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salam shabo jeeee,

 dil too chamak sake ga kya phir bhi tarash key dekh lein

 sesha garane shair ke hatoon ka ye kamal bhi.

 thanx

 keep smile

 take care

 farhannnnnnnn.

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salaamz u guys

I love one line from the song "December" of Ibrar so i wanna share this with you guys!

TU GYA HAI TOU MEIN NAY JAANA HAI MERA DIL AUB BHI TERA DEEWANA HAI.

that's all

love u guyz

Naz

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hi,naz

salam

ye judaeyoon ke raste bari door tak gaey

jo geya phir na lota meri bat man jaoo.

thankx

farhannnnnnn

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Salaam Farhaan and Naz

Kya baath hai kamal ki shairi paish ki hai aap ney...

Naz that's a cute line u wrote... I like Abrar's track Sukh Diyaan Neendran and the line "sukh deeyan neendran deyveen unu raba, sada yaar mera wasda ravey"... awww I think that is sooooooooooo nice  :;):

OK here is one for you Farhaan...

Rang us k hain jo chura lay jaiey,

Neend us ki hai jo urra lay jaiey,

"Uss" sey kehna k nahi uss k paas

Phir bhi "S" ki dua lay jaiey!!!!!

Take care

Sx

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hi,shabo je,

how r u and i hope ke app theek ho gey.

kitna chaha tha chupana aur chupa kuch bhi nahee

us ne sub kuch sun liya mey ne kaha kuch bhi nahee.

kush rahoo tum sada ye dua hey meri.

tahankss

farhannnnn.

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Salaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam Shabo JI

how are you all guys? well i am back ;)

yaar masla yeh hai key meri entry hamesha galth time pe hoti hai for example jaiseyke farhan ne kaha " khush rahey tu sada ye dua hai meri "

is jumley se yah laghta hai farhan sahib aap ki age bohat badi hai or aisey lag raha hai jaisey koi apni bachi ko dua de raha ho

farhan sahib majnoo,ranjha,farhad bano aba to mat bano. lolz

JI zara jawab to dijyeh!! ;)

cheharaa meraa thaa nigaahe.n us kii

Khaamushii me.n bhii vo baate.n us kii

mere chehare pe Gazal likhatii ga_ii.n

sher kahatii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n us kii

shoKh lamho.n kaa pataa dene lagii.n

tez hotii hu_ii saa.Nse.n us kii

aise mausam bhii guzaare ham ne

subahe.n jab apanii thii.n shaame.n us kii

dhyaan me.n us ke ye aalam thaa kabhii

aa.Nkh mahataab kii yaade.n us kii

faisalaa mauj-e-havaa ne likkhaa

aa.Ndhiyaa.N merii bahaare.n us kii

niind is soch se TuuTii aksar

kis tarah kaTatii hai.n raate.n us kii

duur rah kar bhii sadaa rahatii hai

mujh ko thaame hue baahe.n us kii

take care

ibrahim

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salam all

  mey shabo jee,ke jawab key bad kuch likhoon ga.

 

  thanks,

  farhannnnnn

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Hello dear members,

As you know this is my first post to this Forum (or may be the last one here)

I have just read this and want to share it with you, if you like it.

AAJ PHIR DAIR TALAK.....

Aaj phir baad-e-baharaan nay merey kanoon main

Chupkey chupkey sey terey aaney ka poocha mujh sey

Gungunatey hooey jharnoon nay zara tham tham kay

Poocha sandeesa koi chithi koi aai hai

Aaj phir rat jaga aangan main merey utrey ga

Aaj phir neend ki devi mera ghar bhoolay gi

Aaj phir chanad key chehrey ka ye anchooa talsam

Mujhey daikhey ga tau bass daikhta reh jaaey ga

Aaj phir bhoor bhay tak teri batain khoud sey

Apni tanhaai sey kerti hi chali jaaon gi

Aaj phir bar'ha ki maari hooi badli kooi

Meri ankhoon main jo jhankey gi thithak jaaey gi

Aaj phir dair talak, dair talak, dair talak

Tu na aaey ga teri yaad chali aaey gi

So tell me if you like it.

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Salaam Waqas and all my friends!

It was nice of you to share such a brilliant piece of poetry, it has been a delight to read. Very touching yet so true.

Please do not make it your LAST post... keep the shairi board alive FOREVER!!

I just want to say a big THANK YOU to all the friends I have met through the Coolyar forum... it has been very nice knowing you aur iss aakhri shair k saath...

Jeena asaan tho nahi tujh sey bichar k lekin

Apni haathon ki lakereein mitaaoon kaisay?

Allah Hafiz

Keep smiling always

Love and best wishes

Sx

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Salaam Shabo

              I think your poem is great :P i also think

              all your other poems are very good :D .

              As you are one of the first members here

              you are also a moderater,also as you know

              most of the work put in to keep the com

              forum ticking over is yours. :cool: .

              I am pleading with you if it is your own

              decision to leave please please please

              reconsider ??? it has been a privalege

              to know you :) .

                          See ya

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salamz all

   ye judaii bhi kitni ajeeb hey tujhey alwida bhi na kehsakey

   tere pass rehne ka zikr kya tere saher mey bhi na rehsakey

   farhannnnnnn.

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:)  hi  2 all dears,

     aik share yaad aya hai,

    jo aalaa zarf hotay hain hamaysha jhuk k miltay hain,

        surahi sarnagoon ho k bhara karty hai paymana

    shair ka nam yaad nahi hai :blush:

     muniba

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First of all welcome here muniba.

Dears thanks for your comments

so i am planned to keep posting here so here is another

for the members

hope you like it !

Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha

keh dil khel meiN kya jeetne wale bhi rote haiN

woh jin ki chashm-e-khud-beeN auroN ko dekha nahi karti

bhala kis dil se gham ke moti pirote haiN

Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha

keh kya maanind-e-sheesha paththaroN meiN baal aata hai

asar aNgez hai ab tak mohabbat ka wohi jazba

jo aise hosh-mandoN ko bhi yuN paagal banaata hai

Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha

mizaaj-e-husan meiN yuN yak-b-yak kya inqalaab aaya

sitaara dekhna aur dekh kar afsurda ho jaana

baDi taakheer se tum ko sitaaroN ka hisaab aaya

Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha

keh tark-e-rabt pe kya mujh se waihshi yaad aate haiN

taa-alluq toDna aasaan tha to aaNkh kyuN nam hai

anaa-parwar jafa-pesha bhi yuN aasuN bahate haiN

Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha

keh jalne aur jalaane meiN bhala kya lutf aata hai

bas ek jhooti anaa ke waaste barbaad ho jaana

khudi ke zaa-um meiN insaaN kitne dukh uThaata hai

Tumhaari bheegti palkon se maiN ne baarha poocha

LOL

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:) hi 2 all friendz,

            mujhay laga k mujhay bhi koi share likhna chahiya so  i m

       

         TUM ASMAN KI BULANDIYON SAY JALD LOT AANA

        MUJHAY ZAMIN K MASAIL PAY BAAT KARNI HAI

     

acha lagay jab bhi batian na acha lagay tab bhi

           :cool:

     RABBIA

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Hey I feel like contributing too :)

Kaaaash ke mujhe koi shair aata

so I am contributing this EMPTY post  :;):

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AOA:D

well i've seen some xcellent piece of poetry here :)  i do write my own poetry when my mood swings towards it but 4 now, here's an excerpt :alien:

kabhi iss nager tujay dekhna kabhi us nager tujay doondna

kabhi raat bher tujay sochna kabhi raat bher tujay doondna

mujay ja baja teri justju tujay doondta hoon main ku baku

kahan khul saka teray ru baru mera iss kader tujay doondna

mera khawab tha kay khayal tha wo arooj tha kay zawal tha

kabhi fersh pay tujay dekhna kabhi arsh pay tujay doondna

yahan her kisi say he bair hai tera sheher kerya e ghair hai

yahan sehl bhe to nahin koi meray be-khaber tujay doondna

teri yaad ayee to ro deya jo tu mil gaya tujay kho deya

meray silsilay be ajeeb hain tujay chor ker tujay doondna :devil:

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salamz all of u,

     ye kehna tha us sey mohabat hey mujhko

     ye kehne mey mujhko zamane lagey hain

  thankssss

  farhannnnnnnnnnnn

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Salaam everyone... an extended warm welcome to the NEW participators on the Shairi board namely Muniba, Rabbia, Romeo & Asim..

Thanks for sharing your poetry it was a pleasure to read...

Asim lol :;): nice try MAYBE next time huh?!!!

Here's one to be getting on with:-

Aiee hai wo bahaar k naghmein bhi dhal paray

Aisi khushi mili hai ka Ansoon bhi nikal paray.

Sx

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Thanx shabo jee  :;):  

Bhool jana be issay yaad be kertay rehna

acha lagta hai issi dhun main bikhertay rehna

hijr walon say bari dair say seekha hum nay

zinda rehnay k leyeh jaan say guzertay rehna

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Ur welocme ji!

Guzray lamhey chahathoon k yaad aiey tho ro paray

Hum apni beybasi pey kabhi muskuraiey tho kabhi ro paray.

:( :( :(

Sx

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salam All and special for new Members ;)

kiya hua ji kiyun ro rahey ho?

kal jinhey zindagi rass thi bohat

aaj dekha inhey udas bohat

kiyun na roOon teri judai per

din guzrey hein tery saath bohat

ok...keep smile :)

take care

ibrahim

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hi dearz,

yon to pathar ki bhi taqdeer badal sakty hai

shart yeh hai k usay dil say tarasha jai

:) from rabbia

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salam all of u

   tumhain tanha kar geya munfarid rehne ka shooq

   ab akele hee bath kar yadoon ke manzar dekhna

  farhannnnnnn

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salaaaaaaaaamz shabo

                              aachi kooshish hai shairi wali jari rakhoooo

:ghostface:

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Salaam Ibrahim "JI", Farhan, Rabbia

Nice poetry thanks for sharing it :D

Bas ji ronay ka mood thha, ro paray :P

I would like to welcome Ali on the Shairi board... thanks for your kind words please feel free to add some of your poetry, we would all love to read it!!

Ik arz e wafaa bhi kar na sakey

Kuch keh na sakey sun na sakey

Yahaan hum ney zabaan hi kholee thi

Wahaan aankh jhuki sharmaa bhi gaiee

Allah Hafiz

Sx

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