Ibraahim 0 Posted August 15, 2002 salam ji aisey to na karo ji koi talab bhi nahi our soguar bhi hoon pukata bhi nahi mehvey intezar bhi hoon najaney kitney iradoon mey but gaya hai wajood bhula diya ussey our be qarar bhi hoon ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 15, 2002 hi all, nice tu see ur shairi....... first of all i think ke mai phir se kabaab mai haddi ban raha ho0.... magr mujhe kisi ka mail mila to samajh mai aaya ke mai bhi shairi ki try karta ho0 waisey mai aap logo jaisa shair to ho0 nahi magr phir bhi this is one for u ..... kuchh tabiyat hii milii thii aisii chain se jiiney kii soorat na hui jis ko chaahaa use apanaa na sake jo milaa us se muhabbat na hui jis se jab tak mile dil hii se mile dil jo badalaa to fasaanaa badalaa rasmein duniyaa kii nibhaane ke liye hamase rishton kii tijaarat na hui duur se thaa vo kaii cheharon mein paas se koii bhii vaisaa na lagaa bevafaayi bhii usii kaa thaa chalan phir kisii se hii shikaayat na huii vaqt ruuThaa rahaa bachche kii tarah raah mai koi khilaunaa na milaa dostii bhii to nibhaaii na gaii dushmanii mai bhii adaavat na huii bye sameer! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 15, 2002 Salaam Ibrahim Ji & Sameer Hey that was a brilliant piece of poetry Sameer. parh kar mazaa agaiya :;): Hey aap kebab mey hadi nahi ho.. aisa kyoun sochthay ho? The board is for everyone to join in agar kisi ko bura lagtha hai tho pm ki facility mojood hai otherwise the forum is free for ALL to use... I hope to read more of your poetry soon!! This is for both of you... Jaisa jithna rishtha tha us ko ruswa math karna Hum bhi aisa nahi karaingay thum bhi aisa na karna. Keep posting, I love ur shairi :;): Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 15, 2002 hi dearz, manzil k badlay paon gi yaadianour kuch ansoo mujh ko yeh maloom hai laikn saath meray kuch door to chal thankx waqas 4 welcoming me , MUNIBA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 16, 2002 salam ,ibrahim jee,shabo jee,sameer and muniba kushi hoo rahi hey itne sare loog shairy kar rahe hain aur app sub loog isi tarhan achi shairy karte rahain and sameer apki poetry bohat zabardast thi . manziloon ki bat chooro kis ney paii manzilain aik safar acha laga aik ham safar acha laga ............................................... dekhii hey phelii bar uski ankh mey nami asa lag raha hey samander udas hey .............................................. shabo jii only for u. mohabatoon mey qataeen too ho hii jati hain mohobatoon ka taqaza hey dar guzr krna thanks farhannnnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted August 16, 2002 salam kaisey hain sub log ji? tum merii aa.Nkh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge a.nkahii baat ko samajhoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa ham ne Khushiyo.n kii tarah dukh bhii ikaTThe dekhe safaah-e-ziist ko palaToge to yaad aauu.Ngaa isii a.ndaaz me.n hote the muKhaatib mujh se Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa sard raato.n ke mahakate hu_e sannnaaTo.n me.n jab kisii phuul ko chuumoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa ab tere ashk mai.n ho.nTho.n se churaa letaa huu.N haath se Khud i.nhe.n po.nchhoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa shaal pahanaa_egaa ab kaun disambar me.n tumhe.n baarisho.n me.n kabhii bhiigoge to yaadd aauu.Ngaa aaj tuu mahafil-e-yaaraa.N pe ho maGaruur bahut jab kabhii TuuT ke bikharoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa haadase aaye.nge jiivan me.n to tum hoke niDhaal kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aa_uu.Ngaa is me.n shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa love ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted August 16, 2002 hello arz kiya hai , hallat k qadmo main sikandar nahi girta totay jo sitara woh zamin par nahi girta girtay hain baray shok say sumandar main darya laikin kisi darya main sumandar nahi girta from , RABBIA(ash) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 16, 2002 hi,rabbia appki poetry pasand aiii only for u mohabatain too faqat intahaieen mangti hain mohabatoon mey bhala etedal kya karna kush rahooo farhannnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 16, 2002 hi, this is one for u alll.............. barason ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dilrubaa saa ab zahan mein nahin hai par naam thaa bhalaa saa abruu khinche khinche se aaNkhein jhukii jhukii sii baaten rukii rukii sii lahajaa thakaa thakaa saa alfaaz the ke jugnuu aavaaz ke safar men ban jaaye jangalon mai jis tarah raastaa saa Khvaabon mai Khvaab us ke yaadon mai yaad us kii niindon mai ghul gayaa ho jaise ke ratjagaa saa pahale bhii log aaye kitane hii zindagii men vo har tarah se lekin auron se thaa judaa saa agalii muhabbaton ne vo naamuraadiyaaN diin taazaa rafaaqaton se dil thaa Daraa Daraa saa kuchh ye ke muddaton se ham bhii nahiin the roye kuchh zahar men bujhaa thaa ahabaab kaa dilaasaa phir yuuN huaa ke saavan aaNkhon men aa base the phir yuuN huaa ke jaise dil bhii thaa aabalaa saa ab sach kahen to yaaro ham ko Khabar nahiin thii ban jaayegaa qayaamat ik vaaqiaa zaraa saa tevar the beruKhii ke andaaz dostii ke vo ajanabii thaa lekin lagataa thaa aashnaa saa ham dasht the ke dariyaa ham zahar the ke amrit naahaq thaa zoNum ham ko jab vo nahiin thaa pyaasaa ham ne bhii us ko dekhaa kal shaam ittefaaqan apanaa bhii haal hai ab logo 'Faraz' kaa saa bye take care Samir! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 16, 2002 hi dearz, :;): kuch log bicha kar kanton ko gulshan ki tawaqa rakhtay hai sholon ko hawain day day kar sawan ki tawaqa rakhtay hain mahol kay taptay sahra say halat ki ujri shakhon say hum ahlay junoon phoolon say bharay daman ki tawaqa rakhtay hain with luv, MUNIBA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 17, 2002 hi,sameer & muniba. resham zulfoon nilam ankhoon wale achay lagte hain mey shair hoon mujhay ujley chaery achey lagte hain tum kud sochoo adhi rat ko thanday chand ki chaoon mey tanha rahooon per ham dono kitney achay lagtey hain kal us rothay rothay yar ko dekha too mahsoos howa mohsin ujley jism per melay kapray achay lagtey hain thanx farhannnnnnnnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted August 17, 2002 hi 2 alllllllllllllll, farishta mujh ko kahnay say meri tahqeer hoti hai main masjood-o-malaik hoon mujhay insaan hi rahnay do ??? kaisa laga rabbia(ash) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted August 17, 2002 hi all, I never thaught that u all would be such a good poets . I was myself thinking that I am one of the best poet, but u know most of my thinkings are wrong..... so asusual this happens again, ne wayz hum bhi itni jaldi haar nahi maantey waisey this ghazal is one of my favourite one so i hope so that u might like that. MAI BHOOL JAO TUMHAI AB YEH MUNAASIB HAI MAGR BHULAANA BHI CHAHOO TO KIS TARHA BHOOLOO KE TUM TO PHIR BHI HAQEEQAT HO KOI KHWAB NAHI YAHAN TO DIL KA YEH AALAM HAI KIYA KAHOO KAMBAKHT BHULA SAKA NA YEH WOH SILSILA JO THA HI NAHI WOH EIK KHAYAAL JO AAWAZ TAK GAYA HI NAHI WOH EIK BAAT JO MAI KEH NAHI SAKA TUMSAI WOH EIK RAQT JO HUM MAI KABHI RAHA HI NAHI MUJHE HAI YAAD WOH SUB KUCH JO KABHI HUWA HI NAHI AGAR YEH HAAL HAI DIL KA TO KOI SAMJHAYE TUMHAI BHULAANA BHI CHAHOO TO KIS TARHA BHOOLOO KE TUM TO PHIR BHI HAQEEQAT HO KOI KHWAB NAHI! bye! Regards! Sameer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 17, 2002 hi sameer only 4 u, hazaron manzilain hon gi hazaron kaflay hon gay nigahain hum ko dhundain gi na janay hum kahan hon gay HUM BHI SAMEER AAP KO HARNAY NAHI DAY GAY, BEST OF LUCK WITH REGARDZ MUNIBA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted August 17, 2002 salaamz all kaissay ho aap sub log? Udasi tum ussay kehna tum usay kehna Hawa key haath mein kuch bhi nahi hai or sada wiran phirtey hai Khila jo zaat key Her chaar diwari kay andar kubhi bhi khul kay ro paya nahi hai tera bichra howa ujray howay shehro mein aksar bhagta phirta hai aksar jagta phirta hai so paya nahi hai or........udasi tum usay kehna kay shamo key bilagti guftuguyay kis kadar taklef dah hai koi kya janay kisie ko ilm kya jub raat dhalti hai sitaray upni upni kokh say yadein laho say or Supnay upni upno lash say bahir nikaltay hai tou kitnay jism jaltay hai Dua kay, arzuo kay wafaoo kay Usay kehna Tumhey dukh mein nahi ho Hum bhi upni rakh Hatho mein liyay or siskiya laitey howie tanhaiyo kay baal kholay bain kurtay hai Udasi tum usay kehna tum he dukh mein nahi tunha yaha per bhi hawa kay haath mein kuch bhi nahi hai Khila jo zaat key her chaar dewari kay andar hai kubhi bhi bhar na paiga yaha bhi her sada wiran phirtey hai Chahnay walo ka nadeda khuda Judai kay kissiey ban mein bhatakta phir raha hai! love u all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 18, 2002 WELCOME BACK NAZ, salamz u jab apne hee log aeeen lotney keleye dosti ka taqaza hey ghar khula rakhna keep smile :D thanx farhannnnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 18, 2002 hi 2 farhan+ibrahim+sameer+shabo+rabbia+nazish+waqas+asim+ali jissay bar baar milay thay tum, woh meray siwa koi our tha meray dil ko tab-e-nazar kahan,tumhain daykhta koi our tha main faraib-e-khora rahay ghum,chala sab k sath qadam qadam meray humsafar nahi jantay,mera rasta koi our tha gulay tazayeh tera rang-o-bu,howa ab say barh k tera adoo kisi our nay tujh ko chun liya, tujhay chahta koi our tha sabhi rabt baysaropa howay,na milay na tujh say juda howay na alag tha tera jahan kabhi, na mera khuda koi our tha khula humdamon pay yeh raaz kab ,main tha aik umr say jan bulb mujhay roz miltay thay log sab,magar ashna koi our tha kabhi roshni mujhhay ki aata,kabhi saaiy saath laga diya kbhi sab charagh bujha diya, woh tumhi thay ya koi our tha +9 with best regards muniba(rubab) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted August 18, 2002 hi :;): , hi 2 all, un say zaroor milna saliqay k log hain sar bhi kalam karain gay baray ahtaram say MUNIBA aap nay jo ghazal likhi hai thats mi fav 1. really i liked that RABBIA(ash) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 18, 2002 salamz both of u rabia and muniba good poetry both of u :D mere samne sey jo abhi abhi nazar bacha ke guzar gaey ye mere hee shair ke loog hain mere ghar se ghar hey mila howa. take care keep smile farhannnnnnnnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alishaikh 0 Posted August 18, 2002 salaaaaaam to aLl community members aap sub looog kaisay hai. mairi taruf say yai contribution hai Dhoondti phirti hai ab dast-o-bayabaan mein hamein zindagi hum se bichar kar khud bhi pashtai bohat take care ALLAHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 19, 2002 Salaam Everyone! Some great shairi has been posted by you guys... keep it up. Every single poem has been a delight to read... bohoth khoob :) Meri janib sey yeh shokhi bhara shair qabool karein - Nigahein mila kar nazrein churaana haseenaon ki ada hothi hai Humari iss adaa ko na bhula paana ashiqon ki saza hothi hai!! lol :;): Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 20, 2002 salam shabo jiiii, welcom back kabhi loot aeen too pochna nahee dekhna unhain ghoor sey jinhain raste mey kaber hoi ye rasta koi aur hey. thankx farhann Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted August 20, 2002 I think this topic has got a little overloaded. Keep up the Good work :D Only three more replies and It will be a hatric. Hey haven't you noticed there are 97 replies since the start of this topic. This topic is Extra Extra Hot. Let's see who'll make it to this point first. (Sorry, as usual, I could not post any shair cause I don't remember any :;): ) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 20, 2002 hi 2 all, tujhay aziz tha our main nay usko jeet liya meri taraf bhi to aik pal tera khuda daykhay :;): with best wishez, muniba(rubab) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted August 20, 2002 ??? hi , tumhara zarf hai k tum muhabbat bhul jatay ho humain to jiss nay bhi hans kar pukara yaad rahta hai from rabbia(ash) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
