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You r like the diamond

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You Are Like The Diamond

You are like the diamond

You glimmer and glow

And shine so brightly

Some, like me, draw close

To feel your warmth, your heat

Only to find none

You are like the diamond

You are bright and strong

But you have no warmth, or love

It's a terrible game

To play with people's hearts

Like mine

You are like the diamond

You will last longer than most

But you will have no love

No warmth to back up that bright light

So what kind of life will it be?

Besides long?

Will you regret it someday?

Regret being so much like the diamond

Regret being so cold

And look for me

A find me gone?

Can I ever leave?

No, I can never leave you

I am drawn to this cold light

This false sense of warmth you give

I keep wishing and hoping

That someday, you will give warmth

But, this will never be

Diamonds last forever   :(  :(

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waooooooo  what  a  poem  shaboooo  kabhee  kabhee  mughay  aisa  lagta hai  kay  u  are a poetess  of "love" .. if its  still the  creation of some one else ur taste  is  g88 :D

we had  learned  about "DNA never dies " :P

and  have watched movie "Tomorrow never dies"

now  "Dimond never dies"

nice edition :)

achaaa aik bat  too  batooo......just tell what  is the  thing  which  gives  other  heat.... yaa  itss fire... which also devistate  to its  reciever.... :( Dimond bechara too  kisee  ka bura  nahi  karta ...

harmless... u give  it  attention  by  wering it  around ur  neck proudly .. and then put them  in  a dark dunen  for "safety" ...

being scientifially there is  no diferene between "coal" and dimond ....would  any one wear coal in its  neack ??? would  any  one dare  to talk  about  it ???

and  for  more surprisingly........coal  (ashes) becomes  when "something" is  burntt ....by heat givon fire

after burning coal (Dimond) arrises...  soo  did u  get the  

"reality" of changee :D...

lolzzzz  ajjj main  kuchh  ziada  hee  scientific  nahi  hoo  gia ?? hmm ?

any  how real  thoughprovoking poem

regards

mansoor

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Hi Mansoor

This is my PERSONAL definition of "love"

Losing

Our

Valuable

Emotions

Now to answer ur questions... what is the thing that gives heat?... anything that can raise temperatures is a source for providing heat  :;):

Diamonds r beautiful stones.. of course "diamonds r a girls best friend" rite!! but what r they in reality? like the poem suggests just cold stones... coal may be the genetic make up of diamonds but after being treated the finished result is obviously worlds apart!!!!

I have a collection of diamonds & pearls.... I also have a "black" pearl necklace but to wear coal??? errrrm Mansoor I think I'l give that one a miss :P  :P

Thanks for liking the poem...

Sx

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nice poem!

wow Shabo.. I like ur definition of love. And by the way u know what u sed abt diamonds being a best friend of a girl...... lol. Well that's funny.

see I told u guys before..... I think I am an alien because I absolutely HATE diamonds or gold..... yeah silver kee to baat hee kuch aur hai. But anyways that's just me..... Now I am a 99.99% sure that i am an alien.... :angry: cool!

but just to make a 100% sure. How many of u (girls) like wrestling and can't do their own hair like me? I have to get my lil' sis to tie my hair for me. even tho I have short hair. lol..... waiting for replies 4m girls!

bye ya'll.....

luv.....

Ooky! :P

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salam

yeah i alwaz knew that u r an alien cute !:p :P :P

luvly poem shabo ( shaby :P )......

LOVE= Losing Our Valuable Emotions hmmmmm ???

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aur haan alien16 next time zara cooooolll pura likhna ...:P :P :D

ohooo gusa kernay wali kya baat hai....ab jo hona tha woh to hogaya...:laugh:

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:hello:

:lol: @ Ooky aka Cookie aka ALIEN  :alien:  I was talkin about the majority of girls loving diamonds... I guess u aint included then!!

I HATE wrestling especially the WWF "animations"  (Well I think it's a joke!!) they show on TV.. yuk it makes me wana screeeam :angry: As for doin my own hair.. well I gotta personal hairdresser to take care of mine  :;):

Thanks Ja.... oooops I mean Cooooolll for ur appreciation of the poem.. I was in a "COLD" mood when I posted it  :P

Take care!

Sx

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hmmmm :) nice  scientific reply  :) ookayyy !!  :p alien ...waooo  i  would  love  to  say  aout  dat  laikenn  na babba  na :D

waisay  i  like  DImonds but  i  dont  have  any :)

mansoor

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heyyyyyyy ooky i can't believe u don't likeeeeeeeee diamond...... lemme tell u something......... girls r as precious as a diamond... doesn't matter if u like it or not cuz u r a diamond ur self.

guys i donno wat i'm writinh and its not making any sense to me

well, u know wat i'm talking abouttttttt (right girls  :;): )

sania_16_diamond

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Ohh yeah Sania.....just got ur emails!

Acha so u like diamonds too eh? :D well as I sed before I am an alien.. so don't give me that ! ya know..... lol.

Dekho I told u that this website is good..... yar yeh kia ker dia mai ne. Now not only my sis but my friends have started using this website! I gotta be more careful now u know while flirting wid others. lol......

neway gtg..... I have to check ur replies to other posts!

bye. Luv ya'. See ya later at lunch time!  :;): Ohh PS plz don't tell samso' bout this website. She is crazy. She is never gonna get off da pc.....  :;):

luv ya'll.

ooky!

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heyyyyyy

soorry oooky i told shamso rite in front of u .... cuz i just readd ur post.. sorry...... well u told her that its paki site .. i think she wouldn't comee....... n e wayz

igtg

c ya on mon.

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Salam,

All I can say is De Beer's

Allah Hafiz

Najeeb

:alien:

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Hey Najeeb those 2 words said it all.. that's a fantastic reply & very clever I like it!! :yes:  :yes:

Sx

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Najeeb !!!  nice reply :D

mansoor

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