ariba 0 Posted March 14, 2003 kahan aakay ruknay thay rastay ,kaha moor tha usay bhool ja woh jo mil gaya usay yaad rakh, jo nahi mila usay bhool ja WOH TAIRAY NASEEB KI BARISHAIN KISE AUR CHAT PAR BARAS GAYEE'N DIL E BAYKHABAR MAIRE BAT SUN,USAY BHOOL JA ,USAY BHOOL JA main tu gum tha tairay hee dhayan main,taire aa's,tairay guman main saba kah gayee mairay kaan main,mairay saath aa,usay bhool ja kisee ankh main nahi ashk e gham ,tairay baad kuch bhi nahi hai ghum tujhay zindagi nay bhoola dia,tu bhi muskura usay bhool ja kahen chak e jaan ka rafu nahi kise asstee'n par laho nahi kay shaheed e rah e malal ka nahi khoon baha,usay bhool ja q aata howa hai ghubar main,gham e zindagi kay fishar main woh jo darj tha tairay bakht main,so woh hogaya,usay bhool ja na woh aankh he taire annkh the ,na woh khwab he taira khawab tha dil e muntazir tu yeh kis liye ,taira jaagna, usay bhhool ja yeh jo raat din ka hai khail sa,usay daikh, us par yakeen na kar nahi aks koi bhi mustaqil,sare aina,usay bhool ja jo basat e jjan he ulat gaya,woh jo raastay say palat gaya usay rooknay say hasool kia,usay maat bola,usay bhool ja tu phir yeh kis liyee shab e hijar kay usay har sitaray main daikhna woh falak kay jis pay milay thay hum,kio aur tha ,usay bhool ja tujhay chand ban kay mila tha jo,tairay sahiloon pay khila tha jo woh tha darya aik wisal ka,so otar gaya,usay bhool ja BY AMJAD ISLAM AMJAD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted March 15, 2003 Ariba Thanks sooooo much for sharing that... I really enjoyed the poetry and u solved a mystery for me too :;): Meray paas sirf yeh do lines theen:- main tu gum tha tairay hee dhayan main,taire aa's,tairay guman main saba kah gayee mairay kaan main,mairay saath aa,usay bhool ja... ab mukamal poetry parh li hai... thanks to u!!! :) :) Keep sharing mujhay yaqeen hai k meray ilawa bohoth sey friends aap ki poetry appreciate karthey hain Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted March 15, 2003 thanks alot shabo.app ess treha appriciate karti hoo keh sairoon khoon barh jata hai :music: thanks to king for appriciating my choice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
payarabacha 0 Posted March 16, 2003 SALAM N THIS IS MY FEV POEM WHICH IS MY OWN. " teri yadoon k talkh saayy mairy zat main kho kar mairy ass k berabt bandhan torr k mairay khana-lashoor k dukh jantay hoay bhi mujh say mairy BAWAFA honay ka sabot majti hain ??? payara bacha kaisy lagi give me ur coments. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted March 16, 2003 very nice,bohut khoob. :music: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bugs 0 Posted March 18, 2003 nice peom ji i like it well here is the one or shall i say a few lines.i hope u ppl will like it,actually its a song of an indian movie,a few lines which i like most abt that song jadu hai nasha hai madhoshian khud ko chupa ker ub jaoon kahan dekhti hain jis terha say,teri mazrein mujhe mein khud ko chupaoon kahan a few lines from a naat allah nabi da nam liey allah nabi da allah allah allah rahmut da derya ilahi her dum wagda tera allah jay aik qutra bukhsahy meno kum ban jaway mera allah nabi da nam liey allah nabi da jay mein wikha apnay walay kuj nahi meray pulay jay mein dekhan rehmat rub di bulay bulay bulay allah nabi da nam liey i hope u ppl liked it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted March 19, 2003 wooooooooowwwwwwwwwww... man these poems are great. Very very nice! Especially the very first poem by Ariba. I luv this poem. U know the line that I thought was the best is.... WOH TAIRAY NASEEB KI BARISHAIN KISE AUR CHAT PAR BARAS GAYEE'N DIL E BAYKHABAR MAIRE BAT SUN,USAY BHOOL JA ,USAY BHOOL JA how sad. Hai na? Anyway nice poems. Good job. Plz keep them cumin! thanx. tata! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted March 20, 2003 thanks cute_ooky16 .i also like these lines Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted March 23, 2003 ariba i like that poem too much as well :) i hered that poem from amjad islam amjad" himself was a nice day :) woo merry naseeb kee barish kisee ur kee chat paa barass gayee ayee dilee ba naseebb ussay bhool jaa bhool gaaa regards mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooldewana1 0 Posted March 23, 2003 salamz to all a poem woh kahte hai khyoshyon main bhi ronay lagtay ho main kahta hoon kay mere ankhoon ko sawan acha lagta hai woh boli tum bhi zindgi say rooth jao gay main bola shaidh moot mujh say man jaye gi woh boli tum khyoshi kay geet ko mayoos kartay ho main bola kaya karoon in muhktasar geeton kay mosam ka woh boli tum khud hi khud say har jatay ho main bola kaya karoon kamzoor hoon baysahara hoon woh boli sham hotay hi tum per udasi cha jatee hai main bola raat bhi to ansson main hi guzartee hai woh boli kaya yeah sab khush itfaqan hai tumhara ghum main bola yeah bhu mumkin hai kay sab khush ahtraman ho ALLAH HAFFIZ :( :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted March 29, 2003 very nice poem.thanks for sharing,keep sharing Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sajjal 0 Posted August 21, 2003 nice choice thx 4 sharing :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
