Farhan 0 Posted August 8, 2002 salam shabo jeeee, dil too chamak sake ga kya phir bhi tarash key dekh lein sesha garane shair ke hatoon ka ye kamal bhi. thanx keep smile take care farhannnnnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted August 8, 2002 salaamz u guys I love one line from the song "December" of Ibrar so i wanna share this with you guys! TU GYA HAI TOU MEIN NAY JAANA HAI MERA DIL AUB BHI TERA DEEWANA HAI. that's all love u guyz Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 9, 2002 hi,naz salam ye judaeyoon ke raste bari door tak gaey jo geya phir na lota meri bat man jaoo. thankx farhannnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 9, 2002 Salaam Farhaan and Naz Kya baath hai kamal ki shairi paish ki hai aap ney... Naz that's a cute line u wrote... I like Abrar's track Sukh Diyaan Neendran and the line "sukh deeyan neendran deyveen unu raba, sada yaar mera wasda ravey"... awww I think that is sooooooooooo nice :;): OK here is one for you Farhaan... Rang us k hain jo chura lay jaiey, Neend us ki hai jo urra lay jaiey, "Uss" sey kehna k nahi uss k paas Phir bhi "S" ki dua lay jaiey!!!!! Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 10, 2002 hi,shabo je, how r u and i hope ke app theek ho gey. kitna chaha tha chupana aur chupa kuch bhi nahee us ne sub kuch sun liya mey ne kaha kuch bhi nahee. kush rahoo tum sada ye dua hey meri. tahankss farhannnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted August 10, 2002 Salaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam Shabo JI how are you all guys? well i am back ;) yaar masla yeh hai key meri entry hamesha galth time pe hoti hai for example jaiseyke farhan ne kaha " khush rahey tu sada ye dua hai meri " is jumley se yah laghta hai farhan sahib aap ki age bohat badi hai or aisey lag raha hai jaisey koi apni bachi ko dua de raha ho farhan sahib majnoo,ranjha,farhad bano aba to mat bano. lolz JI zara jawab to dijyeh!! ;) cheharaa meraa thaa nigaahe.n us kii Khaamushii me.n bhii vo baate.n us kii mere chehare pe Gazal likhatii ga_ii.n sher kahatii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n us kii shoKh lamho.n kaa pataa dene lagii.n tez hotii hu_ii saa.Nse.n us kii aise mausam bhii guzaare ham ne subahe.n jab apanii thii.n shaame.n us kii dhyaan me.n us ke ye aalam thaa kabhii aa.Nkh mahataab kii yaade.n us kii faisalaa mauj-e-havaa ne likkhaa aa.Ndhiyaa.N merii bahaare.n us kii niind is soch se TuuTii aksar kis tarah kaTatii hai.n raate.n us kii duur rah kar bhii sadaa rahatii hai mujh ko thaame hue baahe.n us kii take care ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 11, 2002 salam all mey shabo jee,ke jawab key bad kuch likhoon ga. thanks, farhannnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Waqas 48 Posted August 12, 2002 Hello dear members, As you know this is my first post to this Forum (or may be the last one here) I have just read this and want to share it with you, if you like it. AAJ PHIR DAIR TALAK..... Aaj phir baad-e-baharaan nay merey kanoon main Chupkey chupkey sey terey aaney ka poocha mujh sey Gungunatey hooey jharnoon nay zara tham tham kay Poocha sandeesa koi chithi koi aai hai Aaj phir rat jaga aangan main merey utrey ga Aaj phir neend ki devi mera ghar bhoolay gi Aaj phir chanad key chehrey ka ye anchooa talsam Mujhey daikhey ga tau bass daikhta reh jaaey ga Aaj phir bhoor bhay tak teri batain khoud sey Apni tanhaai sey kerti hi chali jaaon gi Aaj phir bar'ha ki maari hooi badli kooi Meri ankhoon main jo jhankey gi thithak jaaey gi Aaj phir dair talak, dair talak, dair talak Tu na aaey ga teri yaad chali aaey gi So tell me if you like it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 12, 2002 Salaam Waqas and all my friends! It was nice of you to share such a brilliant piece of poetry, it has been a delight to read. Very touching yet so true. Please do not make it your LAST post... keep the shairi board alive FOREVER!! I just want to say a big THANK YOU to all the friends I have met through the Coolyar forum... it has been very nice knowing you aur iss aakhri shair k saath... Jeena asaan tho nahi tujh sey bichar k lekin Apni haathon ki lakereein mitaaoon kaisay? Allah Hafiz Keep smiling always Love and best wishes Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kierca7 0 Posted August 12, 2002 Salaam Shabo I think your poem is great :P i also think all your other poems are very good :D . As you are one of the first members here you are also a moderater,also as you know most of the work put in to keep the com forum ticking over is yours. . I am pleading with you if it is your own decision to leave please please please reconsider ??? it has been a privalege to know you :) . See ya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 13, 2002 salamz all ye judaii bhi kitni ajeeb hey tujhey alwida bhi na kehsakey tere pass rehne ka zikr kya tere saher mey bhi na rehsakey farhannnnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted August 13, 2002 :) hi 2 all dears, aik share yaad aya hai, jo aalaa zarf hotay hain hamaysha jhuk k miltay hain, surahi sarnagoon ho k bhara karty hai paymana shair ka nam yaad nahi hai muniba Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Waqas 48 Posted August 13, 2002 First of all welcome here muniba. Dears thanks for your comments so i am planned to keep posting here so here is another for the members hope you like it ! Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha keh dil khel meiN kya jeetne wale bhi rote haiN woh jin ki chashm-e-khud-beeN auroN ko dekha nahi karti bhala kis dil se gham ke moti pirote haiN Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha keh kya maanind-e-sheesha paththaroN meiN baal aata hai asar aNgez hai ab tak mohabbat ka wohi jazba jo aise hosh-mandoN ko bhi yuN paagal banaata hai Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha mizaaj-e-husan meiN yuN yak-b-yak kya inqalaab aaya sitaara dekhna aur dekh kar afsurda ho jaana baDi taakheer se tum ko sitaaroN ka hisaab aaya Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha keh tark-e-rabt pe kya mujh se waihshi yaad aate haiN taa-alluq toDna aasaan tha to aaNkh kyuN nam hai anaa-parwar jafa-pesha bhi yuN aasuN bahate haiN Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha keh jalne aur jalaane meiN bhala kya lutf aata hai bas ek jhooti anaa ke waaste barbaad ho jaana khudi ke zaa-um meiN insaaN kitne dukh uThaata hai Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha LOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted August 13, 2002 :) hi 2 all friendz, mujhay laga k mujhay bhi koi share likhna chahiya so i m TUM ASMAN KI BULANDIYON SAY JALD LOT AANA MUJHAY ZAMIN K MASAIL PAY BAAT KARNI HAI acha lagay jab bhi batian na acha lagay tab bhi RABBIA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted August 13, 2002 Hey I feel like contributing too :) Kaaaash ke mujhe koi shair aata so I am contributing this EMPTY post :;): Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
®omeo 0 Posted August 13, 2002 AOA:D well i've seen some xcellent piece of poetry here :) i do write my own poetry when my mood swings towards it but 4 now, here's an excerpt kabhi iss nager tujay dekhna kabhi us nager tujay doondna kabhi raat bher tujay sochna kabhi raat bher tujay doondna mujay ja baja teri justju tujay doondta hoon main ku baku kahan khul saka teray ru baru mera iss kader tujay doondna mera khawab tha kay khayal tha wo arooj tha kay zawal tha kabhi fersh pay tujay dekhna kabhi arsh pay tujay doondna yahan her kisi say he bair hai tera sheher kerya e ghair hai yahan sehl bhe to nahin koi meray be-khaber tujay doondna teri yaad ayee to ro deya jo tu mil gaya tujay kho deya meray silsilay be ajeeb hain tujay chor ker tujay doondna Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 14, 2002 salamz all of u, ye kehna tha us sey mohabat hey mujhko ye kehne mey mujhko zamane lagey hain thankssss farhannnnnnnnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 14, 2002 Salaam everyone... an extended warm welcome to the NEW participators on the Shairi board namely Muniba, Rabbia, Romeo & Asim.. Thanks for sharing your poetry it was a pleasure to read... Asim lol :;): nice try MAYBE next time huh?!!! Here's one to be getting on with:- Aiee hai wo bahaar k naghmein bhi dhal paray Aisi khushi mili hai ka Ansoon bhi nikal paray. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
®omeo 0 Posted August 14, 2002 Thanx shabo jee :;): Bhool jana be issay yaad be kertay rehna acha lagta hai issi dhun main bikhertay rehna hijr walon say bari dair say seekha hum nay zinda rehnay k leyeh jaan say guzertay rehna Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 14, 2002 Ur welocme ji! Guzray lamhey chahathoon k yaad aiey tho ro paray Hum apni beybasi pey kabhi muskuraiey tho kabhi ro paray. :( :( :( Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted August 15, 2002 salam All and special for new Members ;) kiya hua ji kiyun ro rahey ho? kal jinhey zindagi rass thi bohat aaj dekha inhey udas bohat kiyun na roOon teri judai per din guzrey hein tery saath bohat ok...keep smile :) take care ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted August 15, 2002 hi dearz, yon to pathar ki bhi taqdeer badal sakty hai shart yeh hai k usay dil say tarasha jai :) from rabbia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted August 15, 2002 salam all of u tumhain tanha kar geya munfarid rehne ka shooq ab akele hee bath kar yadoon ke manzar dekhna farhannnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alishaikh 0 Posted August 15, 2002 salaaaaaaaaamz shabo aachi kooshish hai shairi wali jari rakhoooo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 15, 2002 Salaam Ibrahim "JI", Farhan, Rabbia Nice poetry thanks for sharing it :D Bas ji ronay ka mood thha, ro paray :P I would like to welcome Ali on the Shairi board... thanks for your kind words please feel free to add some of your poetry, we would all love to read it!! Ik arz e wafaa bhi kar na sakey Kuch keh na sakey sun na sakey Yahaan hum ney zabaan hi kholee thi Wahaan aankh jhuki sharmaa bhi gaiee Allah Hafiz Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
