kurios 0 Posted November 22, 2005 well viewers this is my first poetryjo ke main ne apni poori life main pehli dafa khud likhi hai balke koshish ki hai aur yeh koshish last week end ki hai jab main ik tension main tha and i don't know from where the words came to my mind and i sreated this poetry i hope u would like it lekin agar kisi ko buri lage tu please mind na kare as it is my first try. :( kisi ko itna toot ker na chahoo ke baad main us ko khona pare keh us ke jane ke baad tumhain is tarah rona pare jis ke dam se bahar ho har taraf baad main khizan jheelni pare jis ke ane se har taraf khushiyan hoon us ke jane ke baad virani hi dikhe afsoos tumhari kismat per majid ke kisi ko pa ker bhi pa na sake (majid) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 22, 2005 Lovely Composition Majid ek choti si nazam meri apni aaj share ker hi leti hoon kyon rukh ;) BAHAR(Spring) EK MASOOM,BHOOLI SI LARKI MOHABBAT SE THI NAWAKIF BALKE YUN SUMJHO.... MOHABBAT SE DUR BHAGTI THI WAQT GHUZERTA GAYA SOOCH MAIN PUKHTAGI NE MASOOMIAT KI JAGHA LE LI MOHABBAT US KI ZINDAGI MAIN BHI KAI RANG.... KAI ROOP... KAI SAWAN... KAI BAHARAIN LAI WOH KHUSH THI US BAHAR KE MAUSAM MAIN MAGAR.... WOH BHOOL GAI THI.... BAHAR KA MAUSAM WAQTI HOTA HAI AKHIR...!! KHIZAN KO ANNA HI HOTA HAI...!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 22, 2005 wah kiran that was nice try kya aap poet ho ya waise hi ik try ki thi it's the nice one i must sppreciate :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted November 22, 2005 HMMMMMMMMMM BARI SHAHIRY HO RAHI HAI VERY NICE MAJID AND KIRAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 22, 2005 well viewers this is my first poetryjo ke main ne apni poori life main pehli dafa khud likhi hai balke koshish ki hai aur yeh koshish last week end ki hai jab main ik tension main tha and i don't know from where the words came to my mind and i sreated this poetry i hope u would like it lekin agar kisi ko buri lage tu please mind na kare as it is my first try. :(kisi ko itna toot ker na chahoo ke baad main us ko khona pare keh us ke jane ke baad tumhain is tarah rona pare jis ke dam se bahar ho har taraf baad main khizan jheelni pare jis ke ane se har taraf khushiyan hoon us ke jane ke baad virani hi dikhe afsoos tumhari kismat per majid ke kisi ko pa ker bhi pa na sake (majid) 160876[/snapback] salam... bahut achhi hai....keep it up... na chaho kisi ko itna ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaaye... chaho kisi ko itna ki tumhara pyaar usske liye zaroori ban jaaye... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 22, 2005 THX MAJID N LARAIB WELL MAJID I COMPOSE :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 22, 2005 thanx ibtisam thanx again aap loggon ne kafi support kiya i am happy :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 22, 2005 BAHAR(Spring) EK MASOOM,BHOOLI SI LARKI MOHABBAT SE THI NAWAKIF BALKE YUN SUMJHO.... MOHABBAT SE DUR BHAGTI THI WAQT GHUZERTA GAYA SOOCH MAIN PUKHTAGI NE MASOOMIAT KI JAGHA LE LI MOHABBAT US KI ZINDAGI MAIN BHI KAI RANG.... KAI ROOP... KAI SAWAN... KAI BAHARAIN LAI WOH KHUSH THI US BAHAR KE MAUSAM MAIN MAGAR.... WOH BHOOL GAI THI.... BAHAR KA MAUSAM WAQTI HOTA HAI AKHIR...!! KHIZAN KO ANNA HI HOTA HAI...!! 160922[/snapback] bahut achhi hai...very nice..... kyun mohabbat ka anjaam judai hota hai...? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 22, 2005 (edited) hmm....... abtisam mukhtasir jawab dongi Mohabbat main kisi ko paa lena hi nahi hota kisi se juda hojana bhi mohabbat hai :) aur judai aur wisil dono ki apni apni jagha ahmiat hai jo sachi mohabbat kerta hai woh duniya main na bhi mile magar us ka dil sirf ek shaks k liye hi dharatkta hai Edited November 22, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 22, 2005 oho bari muhabbat bhari bateen hoi rahi hain hmmmmmmmm waise i do agree with u kiran :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 22, 2005 hmm....... abtisam mukhtasir jawab dongiMohabbat main kisi ko paa lena hi nahi hota kisi se juda hojata bhi mohabbat hai :) aur judai aur wisal dono ki apni apni jagha ahmiat hai jo sachi mohabbat kerta hai woh duniya main na bhi mile magar us ka dil sirf ek shaks k liye hi dharatkta hai 160941[/snapback] salam....kiran....bilkul sahi kahaaa.....ye mohubbat jaan ke sath hi jaayegi.... khushyon kiaankhon mein paani hai.. shayad yahi zindagani hai................ dil mil mil ke phir bichhar jaayein par iss dil ko kaise samjhaaein..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emira 0 Posted November 22, 2005 kisi ko itna toot ker na chahoo ke baad main us ko khona pare keh us ke jane ke baad tumhain is tarah rona pare jis ke dam se bahar ho har taraf baad main khizan jheelni pare jis ke ane se har taraf khushiyan hoon us ke jane ke baad virani hi dikhe afsoos tumhari kismat per majid ke kisi ko pa ker bhi pa na sake (majid) Excellent.....bohat khoob...I dont know how to tell you how much i liked this poem...Keep it up..ainda bhi likhte rahye :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emira 0 Posted November 22, 2005 Lovely Composition Majid ek choti si nazam meri apni aaj share ker hi leti hoon kyon rukh ;) BAHAR(Spring) EK MASOOM,BHOOLI SI LARKI MOHABBAT SE THI NAWAKIF BALKE YUN SUMJHO.... MOHABBAT SE DUR BHAGTI THI WAQT GHUZERTA GAYA SOOCH MAIN PUKHTAGI NE MASOOMIAT KI JAGHA LE LI MOHABBAT US KI ZINDAGI MAIN BHI KAI RANG.... KAI ROOP... KAI SAWAN... KAI BAHARAIN LAI WOH KHUSH THI US BAHAR KE MAUSAM MAIN MAGAR.... WOH BHOOL GAI THI.... BAHAR KA MAUSAM WAQTI HOTA HAI AKHIR...!! KHIZAN KO ANNA HI HOTA HAI...!! 160922[/snapback] Very Nice Kiran...yaha to bohat sey chupe rustam hain(shayar)..... Majid aur Kiran ap log apni poetry zaror post kare..thats really nice... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 22, 2005 majid bhaiiiiii bohat khoob!!!!! bohat achi likhi hai..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 22, 2005 hmm sure i'll post more gradually Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted November 22, 2005 FANTASTIC !!! both of u Majid & Kiran>> i m waiting for more posts :) Keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maha23 0 Posted November 22, 2005 gr8 post keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 23, 2005 well sab loggon ka shukria but let me tell u one thing ke main aur nahin likh paoon ga u know that is the first and last poem i have written aur jis tarag ke mere jazbat the us ke baad shayad hi aese jazbat hoon.... tu main poetry likh sakoon.. :) thanx aal of u ke aap loggon ne mujhe itna support kiya i was not expecting that much trust me that was a huge response for me aur aap sab logoon ko pata hai ke kabhi science paarhne wale bhi shair hoe.. :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 23, 2005 well sab loggon ka shukria but let me tell u one thing ke main aur nahin likh paoon ga u know that is the first and last poem i have written aur jis tarag ke mere jazbat the us ke baad shayad hi aese jazbat hoon.... tu main poetry likh sakoon.. :)thanx aal of u ke aap loggon ne mujhe itna support kiya i was not expecting that much trust me that was a huge response for me aur aap sab logoon ko pata hai ke kabhi science paarhne wale bhi shair hoe.. :D 161083[/snapback] salam.... :flower: At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (tumne iss baat ko proof kar diye.) phir woh science ka student hi kyun na ho...... :) Hmmmm....kaun hai woh jisne tumhein shayar bana diyaaaaa...? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 23, 2005 well ibtisaaam i can't take her name right now ok. yeh ik choti si kahani hai lekin hia kafi dard naak so let it in my heart. :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 23, 2005 well majid yeh salahyat her ek main nahi hoti aap main agar aise kuch germs hain to inhe khul ker hamla kerne dain :D ok? ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 23, 2005 hmm kiran u r 101% right... lekin majid bhai zyada bhi mat karna warna... :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 24, 2005 warna kiya ather...??? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 27, 2005 warna..... germs doosron ko bhi lag jayen gay na..... :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 29, 2005 to achi baat nahi yeh? ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
