Shabo 0 Posted August 20, 2002 Salaam everyone! Tootay huay paiymaaney mey jaam nahi aatha, Ishq k mareez ko araam nahi aatha... Ai dil thornay walay tu ney yeh to socha hotha, Toota hua dil kisi k kaam nahi aatha. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alishaikh 0 Posted August 20, 2002 salaam shabo aachi shairi hai aap ki koi shair paish karta laikin mujhay koi sjair aata hi nahi kyoo kai mujhay shairi say leegao hi nahi hai. aap mair kooshk meezaji dreamland mai phar chooki hoo gi . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alishaikh 0 Posted August 20, 2002 salaaam bus mujhay aik sair aata hai aur wo kai kai kharukta kharukta duba aaya mai sumjha maira aaba aaya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alishaikh 0 Posted August 20, 2002 salaam shabo aap ki shairi bohot aachi hooti hai. mairi taruf say yai doo shair hai JO ZAKHUM TUM SAY MILLAY HAI WO GINAY GAY NAHI CHALOO YAI FAISALA KAR LAY KAI UB MILLAY GAY NAHI KABHI TAU AA KAI PALUTNA KABHI TAU MOOR JAANA YAI DAIKHNAY KO KAI HUM SAH BHI SAKAY HAI YA NAHI AK AUR SHAIR WO BAZAHIR JO ZAMANAY SAY KHAFA LUGTA HAI HUNS KAR DAIKHAY TAU DUNIYA SAY JOODA LUGTA HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 21, 2002 :) hi 2 all, hum nay faqon main bhi taqseem kiya ab- hayat hum woh shay hain k humain yaad karay gi dunya sari with regardz muniba(rubab) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted August 21, 2002 salam all members special for someone ji ;) teraa hijr mera naseeb hai tera Gam hi meri hayaat hai mujhe teri duuri kaa Gam ho kyuon tu kahin bhi ho mere saath hai mere vaaste tere naam par koi harf aaye nahin nahin mujhe Khauf-e-duniya nahin magar mere ruu-ba-ruu terii zaat hai tera vasl ai meri dilrubaa nahin meri kismat to kya hua meri mahajabin yahin kam hai kya teri hasraton kaa to saath hai tera ishq mujh pe hai maharban mere dil ko haasil hai do jahaan merii jaan-e-jaan isii baat par merii jaan jaaye to baat hai love ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 21, 2002 Salaam to my fellow shaiyars!!! lol Wah kya shairi paish ki hai aap ney ji!! :;): Kyoun chupkay sey dil mey uthar jaathey hain woh log Jin sey humari kismat k thaarey nahi milthey?? Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted August 21, 2002 salam ji how are you? aashiqii be-dilii se mushkil hai phir muhabbat usii se mushkil hai ishq aaGaaz hii se mushkil hai sabr karanaa abhii se mushkil hai ham ?? aasaa.N hai.n aur hamaare liye dushmanii dostii se mushkil hai jis ko sab be-vafaa samajhate ho.n bevafaa_ii usii se mushkil hai ek do duusare se sahel na jaan har ko_ii har kisii se mushkil hai [sahel=approachable] tuu baa-zid hai to jaa 'Faraz' magar vaapasii us galii se mushkil hai love ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 21, 2002 W/salaam ji Lagi na ho choat jisey wo dard kisi ka kya jaanay Khud shama ko maloom nahi kyoun jalthay hain parwaney :oo: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 21, 2002 hi friends, there is something for u all.... !! (yaar kam se kam koi compliments hi de diya karo).... terii baatein hii sunaane aaye dost bhii dil hii dukhaane aaye phuul khilate hain to ham sochate hain tere aane ke zamaane aaye aisii kuchh chup sii lagii hai jaise ham tujhe haal sunaane aaye ishq tanhaa hai sar-e-manzil-e-Gam kaun ye bojh uthaane aaye ajanabii dost hamein dekh ke ham kuchh tujhe yaad dilaane aaye dil Dhadakataa hai safar ke hangaam kaash phir koii bulaane aaye ab to rone se bhii dil dukhataa hai shaayad ab hosh Thikaane aaye kyaa kahin phir koii bastii ujadii log kyoun jashn manaane aaye so raho maut ke pahaluu mein Faraz niind kis vaqt na jaane aaye bye sameer! :( :( :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 22, 2002 salam good poetry sameer,ibrahim & shabo jii jab bhi ata hey mera nam tere nam ke sath jane kyun loog mere nam se jal jate hain. thanks farhann :;): :;): :;): Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted August 22, 2002 salam "JI" How are you guyz? Socha ke sameer sahib ka bhi shikwa door kardey ;)wah wah sameer sahib kiya poetry pesh ki hai aap ne :P by the BURA na lage to ek baat kahoo aap yeh barsati mendak ki tarah kiyun post kartey hein. REGULAR raho yaar aap ki chioce bohat achi hai.may be aap ka shikwa door ho gaya hoga :) har suu dikhaa_ii dete hai.n vo jalvaagar mujhe kyaa-kyaa fareb detii hai merii nazar mujhe Daalaa hai beKhudii ne ajab raah par mujhe aa.Nkhe.n hai.n aur kuchh nahii.n aataa nazar mujhe dil leke meraa dete ho daaG-e-jigar mujhe ye baat bhuulane kii nahii.n umr bhar mujhe aayaa na raas naalaa-e-dil kaa asar mujhe ab tum mile to kuchh nahii.n apanii Khabar mujhe love ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 22, 2002 W/salaam ji How r u all? Hi to Farhann, Sameer & Ibrahim ji! Aap sab doston ki shairi qabil e tareef hai... parh kar beyhad maza aatha hai :;): Wah wah Sameer kya kehnay!!! Shaam sey un k tasavur ka nasha tha ithna Neend aiee hai tho aankhon ney bura maana hai. Farhann sahib aap k shair k jawab mey arz hai.... Ithni milti hai meray shairon sey theri surath K log tujhay mera mehboob sochthay hain!! (Agar ilfaz mey kuch gar bar ho gaiee ho tho maazrath plse!!) Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 22, 2002 hi, thanx yaar aap logo itni tareef bhi na karo kahin aisa na ho FARAZ sahb khud mere pass aakar kahein ke ab se meri ashaar aap hi parha karo juz tere koi bhii din raat na jaane mere tuu kahaan hai magar ai dost puraane mere tuu bhii Khushbuu hai magar meraa tajassus bekaar barq-e-aavaaraa kii maanind thikhaane mere shamaa ki lau thii ke vo tuu thaa magar hijr kii raat der tak rotaa rahaa koi sirhaane mere Khalq kii beKhabarii hai ke merii rusavaai log mujh ko hii sunaate hain fasaane mere luT ke bhii Khush huun ke ashkon se bharaa hai daaman dekh Gaarat-gar-e-dil ye bhii khazaane mere aaj ik aur baras biit gayaa us ke bagair jis ke hote hue hote the zamaane mere kaash tuu bhii merii aavaaz sunataa ho phir pukaare hai tujhe dil kii sadaa ne mere kaash tuu bhii kabhii aajaaye masiihaaii ko log aate hain bahut dil ko dukhaane mere kaash auro kii tarah main bhii kah sakataa baat sun lii hai merii aaj Khudaa ne mere tuu hai kis haal mein ai zuud faraamosh mere mujh ko to chhiin liyaa ahad-e-vafaa ne mere chaaraagar yuun to bahut hain magar ai jaan-e-'Faraz' juz tere aur koi Gam na jaane mere bye take care sam! :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 22, 2002 hi,sameer kesey hoo FARAZ ne kaha hey "ANDHEY ko andherey mey bari door ki soogii" :;): farhann Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 22, 2002 sameer ayr naraz nahee hona ajj mazaq karne koo dil cha raha tha ok keep smile :D thanx farhann Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 23, 2002 Hi Sam & Farhann... keep up the jokes lol :) Meri raathein theri yaadon sey saji rehthi hain, Meri saansein theri khushbu mey basi rehthi hain. Meri aankhon mey thera sapna saja rehtha hai, Haan meray dil mey thera aks basa rehtha hai. Iss tharha meray dil k bohoth paas ho thum, Jis tharha paas hee shey rag k khuda rehtha hai, Tum ko malom bhi shaiyad yeh kabhi na ho...... Meray aangan mey lagay phool gawahee daingey Mey ney arsay sey kisi phool ko dekha bhi nahi, Tujh ko socha hai tho phir tujh ko socha hai fakth, Teray siwa kisi aur ko socha bhi nahi. Tum ko maloom bhi shaiyad yeh kabhi na ho.............. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alishaikh 0 Posted August 23, 2002 salaam to all community members, mairi taruf say yai aik shair hai kabool karay mairi tunhaiyoo tum hi laga loo mujhay seenay say kai mai gubraa gaiya hooo ihs tarah roo rooo kar jeenay say shabo ki poem mujhay bohot pasund aaye hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 24, 2002 hi,shabnam jee ajj dil ne kaha tera pora nam lerak pukar loon. gaflat hoo,neened hoo,ya bedari hoo tujhey dekha to nahee hey tujhey socha hey bohat. keep smile :( thanx farhaNN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted August 24, 2002 salaamz Zindagi bina teray ik saza ho gai Tu milley he nahi or Juda ho gai love yaz all naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 24, 2002 hi all, its ok farhan barey barey desho mai aise chotey chotey andho ko door ki soojti rehti hai :P main to aavaaraa shaayar huuN merii kyaa auqaat ek do giit pareshaan se gaa letaa huuN gahe gahe kisii naakaam sharaabii kii tarah ek do zahar ke saaGar bhii chaDhaa letaa huuN tuu ke ik vaadii-e-gul rang kii shahzaadii hai ek bekaar se insaaN ke liye vaqf na ho tere Khvaabon ke jaziiron men ba.Dii raunaq hai ek anjaan se tuufaaN ke liye vaqf na ho bye take care sam!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 25, 2002 hi all, is duniyaa me.n sab hai.n akele koii kisii kaa nahii.n kaisii mohabbat kasii vafaayen kaise pyaar ke sapane aaj Khayaalon mai bhii nahiin hain saath jo the kal apane jhuuThee hain sab jag ke mele saayaa bhii apanaa nahi kaaGaz kii ek naaNv hai jiivan koii nahiin hai maanjhii biich bhavar men kaun banaa hai Duubate man kaa saathii kahate hain maujon ke rele koii kinaaraa nahiin bye take care sam!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 26, 2002 salam sameer, i hope k app theek hogey tumharey sath sada rahsakain zarori too nahee akeley pan mey koi dost dosra rakhna thanx farhaNN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted August 27, 2002 salaamz all kaissay ho aap sub log. ok farhan now here i am:) aub theek? well here is one of the shair that i read in a book i think. and i love it. so here it is. DosrooN kay liyay jo zinda hai Un kay dukh bay hisaab hotay hai. and one more shair thora thora jhoot mila lay apni sachi bato ein warna jhootay logo mein to kaissay umr guzaray ga shehar kay chorahay pay aina lay ker mat jaana apna chechra deikh kay tujh ko her koi pathar maray ga. love u all and b happy and always SMILE cuz I CARE! Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 27, 2002 salam naz, thanx 4 reply & welcom back ann milo ya ane sey inkar karo faisla jo bhi karna hey aik bar karo dil mey reh kar bat asar kho bethey gii hoont hain chup too ankhoon sey iqrar karo. thanx keep smile farhaNN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
