Asim 0 Posted July 25, 2005 Pyaar bohut hai tum se jana,per ezhaar nahi karte Meri chup se yeh na samajhna, tum se pyaar nahi karte Apni aankhein tu har lamha,teri raah hi takti hein Or tum pagal yeh kehte ho hum intizar nahi karte Tum kaho tu sub kuch apna sonp doon tum ko lamho mein Jitna tum pay hai bharosa humein,khud pa bhi yaar nahi karte Dard dil ko aaise milley hein,rooti rehti hein aankhein Warna hum sub seeh lete ,ankhein asshkbaar na karte Keywords: Urdu Shairi Shayri Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kashish* 0 Posted July 26, 2005 :dontsad: wowwwww...fantastic janab...great... :( ye tu dil ki batain lag rahi haii.... :P kiya khud likhi hain ya kisi aur ki churayii hain......hehehehe lolzz :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
loveablepussycat 0 Posted July 26, 2005 :o asim bhai aik din mey i itni chura li poetry kisi nay pakra nahi itni zeyada poemz:P just kidding really very nice its 4 u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charmer 0 Posted July 26, 2005 hmm very heart touching poetry... n I wonder if u like poetry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted July 27, 2005 wowwwww...fantastic janab...great... :( ye tu dil ki batain lag rahi haii.... kiya khud likhi hain ya kisi aur ki churayii hain......hehehehe lolzz 148708[/snapback] thank you, nahi ye dil ki batain nahi hain :P main ne likhee? nahi ji i am not that creative, its not my work and i dont know who wrote it as well. I read it somewhere and i liked it so i shared it here :) :o asim bhai aik din mey i itni chura li poetry kisi nay pakra nahi itni zeyada poemz:P just kidding really very nice  its 4 u 148731[/snapback] :P nahi shaid main abhi tak bacha hua hoon, pakra nahi gya :D hmm very heart touching poetry... n I wonder if u like poetry 148736[/snapback] thank you very much, I like poetry but only to the extend of reading... i am not a poet myself... I read it periodically and only on coolyar forums, no where else... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
anjali 0 Posted August 6, 2005 Pyaar bohut hai tum se jana,per ezhaar nahi karteMeri chup se yeh na samajhna, tum se pyaar nahi karte Apni aankhein tu har lamha,teri raah hi takti hein Or tum pagal yeh kehte ho hum intizar nahi karte Tum kaho tu sub kuch apna sonp doon tum ko lamho mein Jitna tum pay hai bharosa humein,khud pa bhi yaar nahi karte Dard dil ko aaise milley hein,rooti rehti hein aankhein Warna hum sub seeh lete ,ankhein asshkbaar na karte Keywords: Urdu Shairi Shayri 148634[/snapback] bht zaberdst hain ........its really very niceeeeeeeeeeeee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nathan 0 Posted August 6, 2005 wow...........Awesomeeeee!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted August 7, 2005 Nice buddy..... But u shud izhar before i do ( just a lil advice or warnning for u) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 13, 2005 (edited) nice ghazal Edited August 13, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted August 19, 2005 OHH MAN It's so true.. I need to show it to someone ... lolz.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted August 22, 2005 show it 2 whom...mujhe hi dekhani thi..so mai nay deekh li..its very nice..indeed' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted August 22, 2005 show it 2 whom...mujhe hi dekhani thi..so mai nay deekh li..its very nice..indeed' 152601[/snapback] :) hmm I wanted u to see this urself.. thank God u finally saw it.. lolz.. missing u a great deall.. :( Aimon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted August 22, 2005 Hanstye bhi nahi Hum rotye bhi nahi hain Or raat ko hum teri qasam sotye bhi nahi hain Hum beth ker mehfil mai chehektye bhi nahi hain or yaad mai teri hum khotye bhi nahi hain Kashti ko bhanwar mai khud aap nay hi phasaya Or kashti ko gehraiyoon mai dubotay bhi nahi hain Hum apnye ghamoon ka na perchaar karin gaay per ashkoon ko daman mai Samotye bhi nahi hain Goya usman aab zabt ki taqat bhi nahi hye par Dagh magar ashkoon sye Dhotye bhi nahi hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted August 22, 2005 this 1 is 4 u aimee.... En sard ratoon main En sard ratoon main Tujh sye door boaht Jalte hoye allao per haath sektye hoye Or tujh sye door bohat Magar tere hi qareeb pata hoon khud ko En sard ratoon main Tujh sye door boaht En nrm grm bistaroon per tere wajood ki hararat mehsoos hoti hye Or mere badn sye Teri khushbo anye lagti hye En sard ratoon main Tujh sye door boaht En andheroon mai tera naam lye ker chalta hoon Or roshniyaan bikhhar jati hain char soo Or zindagi rawann ho jati hye Ek laab sye tera naam lye kar En sard ratoon main Tujh sye door boaht bistar ki hazar shikneen yeah batati hain Karwat badal badal ke raat bitata hoon Or ankhoo ka khomar ke raat bhar soya nahi Kun ke Tanha hoon bohat En sard ratoon main OR Tujh sye door boaht Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted August 22, 2005 dukhoon pa muskarata muskarata thak gaya hoon ghamoon pa gungunata gungunata thak gaya hoon main kitna baras sa in ghamoon ki aandhiyoon main khusi ka geet gata geet gata thak gaya hoon unhi main doostoo ko kiyoon dubara aazmaoon jinhain main aazmata aazmata thak gaya hoon kahoo akher kab tak aansaoo per muskaraoon main dil main gham chupata gham hupata thak gaya hoon mairi aimon tumharay dhukh bhi sare jheel laita mager aab choot khata khata thak gaya hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
