Poetry Competition Legion Of Powers Vs Knight Riders

[sobe 12]

bhaaag gaye hain wohhhhhh lolzzzz

jee nahin bhagnay walay nahin hay un ki tabiyaat khraav hay aur woh mahi sis thora busy hain bus yeh hay kay main is comp main fail hoon

[Ramz 8]

[Wise_Guy 44]

Weldone MUNNAY

Nice Selection 

[Wise_Guy 44]

The last verse seems to be out of rhyme or rhythm. In my opinion, it should have been "Na janey tum kahan per chhore aye ho Nadeem ous ko ..... Usay phir dhoond laao tum mujay tanhy dasti hey". A very touching piece of poetry. I do like it. Keep it up wise_guy. Your choice is a master piece on the subject of lonliness "Tanhy".

Thanx Uncle G 

Rahi baat MAQTAY ki to sorry 4 dat.wo kya hay na k meray paas 20 gram waala WATTA nahi tha werna accurate weight karnay k baad hi post karta.  

[sobe 12]

[shahabi 23]

hmmm knight riders done well

[sobe 12]

hmmm knight riders done well

jee kiya sumjh rakha hay app nay humay

[Hmm 1]

Jeee han !!!!!!!!

We r Here !!

[Amaya 3]

hmm..to app log reply kro sab mahi.....

[shahabi 23]

jee kiya sumjh rakha hay app nay humay

lagta hay tareef raas nahi aye

[Wise_Guy 44]

Aray Manager saahiba kahan hain????

koi pata karo bhai un ka.