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MashaAllah poetry contest..

Wow Sanum and Rukh both of u r very creative yar.. mashaAllah kia poetry hai..

acha to Sanum to mere bare mai kuch kehna hi nahi chah rahin

chalen theek hai :P phir mai bhi kuch nahi kahoongi..

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Muskan lolz.. I didn't see ur post.. sorry I used the exact word again i-e creative.. lemme think of another word :P

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assalamoalikum to all

welldone rukh and Sanum jee..kiya kehnay hein aap k..aap ka her kaam he A ONE hota hai :wub:

bas aap ko dekh ker dil chaha k main be kuch likhoon ( poet hazrat sai maazrat k sath) AARZ kiya hai...

suna thaa baat wo jab karein tou phool jhertay hein

hum nai be socha chalo baat ker k dekhtay hein

yahan tou mamla he kuch or thaa jab baat hoi LALA,RUKH, or SANUM sai

k pholoon kay sath sath shararat or zahanat kay moti be bikhartay hein

hum nai es justajoo main baat ke jab MAIN HON NA, or QAASIM sai

tou JADOO ke tarah wo be apni jadoiee batoon sai dil ko moh laitay hein

masoomiyat ka paiker RAIHA, SONOO, SAAMIA or FATI

aqal o danish ka majooma MANSOOR or AASIM

k jin ke batoon sai hum be buht kuch seekhtay hein

agerchay CUTEOOKY, NAZISH, IBADAT or ARIBA sai taaluq hai bas wajbee sa

per ye oon loogon main sai hein jo dil per aaser rakhtay hein

etnay aqalmaand loogon main shamil hein WAQAS NADAN or MUSKANKHAN

chaloo hum be kuch danayee ke TALAASH main nikaltay hein

WIDMARK,PRINCE,BROWNEYES,ABEERA sai rabta thaa kuch eisa

k jaisay taiz hawaoon main zaard pattay bikharty hein

Allah sai duaa hai k naseeb hoon aap sab ko daimee khooshiyaan

k jin k dam sai yahaan roonaq, phool or jugnoo bikhrtay hein

AAMAN_EMAN

Edited by AAMAN_EMAN

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SANAM>RUKH>AMAN_EMAN I CAN"T BELIEVE K YE AAP LOGO NE LIKHA HAI

LEKIN BOHOT HEEEEEEEEEEEE KHOOB LIKHA HAI REALLY :flower: :flower: :flower:

KAHEEN MAIN KHOOWAB TOU NAHI DEKH RAHA :P

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:o wow grt work SIS :D realllly good i just love to read my name :P

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Aaman-eman > very nice :star: app to chupe rustam niklee :D

aimon ,muskan ,lala ,plg > thankx for appriciation :)

sonoo > ok waiting ;)

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:D Aman_eman

nice poem

Well u wrote mt name in masoom ppl :D thanks

Well over all whole poem is Great

keep it up

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a bundle of thanx to all of u..k aap sab nai es poem ko para be or poem samja be :P

or no doubt sonooO aap ho hee buht masoom :)

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lolzzzzzzz

Really AAMAN_EMAN

mujay yakeen nahi a raha................but agar app mujay masoom samjati hain too theik hi samjati hain na.....

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CY hamesha se rahi hai kitni jhakaas

dikhte nahi aajkal koi dost aas paas

koi kaam me busy to koi studies & class

im missing all my frds who were very very khaas :rolleyes:

Cute pari ,Baby Doll gayab aur gayab hai Anayat :huh:

sab kuch ho raha is section me galat

Fati underground hai umiar bhi busy :(

funny section hogaya kitna zyada messy

Nazish aayi thi sabki Class Layane :o

khoob maze kiye the ..hogayi ghum kaha najane :weep:

Qasim, Jadoo aur Muskan Khan ab bhi aate hai yaha :D

Faraha ,Saboo, umair, brown_eyes aur Asim Ali gayab hai kaha :o

Charmer..Talassh, cute ooky aur Rahai bhi dikhte hai kam :bang:

lala, & Amman Emaan hamesha dube rehte hai in their dard n gum :weep:

MHN..Sonoo0..Nadan, Rukh to aate hai everyday :P

milte nahi lekin mujhko uff wot do i say

aaya hai CY me shaadi ka mausam :yes:

Sunam.. aur..Saamia isliye hai yaha se gum :laugh:

Tina bhi gayi ab ayegi MArch mein :D

Games post hai khuli but wid whom shud i play :down:

baat baat pe puraane shayari likhte hai log :P

padh padh ke hum pak jaate hai roz

kaha gaye woh din kaha gayi woh CY

surf surf karte jisko aati nahi thi kisiko nindiya

God oh GOd m missing those days..

get me back my friends for heavens sake..!!

:rolleyes::wub:

Edited by *jadoo*

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hmmm good jadoo very good

kahan sai paya hai tumnai yeh dimagh

kahan sai aati hai uss mai yeh batain

mai abhee kahee nahee janay wali

aap sab ko abhee boht hai jhailna mujhay

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nawazish janab nawazish

bus issi tarh mairi taareefain kartay rahain phir daikhain mai kaisay kaisay ashaar arz karti hoo :yes:

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:yes: realllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy coooool jadooo

:D just keep saying like this bz most of the ppl are always gum from here :(

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Welldone Jadoo :flower:

buht aacha likha lakin jadoo aap mujay ye tou bataien k aap nai mujay etna sad kab dekh liyaa :P

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:goodpost:

sum very good stuff from very nice ppl

kaafi talent hai humaray cy per :rolleyes:

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jadooo nice one

maza aya perh ker

app ko main miltee nahi llollzz

kon kehta hay mulaqat nahi hotee

roz hote hay per bat nahi hoteee :D

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hmmm good jadoo very good

kahan sai paya hai tumnai yeh dimagh

kahan sai aati hai uss mai yeh batain

mai abhee kahee nahee janay wali

aap sab ko abhee boht hai jhailna mujhay

Bass sammia kaya karain Allah nay deya hai demag (app ka bee Quota muj ko deiya tha :P)

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woooooooooow kia shairi hai ;)

:D thanks kashoo chupkali :P

tum bee kuch apna lika howa post kar du , shairy section mein bara copy paste karthay hoo :P

Edited by *jadoo*

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Welldone Jadoo :flower:

buht aacha likha lakin jadoo aap mujay ye tou bataien k aap nai mujay etna sad kab dekh liyaa  :P

:D thanks

AAMAN EMAN app ke Poetry par kar :P

kunki woo sad hotee hai na isliya wasay tu app kisi joker say kaam tu nahee

:laugh:

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:goodpost:

sum very good stuff from very nice ppl

kaafi talent hai humaray cy per  :rolleyes:

:) thanks Coollll g

talent hai tu isliya CY chal raha hai na :D

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well done jadoo! very nice !!

thanks dear :flower:

tum bee kuch post kar du :)

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