Kiran 2 Posted November 14, 2005 Mohabbat Mosam Nahi Apni Muddat Pori kare Aur Rukhsat Ho Jaye Mohabbat Sawan Nahi, Tooth Ke Barse Aur Tham Jaye Mohabbat Aag Nahi, Sulghe Bharke Aur Bujh Jaye Mohabat Aftab Nahi, Ubhre Chamke Aur Dhal Jaye Mohabbat To Channd Ki Manind hai Jo Bharta hai, Ghathta hai Nikalta hai, Chupta hai Magar Kabhi Fana Nahi Hota...!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted November 15, 2005 Wah Bohat Achy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 15, 2005 hmmm very good Kiran.... oopss!! i am making noise.... sorry :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 15, 2005 Thx junaid,Emira n Ather no here u r not making noise :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 16, 2005 hmm well very nice poem..... specially last 4 lines.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted November 16, 2005 Pleasure ek Shair Yaad aya Share kar layty hain KOI MAUSAM HO TERE RANG MEIN DHAL JAUNGA MEIN KOI WAQT NAHI HUN K BADAL JAUNGA Magar Mausam or Waqt dono he Badal jaty hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 17, 2005 kya baat hai...... :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted November 17, 2005 MUHABAATOUN MEH DEKAHWEY KI DISTI NA MILA AGAR GALEY NAHE MILTA TUH HAATH B NA MILA TAMAAM RISHTOUN KO MEH GHAR PEH CHOOR AAHYA THAA PHIR ISH KEH BAAD MUJY KOHE AJNABI NA MILA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 17, 2005 leee gaye bhaii le gaye aap tou dil..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 17, 2005 Wah bohat khoob kaha Junaid n Khurshid ek shair kabhi perha tha shayad ghalat yeh agay piche hojaye but i understand it now JUDA HONA HAI TO LAFZ MAT DHOND HUMARE WASTE TERA LEHJA HI KAFI HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted November 17, 2005 Wah bohat khoob kaha Junaid n Khurshidek shair kabhi perha tha shayad ghalat yeh agay piche hojaye but i understand it now JUDA HONA HAI TO LAFZ MAT DHOND HUMARE WASTE TERA LEHJA HI KAFI HAI 160319[/snapback] hmmm bout acha hai............ aik mere taraf seh.... deekho mujay daar laghta hai gusey seh tumaray tum agar muj seh khafaa b ho tuh izhaar na karna Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 18, 2005 nice couplet khurshid Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 19, 2005 very nice kiran....... kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 23, 2005 Muhabbat ki tabeeat mein yeh kaisa bachpana QUDRAT nay rakha hai k yeh jitny purani jitny bhi mazboot ho jaye isey izhar k lafzon ki hajat phir bhi rehty hai yaqeen ki aakhri hadon tak dilon mein lehlahaty ho nigahon sey tapakty ho lahoo mein jagmagaty ho isey tayeed_e_taza ki zaroorat phir bhi rehty hai muhabbat mangty hai yun gawahi apnay honay ki k jaisay tifl_e_saada shaam mein ik beej boye shabb mein baarha uthay zameen ko khod kar dekhay k pauda ab kahan tak hai muhabbat ki tabeeat mein ajab takrar ki khoo hai k yeh iqrar k lafzon ko sunnay sey nahi thakty judayi ki ghari ho ya koi milnay ki saa at ho isey bas eik hi dhun hai kaho mujh sey muhabbat hai kaho mujh sey muhabbat hai tumhain mujh sey muhabbat hai zameen sey aasman tak jis qadar achhay manazir hain hamaray hain hamaray wastay yeh chandni ratain sanwarty hain sunehra din nikalta hai muhabbat jis taraf jaye zamana sath chalta hai kuchh aisee bey sukooni hai wafa ki serzameenon mein k jo ahl_e_muhabbat ko sada bechan rakhty hai k jaisay phool mein khushboo k jaisay hath mein para k jaisay shaam ka tara muhabbat karnay walon ki sahar raton mein rehty hai guman k shakhchon mein aashiyan banta hai ulfat ka yeh ain wisl mein bhi hijr k khadshon mein rehty hai muhabbat k musafir zindage jab kaat chuktay hain thakan ki kirchiyan chuntay wafa ki ajrakain pehnay samay ki rahguzar ki aakhri serhudd pe ruktay hain to koi doobty sanson ki dore thaam kar dheeray sey kahta hai yeh sach hai na hamaree zindagee ik doosrey k naam likhi thi? dhundulka sa jo ankhon k qareeb_o_door phaila hai isi ka naam chahat hai tumhain mujh sey muhabbat thi tumhain mujh sey muhabbat hai. muhabbat ki tabeeat mein yeh kaisa bachpana QUDRAT nay rakha hai. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted November 24, 2005 Wow Very Nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 24, 2005 thx junaid Mere Ghum Kuch Puchna chahte hain A Khushi Kiya Tum Muje Apnaoo Ge Tum Mere Dil Ko Dhadakna Sikaoo ge Kia Muje Apni Sansoo Main Basaoo Ge Mere Ghum Kuch Puchna Chahte Hain Kia Tum Mere Ansoo Apni Ankhon Main Sajao Ge Har Lahma Mera Ban Kar Rehna Chaho Ge Apni Hassi Mere Labu Ko Dena Chaho Ge Mere Ghum Kuch Puchna Chahte Hain Kia Tum Meri Tanhaiyeo Ko Apnao Ge Har Pal Muje Eksa Piyar De Paoo Ge Bolo Kia Tum Muje Itna Chahoo Ge Mere Ghum Kuch Puchna Chahte Hain Kia Tum Meri Udhassi Ko Apnaoo Ge Ya Har Pal Muje Phele Ki Tahra Tardpao Ge A Khushi Kia Tum Mere Pass Ana Chaho Gi Kia Tum Muje Apna Kehna Chaho Ge??!? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emira 0 Posted November 25, 2005 Bohat Khoob Kiran...Keep up the good work :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
