rukh 25 Posted February 3, 2004 thans nadan & umair ...nice sher umair :) her pal dhyan main rehnay walay log afsanay ho jatay hain ankhain borhee ho jatee hain KHUAB poranay ho jatay hain saree bat taluq walee jazboon ki sachaye tak hai mail diloon main ajaye to gher weranay ho jatay hain munzer munzer khil uthtee hai perhan ki qoos-e-qazah muasan teray hansny say or suhanay ho jatay hain jhonprion main her ik talkhe paida hotay mill jatee hai isee ley to waqt say pehlay tiffal sayanay ho jatay hain musam-e-ishq ki ahat say her ik cheez badal jatee hai rattin pagal ker daytee han din dewanay ho jatay hain dunia kai is shor nai amjad kia kia hum say cheen liya khud say bat keye bhi ab to kayee zamany ho jatay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 3, 2004 thank u rukh :) app kie poetry to yar kamal hia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 7, 2004 hello all gayz i like urs poetry too much yar yeh tu bhot hi achi vakee hi main bhi kuch kehna chatee hooon wafa karoo yah sitam koro gila naheen karty zahir hi khezan main phool khila naheen karty har vakt tumree yad hi iss dil kia keh tum see tum chaee zheam do lekan hum jasy log dobra mila naheen karty :inlove: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 7, 2004 umair > thanx welcome nepstar thanx for complement :) nice poetry by u PERKHNA mat perkhnay sai koi apna nahi rehta kissi bhi aainay main dair tak chehra nahi rehta baray logoon say milnay main hamesha fasla rakhna jahan darya samunder sai milla derya nahi rehta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 7, 2004 hello all guyz have nice from me woh phloon main ek gulab thi woh sawal lajawab thi mero hasrtoon ko rond dala woh nashoon main ek shrab thi us ki mobat main tu kyon mar gia abubakar dunia main mohbtain tu be hisab thi have nice day :o Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 7, 2004 napster n rukh guyss superb poetry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted February 8, 2004 HeloooOoo everY one :hi: Kia hall hain sab kay ? Umair ;) Hann yar bass yaa sab ais ahee hai :) Nadan :hi: :D RuKH ! Lain janab Mood is some what sad today But tHanks Allah not sad enough Waisay yaa kiss kee zulfoon ke bat hoo rahee hai ? :P Ahhh Koo chayee aik Umar asarr hoonnaay tak Kon jeeta hai terry zulff koo sarrrr hoonayy tak ? well i wont be able to contribute by some Ghazal or poem but here are some missillanious shairs of my choice Unn nay yaa kia thaa Bhool kar Mugahy Pata nahi hoon tab say apnee khabar khayeen ... meerr inn neem baz ankoon say bazz aaaa Saree mastee sharab kee seee hai zindagi apnee hababb kee see hai .. kaisay keh doon kay mughay chodd dia uss nay Bat too sachh hai par bat hai Ruswayeee keee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 8, 2004 thanx umair nepstar good going mansoor > ji janab inhoo zulfoon ki bat ho rahee thee :P well nice collection by u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 9, 2004 Rast0n Pe mat betho hawa tanG kareGi, Guzzre hoYe loGon ki sada tanG kareGi, Mat to0ot kar chaho use aGhaze safar men, BichreGa tu IK IK ada tanG kareGi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 10, 2004 oh really nice umair .. bulkay really true Mat to0ot kar chaho use aGhaze safar men, BichreGa tu IK IK ada tanG kareGi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 11, 2004 arey rukh tension nahien leney ka :D ... plz ro mat chalo ab yeh poetry suno ;) Mujhe phone karo "shabnami raat sohaani hai mujhe phone karo aik ghazal tum ko sunaani hai mujhe phone karo tez barish hai aur sard mosam hai har taraf pani hi pani hai mujhe phone karo AB JAO AUR JAKAR PHONE KAR Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 12, 2004 hello u guyz so nice poetry ths from me dekh lo Khvaab magar Khvaab kaa charchaa na karo log jal jaayenge suuraj kii tamannaa na karo vaqt kaa kyaa hai kisii pal bhii badal sakataa hai ho sake tum se to tum mujh pe bharosaa na karo kirchiyaa.N TuuTe hue aks kii chubh jaayengii aur kuchh roz abhii aa_iinaa dekhaa na karo bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 12, 2004 napster cool shairi yar AARZOO HOGI "kaheen toh dil kay ek konay main aarzoo hogi? keh main tairay aur tu mairay ru baru hogi. shaoor-e-ishq ko baydar toh ho laynay do, na hongay lafz aur ankhoon say guftagu hogi. her ek shakhs main tum aks maira dhondo gay, jo hum na hongay toh hamari justuju hogi. karain gay loog jo batain miri deewangi ki, woh daastaan bhi teray naam say shoro hogi. na poochh mujh say meray uljhay huway dil ka sabab, meray jawab main pinha jo hai, woh tu hogi. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 12, 2004 nepsatr > good going umair > wow very nice poetry .. i ilke it na pooch mujh say meray uljhay hoye dil ka sabab meray jawab main pinha jo hai woh tu ho gi ...greatoooooooooo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 13, 2004 ohh ma kind pleasure :D app ko meri poetry achie lagheey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 13, 2004 :hi: Hi all poochh na mujh se dil k fasaane ishq ki baatein ishq hi jaane Wo din jab ham un se mile they dil k naazuk phool khile masti aankhein choom rahi thi saari duniyaa jhoom rahi do dil they wo bhi deewaane Wo din jab ham door huye they dil k sheeshe choor huye they aaiee Khizaan rangeen chaman mein aag lagi jab dil k ban mein ayaa na koi aag bujhaane Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Khub hai ye rukh wat a nice job its a my kawish khub tha sapna mera mere pass ho k bhi mera na ho saka jisay rkha dil main berson usay dam torte meri bhigi aankhon ne dekha khub tha sapna mira khub tha sapna mira Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 welcome shabo... so nice poetry :hi: kiran>>roz chup chap wapas na aya karo wahan thori der sabar to kya karo na nice poetry ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 Chand Raat "Chodween(14) Raat man Aik anjana saa chera Mery Khawab man Aya tha. Man Haran Hoon ka woh chera Mery Yadoon man Kab Samaya tha. Dil ki Dharkaneen Tham Geen Jub CHand Nee Os ka Dedar Karwaya tha. Chery Per Hosan Or Ankhoon man Khamoos Sager Samaya tha. Zolfoon man Raat ka Husan or Mehak ne Dil Terpaya tha. Dil Ke Darwazee per Dastak Datee Jub man ne Os ko Paya tha Dil ke Ander Mohabbat ka aik ahsas Othta sa paya tha Aik anjanaeee See rastee per Aik Anjana Dost Paya tha. Dil kii rah man Hosan wala Mokhlas Dost sahid hee kesi ne paya tha Mom Se nazaqat or Shashee sa Badan os ne Paya tha. Raat Chodween ki OR Chandni ko Farsh per Paya tha. Jis ke Anchal nee Jheel Man apna Aks Phalaya tha. Dil ki Werran zameen Per OS ne Sawan ban kar Zarkheez banaya tha. Alfaz Ki Adagee man mathas thi os ke Rukhsar Pe Lalii thi. Naak o Pak Daman Rab ne Jis Ka Banaya tha Seerat Man Kholoos is Qader Samaya tha. Ya Rab! Shukria Tera To ne Anjab Rastee Per Aik Dost Ata Farmaya tha. Jiss ka Sada Dost Ki Tamana kee hoo Osee Ne Asa Dost Paya tha. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 14, 2004 welcome shabo... so nice poetry :hi:kiran>>roz chup chap wapas na aya karo wahan thori der sabar to kya karo na nice poetry ;) ok :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 jie huzor wahan par hum jese bhie khareyn hon ghe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 14, 2004 ji issi liye hum jaise jaldi wapis ajatay hain :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 acha hum jese phir bhei app ka wahan intizar karty rehtey hian ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 14, 2004 oh so sweet of u :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
