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salam ji

aisey to na karo ji

koi talab bhi nahi our soguar bhi hoon

pukata bhi nahi mehvey intezar bhi hoon

najaney kitney iradoon mey but gaya hai wajood

bhula diya ussey our be qarar bhi hoon

ibrahim

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hi all,

       nice tu see ur shairi.......

   first of all i think ke mai phir se kabaab mai haddi ban raha ho0.... magr mujhe kisi ka mail mila to samajh mai aaya ke mai bhi shairi ki try karta ho0 waisey mai aap logo jaisa shair to ho0 nahi magr phir bhi this is one for u .....

kuchh tabiyat hii milii thii aisii chain se jiiney kii soorat na hui

jis ko chaahaa use apanaa na sake jo milaa us se muhabbat na hui

jis se jab tak mile dil hii se mile dil jo badalaa to fasaanaa badalaa

rasmein duniyaa kii nibhaane ke liye hamase rishton kii tijaarat na hui

duur se thaa vo kaii cheharon mein paas se koii bhii vaisaa na lagaa

bevafaayi bhii usii kaa thaa chalan phir kisii se hii shikaayat na huii

vaqt ruuThaa rahaa bachche kii tarah raah mai koi khilaunaa na milaa

dostii bhii to nibhaaii na gaii dushmanii mai bhii adaavat na huii

bye

sameer!

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Salaam Ibrahim Ji & Sameer

Hey that was a brilliant piece of poetry Sameer. parh kar mazaa agaiya :;): Hey aap kebab mey hadi nahi ho.. aisa kyoun sochthay ho? The board is for everyone to join in agar kisi ko bura lagtha hai tho pm ki facility mojood hai otherwise the forum is free for ALL to use... I hope to read more of your poetry soon!!

This is for both of you...

Jaisa jithna rishtha tha us ko ruswa math karna

Hum bhi aisa nahi karaingay thum bhi aisa na karna.

Keep posting, I love ur shairi :;):

Sx

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hi dearz,

       :love:

          manzil k badlay paon gi yaadianour kuch ansoo

          mujh ko yeh maloom hai laikn saath meray kuch door to chal

thankx waqas 4 welcoming me ,

MUNIBA

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salam ,ibrahim jee,shabo jee,sameer and muniba

kushi hoo rahi hey itne sare loog shairy kar rahe hain aur app sub loog isi tarhan achi shairy karte rahain and sameer apki poetry bohat zabardast thi .

manziloon ki bat chooro kis ney paii manzilain

aik safar acha laga aik ham safar acha laga

...............................................

dekhii hey phelii bar uski ankh mey nami

asa lag raha hey samander udas hey

..............................................

shabo jii only for u.

mohabatoon mey qataeen too ho hii jati hain

mohobatoon ka taqaza hey dar guzr krna

thanks

farhannnnnnnn

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salam

kaisey hain sub log ji?

tum merii aa.Nkh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge

a.nkahii baat ko samajhoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

ham ne Khushiyo.n kii tarah dukh bhii ikaTThe dekhe

safaah-e-ziist ko palaToge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

isii a.ndaaz me.n hote the muKhaatib mujh se

Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

sard raato.n ke mahakate hu_e sannnaaTo.n me.n

jab kisii phuul ko chuumoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

ab tere ashk mai.n ho.nTho.n se churaa letaa huu.N

haath se Khud i.nhe.n po.nchhoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

shaal pahanaa_egaa ab kaun disambar me.n tumhe.n

baarisho.n me.n kabhii bhiigoge to yaadd aauu.Ngaa

aaj tuu mahafil-e-yaaraa.N pe ho maGaruur bahut

jab kabhii TuuT ke bikharoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

haadase aaye.nge jiivan me.n to tum hoke niDhaal

kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aa_uu.Ngaa

is me.n shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii

tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aauu.Ngaa

love

ibrahim

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hello

arz kiya hai ,

hallat k qadmo main sikandar nahi girta

totay jo sitara woh zamin par nahi girta

girtay hain baray shok say sumandar main darya

laikin kisi darya main sumandar nahi girta

from ,

RABBIA(ash) :cool:

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hi,rabbia

appki poetry pasand aiii

only for u

mohabatain too faqat intahaieen mangti hain

mohabatoon mey bhala etedal kya karna

kush rahooo

farhannnnnn

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hi,

   this is one for u alll..............

barason ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dilrubaa saa

ab zahan mein nahin hai par naam thaa bhalaa saa

abruu khinche khinche se aaNkhein jhukii jhukii sii

baaten rukii rukii sii lahajaa thakaa thakaa saa

alfaaz the ke jugnuu aavaaz ke safar men

ban jaaye jangalon mai jis tarah raastaa saa

Khvaabon mai Khvaab us ke yaadon mai yaad us kii

niindon mai ghul gayaa ho jaise ke ratjagaa saa

pahale bhii log aaye kitane hii zindagii men

vo har tarah se lekin auron se thaa judaa saa

agalii muhabbaton ne vo naamuraadiyaaN diin

taazaa rafaaqaton se dil thaa Daraa Daraa saa

kuchh ye ke muddaton se ham bhii nahiin the roye

kuchh zahar men bujhaa thaa ahabaab kaa dilaasaa

phir yuuN huaa ke saavan aaNkhon men aa base the

phir yuuN huaa ke jaise dil bhii thaa aabalaa saa

ab sach kahen to yaaro ham ko Khabar nahiin thii

ban jaayegaa qayaamat ik vaaqiaa zaraa saa

tevar the beruKhii ke andaaz dostii ke

vo ajanabii thaa lekin lagataa thaa aashnaa saa

ham dasht the ke dariyaa ham zahar the ke amrit

naahaq thaa zoNum ham ko jab vo nahiin thaa pyaasaa

ham ne bhii us ko dekhaa kal shaam ittefaaqan

apanaa bhii haal hai ab logo 'Faraz' kaa saa

bye

take care

Samir!

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hi dearz, :;):

         kuch log bicha kar kanton ko gulshan ki tawaqa rakhtay hai

     sholon ko hawain day day kar sawan ki tawaqa rakhtay hain

    mahol kay taptay sahra say halat ki ujri shakhon say

        hum ahlay junoon phoolon say bharay daman ki tawaqa rakhtay hain

 with luv,

   MUNIBA

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hi,sameer & muniba.

 resham zulfoon nilam ankhoon wale achay lagte hain

 mey shair hoon mujhay ujley chaery achey lagte hain

 tum kud sochoo adhi rat ko thanday chand ki chaoon mey

 tanha rahooon per ham dono kitney achay lagtey hain

 kal us rothay rothay yar ko dekha too mahsoos howa

 mohsin ujley jism per melay kapray achay lagtey hain

thanx

farhannnnnnnnnnn.

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hi 2 alllllllllllllll,

        farishta mujh ko kahnay say meri tahqeer hoti hai

         main masjood-o-malaik hoon mujhay insaan hi rahnay do

    ???

       kaisa laga

       rabbia(ash)

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hi all,

      I never thaught that u all would be such a good poets  :upside: . I was myself thinking that I am one of the best poet, but u know most of my thinkings are wrong..... so asusual this happens again, ne wayz hum bhi itni jaldi haar nahi maantey waisey this ghazal is one of my favourite one so i hope so that u might like that.

       

 MAI BHOOL JAO TUMHAI

 AB YEH MUNAASIB HAI

 MAGR BHULAANA BHI CHAHOO TO KIS TARHA BHOOLOO

 KE TUM TO PHIR BHI HAQEEQAT HO KOI KHWAB NAHI

 YAHAN TO DIL KA YEH AALAM HAI KIYA KAHOO

                              KAMBAKHT

 BHULA SAKA NA YEH WOH SILSILA JO THA HI NAHI

 WOH EIK KHAYAAL JO AAWAZ TAK GAYA HI NAHI

 WOH EIK BAAT JO MAI KEH NAHI SAKA TUMSAI

 WOH EIK RAQT JO HUM MAI KABHI RAHA HI NAHI

 MUJHE HAI YAAD WOH SUB KUCH JO KABHI HUWA HI NAHI

 AGAR YEH HAAL HAI DIL KA TO KOI SAMJHAYE

 TUMHAI BHULAANA BHI CHAHOO TO KIS TARHA BHOOLOO

 KE TUM TO PHIR BHI HAQEEQAT HO KOI KHWAB NAHI!

 bye!

 Regards!

 Sameer

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hi sameer only 4 u,

    hazaron manzilain hon gi hazaron kaflay hon gay

    nigahain hum ko dhundain gi na janay hum kahan hon gay

 

HUM BHI SAMEER AAP KO HARNAY NAHI DAY GAY, BEST OF LUCK

  WITH REGARDZ

  MUNIBA

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salaamz all

kaissay ho aap sub log?

Udasi tum ussay kehna

tum usay kehna

Hawa key haath mein kuch bhi nahi hai or sada wiran phirtey hai

Khila jo zaat key

Her chaar diwari kay andar

kubhi bhi khul kay ro paya nahi hai

tera bichra howa

ujray howay shehro mein aksar bhagta phirta hai

aksar jagta phirta hai

so paya nahi hai

or........udasi

tum usay kehna

kay shamo key bilagti guftuguyay

kis kadar taklef dah hai

koi kya janay

kisie ko ilm kya

jub raat dhalti hai

sitaray upni upni kokh say

yadein laho say

or Supnay upni upno lash say bahir nikaltay hai

tou kitnay jism jaltay hai

Dua kay, arzuo kay wafaoo kay

Usay kehna

Tumhey dukh mein nahi ho

Hum bhi upni rakh

Hatho mein liyay

or siskiya laitey howie

tanhaiyo kay baal kholay bain kurtay hai

Udasi tum usay kehna

tum he dukh mein nahi tunha

yaha per bhi hawa kay haath mein kuch bhi nahi hai

Khila jo zaat key her chaar dewari kay andar hai

kubhi bhi bhar na paiga

yaha bhi

her sada wiran phirtey hai

Chahnay walo ka nadeda khuda

Judai kay kissiey ban mein bhatakta phir raha hai!

love u all

Naz

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WELCOME BACK NAZ,

 salamz u

 

 jab apne hee log aeeen lotney keleye

 dosti ka taqaza hey ghar khula rakhna

 keep smile :D

 thanx

 farhannnnnnnn

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hi 2

farhan+ibrahim+sameer+shabo+rabbia+nazish+waqas+asim+ali

   jissay bar baar milay thay tum, woh meray siwa koi our tha

   meray dil ko tab-e-nazar kahan,tumhain daykhta koi our tha

  main faraib-e-khora rahay ghum,chala sab k sath qadam qadam

 meray humsafar nahi jantay,mera rasta koi our tha

gulay tazayeh tera rang-o-bu,howa ab say barh k tera adoo

kisi our nay tujh ko chun liya, tujhay chahta koi our tha

sabhi rabt baysaropa howay,na milay na tujh say juda howay

na alag tha tera jahan kabhi, na mera khuda koi our tha

khula humdamon pay yeh raaz kab ,main tha aik umr say jan bulb

mujhay roz miltay thay log sab,magar ashna koi our tha

kabhi roshni mujhhay ki aata,kabhi saaiy saath laga diya

kbhi sab charagh bujha diya, woh tumhi thay ya koi our tha

+9 :upside:  :upside:

  with best regards

    muniba(rubab)

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hi :;): ,

   :devil:

     hi 2 all,

        un say zaroor milna saliqay k log hain

        sar bhi kalam karain gay baray ahtaram say

 

 MUNIBA aap nay jo ghazal likhi hai thats mi fav 1. really i liked that

 RABBIA(ash) :blush:

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salamz both of u rabia and muniba

 good poetry both of u :D

 

  mere samne sey jo abhi abhi nazar bacha ke guzar gaey

  ye mere hee shair ke loog hain mere ghar se ghar hey mila howa.

 take care

 keep smile

 farhannnnnnnnnnn.

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salaaaaaam to aLl community members

aap sub looog kaisay hai.

mairi taruf say yai contribution hai

Dhoondti phirti hai ab dast-o-bayabaan mein hamein

zindagi hum se bichar kar khud bhi pashtai bohat

take care

           ALLAHAFIZ

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Salaam Everyone!

Some great shairi has been posted by you guys... keep it up.

Every single poem has been a delight to read... bohoth khoob :)

Meri janib sey yeh shokhi bhara shair qabool karein -

Nigahein mila kar nazrein churaana haseenaon ki ada hothi hai

Humari iss adaa ko na bhula paana ashiqon ki saza hothi hai!!

lol :;):

Sx

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salam shabo jiiii,

 welcom back

    kabhi loot aeen too pochna nahee dekhna unhain ghoor sey

   jinhain raste mey kaber hoi ye rasta koi aur hey.

 thankx

 farhann

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I think this topic has got a little overloaded. Keep up the Good work :D

Only three more replies and It will be a hatric. Hey haven't you noticed there are 97 replies since the start of this topic. This topic is Extra Extra Hot. Let's see who'll make it to this point first.

(Sorry, as usual, I could not post any shair cause I don't remember any :;): )

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hi 2 all,

        tujhay aziz tha our main nay usko jeet liya

          meri taraf bhi to aik pal tera khuda daykhay :;):

 with best wishez,

 muniba(rubab) :laugh:

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??? hi ,

   tumhara zarf hai k tum muhabbat bhul jatay ho

    humain to jiss nay bhi hans kar pukara yaad rahta hai

from

rabbia(ash)

:love:

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