalnay Lagi Hai... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted October 29, 2003 Wo paas say guzray to maloom huwa zindhagi youN bhi dabay paooN guzar jati hay --- ToRna tera mujhay bekaar tha MaiN to khood ik giri diwar tha -- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted November 6, 2003 Yeh Bhi Aadab Hamare HaiN ...!! TumhaiN Kya MalOOm ..!! HuM TumhaiN Jeet Ke HareY HaiN ...!! TumhaiN Kya MalOOm ..!! Ek TuM Ho Ke Samajhte Nahi HuM Ko Apna ...!! Ek HuM HaiN Ke Tumhare HaiN ...!! TumhaiN Kya MalOOm ...!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 chanda jigar nice shiaree yar :) ab mian kuch arz kartaa hoon ;) WAQT "TUM TO KEHTE THEE K MERE JAISA Q DOSRA NAHI... WOH JAAB DEKHTEE DEKHTEE RAAT HOO JATE THEE... ABB JAB MUUR KAR DEKHTA HOON... TO SAHIL PAR TERE PAIROON K NISHAN BHI NAHI... MERE DIL KI DHADKAN MEIN DUUR TERE VEERANEY HAI... JAB BHI DEKHTA HOON HAI RAAT KO CHAND KI TARAF... TERE HE NAZAR SAI BADAL CHAH JATE HAI... TERE PYAR KO ISS QADAR CHAHAA MEINEY.. K AAB TERE CHAAHAT SAI CHAHAT KO CHAHTAA HOON.. MERE ISHQ KI INTEHA KO MURR KAI DEKH .. TO HAAR QADAM PAEY MALLA MAAL CHAHTAA HOON... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muhammad ovais 0 Posted November 13, 2003 TERAY BINA ZINDAGI SAY KOI SIKWA TO NAHI SIKWA NAHI SIKWA NAHI SIKWA NAHI TERA BINA ZINDAGI BHI LAKIN ZANDAGI TO NAHI ZINDAGI NAHI ZINDAGI NAHI ZINDAGI NAHI JI MAIN AATA HAY TERA DAMAN MAIN SAR CHUPA KAY HUM ROTAY REHIN ROTAY REHIN TERI IN AKHOON MAIN ANSOOON KI NAMI TO NAHI TUM JO KEHDO TO AAJ KI RAAT CHAND DOBAY GA NAHI RAAT KO ROK LO RAT KI BAT HAY AUR ZINDAGI BAKI TO NAHI TERAY BINA ZINDAGI SAY KOI SIKWA TO NAHI SIKWA NAHI SIKWA NAHI SIKWA NAHI TERA BINA ZINDAGI BHI LAKIN ZANDAGI TO NAHI ZINDAGI NAHI ZINDAGI NAHI ZINDAGI NAHI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted November 13, 2003 Agar Talash Karon Koi Mil Jai Ga Magar Tumhari Tarhan Kon Mujhe Chahiay GA Mujhe Zaror Koi Chahaton Say Dekhay Ga Magar Woh Ankhin Kahan SaY Tumhari Lai GA Janay Kab Meray Dil Pay Nai Dastak Hoo Maqan Khali hoa hai,Koi Tu Ai Ga Tumharay Saath Yeh Mausam Farishton Jaisa Hai Tumharay Baad Yeh Mausam Bhout Satay GA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 15, 2003 nadan hamaree koe tareef hie nahien hia :( chanda n ovias nice poetries yar :D Chand or Sitaron ki Tamana "Main nay chand or sitaron ki tamana ki thi Mujh ko raton ki sayahi k siwa kuch na mila Main wo naghma hoon jisay pyar ki mehfil na mili Wo musafir hoon jisay koi bhi manzil na mili Zakham Payen hain Baharon ki tamana ki thi Main nay chand or sitaron ki tamana ki thi Kisi gaisoo, Kisi aanchal ka sahara bhi nahi Rastay main koi duhndlata sa sitara bhi nahi Mairi nazroon nay nazaroon ki tamana ki thi Main nay chand or sitaron ki tamana ki thi Dil main nakam ummedon k basairay paiy Roshni lainay ko nikla to andheray paiy Rang or noor k dharoon ki tamana ki thi Main nay chand or sitaron ki tamana ki thi Mairi rahon say juda hogyen rahain in ki Aaj badli nazar aati hain nigahain in ki Jin say is dil nay saharoon ki tamana ki thi Main nay chand or sitaron ki tamana ki thi Pyar manga to sisaktay hoay arman milay Chaain chaha to umadtay hoay tofan milay Dobtay dil nay kinaroon ki tamana ki thi Main nay chand or sitaron ki tamana ki thi Mujh ko ratoon ki sayahi k siwa kuch na mila Mujh ko ratoon ki sayahi k siwa kuch na mila Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted November 15, 2003 Jaate Jaate Tu Agar Aankh Bhar Aati Nahin, Mujhe Bhi Shaayad Kabhi Teri Yaad Aati Nahin. Pata Nahin Kuchh Un Mein Hai Ya Un Ke Dil Mein Chor Hai, Un Ke Chehre Par Meri Nazar Tik Paati Nahin. Samajh Hee Aata Nahin Ye Rog Kya Hai Ishq Ka, Neend Aati To Hai Lekin Neend Hee Aati Nahin. Tu Agar Mil Ke Mujh Se Door Karti Sab Gile, Main Bhi Pachhtaata Nahin Tu Bhi Pachhtaati Nahin. Jab Se Kho Diya Tujh Ko Kho Diya Hai Har Yakeen, In Labon Pe Aajkal Koi Dua Aati Nahin. Tu Bata Main Kaise Samjhoon Tere Dil Ki Baat Ko, Apni Khwahish Tu Zabaan Par Jab Talak Laati Nahin. Ek Hum Hain Jo Unhein Bhool Hee Paate Nahin, Ek Wo Hain Jinhein Hamaari Yaad Tak Aati Nahin. Ishq Ki Daastaan Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Jo, Samajh To Aati Hai Lekin Samajhai Jaati Nahin. Baad Mein Jo Bhi Hua Ho Lekin Ae Mere '...... Pehli Mulaqat Mujh Se Bhi Bhulaai Jaati Nahin. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 15, 2003 VERY NICE POETY CHANDA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chanda 0 Posted November 21, 2003 Aisi aankhen nahin dekhi... Aisi aankhen nahin dekhi, aisa kaajal nahin dekha Aisa jalwa nahin dekha, aisa chehra nahin dekha Jab yeh daaman ki hawa de, aag jungle mein laga de Jab yeh saheraaon mein jaaye, ret mein phool khilaaye Aisi duniya nahin dekhi, aisa manzar nahin dekha Aisa aalam nahin dekha, aisa dilbar nahin dekha Uske kangan ka khalakna jaise bulbul ka chahekna Uski paazeb ki chham chham jaise barsaat ka mausam Aisa saawan nahin dekha, aisi baarish nahin dekhi Aisi rimjhim nahin dekhi, aisi khwaahish nahin dekhi Uski bebaaq si baatein jaise sardi ki ho raatein Uff yeh tanhaai-e-masti jaise toofaan mein kashti Meethi koyal si hai boli jaise geeton ki rangoli Surkh gaalon pe paseena jaise phaagun ka maheena Aisi aankhen nahin dekhi Aisa jalwa nahin dekha... Aisa chehra nahin dekha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 21, 2003 array Umir app ke Tareef kernee he nahee parte wo tu obvious hay na.!! and still for record..!! nice work Umair Chanda and Ovias! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
