kurios 0 Posted December 1, 2005 (edited) waise viewers pata hai pehle aap logon ko ik baat bata doon ke main ne jab yeh poetry likhna shoooro ki tu main serious tha lekin jab main akhri shair likhne laga tu najane kya hoa mujhe shetan ne awaz di aur mere kaan main kaha ke yeh likh do ......... bas ab aap akhri shair perh ker zaroor soochain gay ke upper se itni serious poetry chali aur akhir mnain aa ker ik dam se funny ban gaeee actually mere zehen main is ke ilaya kuch aa hi nahin raha tha .. :) hope u like it ******************************* soocha keh us ko keh doon!! ******************************* soocha keh us se keh doon per na jane kyun keh na saka kuch kehna chahti thi woh bhi na jane kyun keh na saki yunhi kate lamhe iztarab main kuch us ki sooch main kuch us ke khayal main jese hi judai ka waqt kareeb aya main ne apne per kaboo nahin paya aur keh diya jo zehen main aya ik jhatka laga majid us ki baat sun ker jab us ne mujhe bhai bulaya............. (majid) Edited December 1, 2005 by majid Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted December 1, 2005 yen nice kis sense main kaha hai meri bewakofi per ya meri shairi per :P anyway thanx sweeto Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emira 0 Posted December 1, 2005 lolzzzzzzzzzzz Itni achi shayari ko bhigar diya ap nay :P .... Wese bohat achi lagi hai :angel: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 1, 2005 yeh kia likh dia end may????? :D wasay ache ha, agar bhai hee bolna tha end may to zra is ko or lamba khynchtay takay end may "JHATKA" zra zor ka lgta, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted December 2, 2005 haan sab mazak ura loooo lolz mujhe zor ka jhatka lagta tu main is dunya main na rehta hmm yehi chahte ho sab log :) shukar kareen ke abhi jaldi hi bhai kehelwa diya zara late hota tu shayad khush fehmi main hi rehta sari umer :laughing: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted December 6, 2005 waise viewers pata hai pehle aap logon ko ik baat bata doon ke main ne jab yeh poetry likhna shoooro ki tu main serious tha lekin jab main akhri shair likhne laga tu najane kya hoa mujhe shetan ne awaz di aur mere kaan main kaha ke yeh likh do ......... Â bas ab aap akhri shair perh ker zaroor soochain gay ke upper se itni serious poetry chali aur akhir mnain aa ker ik dam se funny ban gaeee actually mere zehen main is ke ilaya kuch aa hi nahin raha tha .. :) hope u like it ******************************* soocha keh us ko keh doon!! ******************************* soocha keh us se keh doon per na jane kyun keh na saka kuch kehna chahti thi woh bhi na jane kyun keh na saki yunhi kate lamhe iztarab main kuch us ki sooch main kuch us ke khayal main jese hi judai ka waqt kareeb aya main ne apne per kaboo nahin paya aur keh diya jo zehen main aya ik jhatka laga majid us ki baat sun ker jab us ne mujhe bhai bulaya............. (majid) 161884[/snapback] wo chham chham karti aayi wo chham chham karti chali gayee, main sindhoor lekar khara tha.... woh raakhi bandh kar chali gayeee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted December 6, 2005 waise I M SORRY...majid agar aapne iss gazal mein apna koi lamha qaid kiye ho... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted December 6, 2005 yes ibtisam main ne is main ik lamha keed kiya hai balke poori ghazal hi mik lamha tha except the last sher woh bhai walla us time maujhe kuch samajh nahin aya aur main ne yehi likh diya :) any way no problem ab tu main bhoolo gaya hoon is baat ko u know main ne kabhi ab us waqt ko yaad nahin kiya .. kya faida rooog lagane ka :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted December 6, 2005 :laughing: MAJID AAP SAI YEHI UMEED HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted December 8, 2005 majid bhai ham tou aap k fan ho gaye hian yar..... sachi.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted December 9, 2005 thanx ather but ab mujhe itna bhi sharminda na kareen :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted December 9, 2005 aray nahin yar apnon se bhi koi sharminda hota hai bhala... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted December 10, 2005 majid bhai ham tou aap k fan ho gaye hian yar..... sachi.... 162591[/snapback] KON SA FAN.............HA HA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites