Shabo 0 Posted September 12, 2003 Very nice Sidd... u guys r too good Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted September 12, 2003 woh larka nimra ko dekh kar kehta hay "behan ji yeah pata bata saktee hain" sorry sorry shabash future kay kahanee naveeson achay ja rahay hoo lakin mojhay maza nahi aya aap sab nay esay riwayatee love story bana deya EK AUR NAEE LOVE STORY aur bhi dukh hain zamanay may mohabat kay siva Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted September 12, 2003 shabssss excellent start :D speed slow hai dats why sirf sanum kee story parh kar main sirf guess kar kay story aggay barha raha haOOn :D Infact Sanum koo galat fami hOOooo gayee woo "Behan jee" nirma kee sath walee larkee koo keh raha tha ;) agar bahan bana dia too story kia chalay gee Nirma GHAMnak ankoon say RAjOOOo ; (thats HERO name :) ) say kehtee hai Ahhhhh what were da days MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 12, 2003 hmmm well sanum...just 4 u " HUM KYUN CHALAIN US RAAH PE...JIS RAAH PER SABH HI CHALAIN..." ;) so janab sanum duniya to banai hi mohabbat ke jazbe ko mad-e-nazar rakh ker hai..... kiya sumjhin?? ;) Ajnabi ne kaha..."KIYA YEH TALASH MERE LIYE THI" aur nimra iss baat pe apne ansoo ko mazid nahi rook pati aur abh Nimra ko lag raha tha ke abh koi aisa hai jo mere Dukhon ko bin kahe sumjhta hai....aur yun us ne kuch nahi kaha sirf Fani ;) (sahbo i want to change that name) keh raha tha aur yun us se Ajnabi ka naam maloom hota hai woh MBA student hota hai aur HAMRAN us ka naam hai abh to jaise us ki sadiyon ki talash khatum hogai aur Nimra ko maloom hojata hai ke jo feelings us ki thi wohi HUMRAN ki thi us ke liye aur yun woh khamoshi se ghar ajati hai.....derwaze pe hi mummy miljati hain..."Nimra itne raat gaye tum kahan se arahi ho........... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted September 12, 2003 " amee bemar theen main doc say dwayee lainay gayee thee (Nimra nay PAlooo say chahra nikal kar kaha .. afsanoon main aisa hee likha hoota hai :D ) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 12, 2003 " amee bemar theen main doc say dwayee lainay gayee thee (Nimra nay PAlooo say chahra nikal kar kaha ..  afsanoon main aisa hee likha hoota hai :D ) well mansoor ek ek line ki kiya story bana rahe ho ??? ;) anyways.... ....itne raat gaye? tum Ali ko lejati ainda itni raat main, main tumhe nikalte nahi dekhoon.....Nimra jaldi se kitchen main atti hai khanna tyaar kerti hai.....kitchen wind up ker ke woh apne room main jaati hai aur soochne lagti hai ke kiya, kiya jaye??? kis tarah Humran se milneki raah dhondi jaye....issi preshani main bohat raat hojati hai aur Nimra ke room ki light on dekh ker papa us ke paas ajate hain aur poochte hain " Nimra kiya howa bete kiya preshani hai...??" abh jo Nimra papa ko itna kind dekhti hai to jaise badal bares perte hain.....aur dil ka sara boojh ankhon ke jariye baher ajata hai jab woh khob roo leti hai to papa kehte hain " Beti Nimra kiya tum Ali se shadi nahi kerna chati?" Nimra nafi main ser hila deti hai......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mishi 0 Posted September 12, 2003 hummm it looks gr8 i will try to try my best if any story is in my mind to add in it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 12, 2003 hummm it looks gr8 i will try to try my best if any story is in my mind to add in it hi :hi: sure Mishi u r most welcome see u arround bye kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted September 12, 2003 Nimra ke room ki light on dekh ker papa us ke paas ajate hain aur poochte hain "etnee raat gaeey tak yeah light kiyoon jal rahee hay tumhay nahi pata kay bijlee kitni mahangee hay pakistan may ore opper say hum middle class log aur main akeela kamanay wala" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted September 12, 2003 Nimra ke room ki light on dekh ker papa us ke paas ajate hain aur poochte hain "etnee raat gaeey tak yeah light kiyoon jal rahee hay tumhay nahi pata kay bijlee kitni mahangee hay pakistan may ore opper say hum middle class log aur main akeela kamanay wala" Yeh sentence tu kuch kuch sunay sunay lag rahay hain :) thx shabo and every 1 else :flower: well ab hum apni kahani aagay barhatay hain " waldain jaisay bhi hoon apni aulaad ki ko takleef main nahin dekh saktay nimra kay is tarha bilak bilak k ronay say us k papa ka dill us kay lye narm ho gaya aur jab nimra nay nafi main sir hilaya tu us k papa nay kaha ' beta main jaanta hoon k main tum per bohat zulm kia hai lekin shayd Allah nay mujhay yeh ek moqa dya hai k main apnay kye gaye gunahon ka azaala ker sakoon agar tum nahin chahteen k Ali say shadi karon tu theek hai magar n kernay ki koi wajja bhi tu ho ' nimra nay apnay aansoo saaf kertay hue jawab dya ' papa woh ek ayash shakhs hai sharab peeta hai nasha bhi kerta hai kaye baar sharab k nashay main us nay meray saath badtameezi kernay ki koshish ki hai aur us ka zarya-e-amdani bhi sahi nahin hai aap batain main us k saath kaisay reh sakti hoon' nimra k papa nay kaha theek hai main baat kerta hoon tum apna khayal rakho aur pareshan na ho main ab tumharay saath koi zeyadti nahin honay doonga ' yeh keh ker nimra k papa nay nimra ko galay laga lya ' nimra ko pehli baar aisa mehsoos hua ka baap ki mohabbat ki chaon kia hoti hai woh ek baar phir ro pari. doosray din nimra bohat fresh thi us nay aaj soch lia tha k us ajnabi say ab woh her baat ker lay gi kay ab tak woh sirf us kay saath k lye dunya ka her dukh dard bardasht kerti aye hai "................................ so is next In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted September 12, 2003 Salaaam every1 :hi: WoW Brilliant idea Shab & the Story is abt to END I think Im too late to reply :( anyway, trying to leave my views tooo :D ... agley din jub Nimra soch ker nikalti hai kay aaj Humran sey dill ki baat kahey gi ( iss der kay saath k kahin woh usse inkar na ker dey aur uss kay khuwab chikna choor ho jayen gay) khair,, ghar sey nikalti hai ..... Humran jo doosri taraf khud issi intizaar mein tha kay kab uss ajnabi ladki sey mulaqat ho paiye woh ghar sey bahar nikalta hai aur soch mein giriftaar ho jata hai... k achanak jub usski nazar saamney ki taraf parrti hai tau wohi ladki (Nimra) ussey dikhaai daiti hai,,, usski tau jaise dil ki aarzo poori ho gye ho... yehi kuch haal Nimra ka bhi hai... lakin uss ki LAAJ ney ussey rook rakha hai aik taraf uss ka izhaar-e-mohabbat kerna aur doosri taraf uss ka baap... woh dil mein aarzo kerti hai kay kaash woh ajnabi ussey woh sab kuch kah dey jo woh CHAHTI HAI... khair Humran, Nimra kay qareeb jata hai .............. Regards; Wajiha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 12, 2003 Nimra ke room ki light on dekh ker papa us ke paas ajate hain aur poochte hain "etnee raat gaeey tak yeah light kiyoon jal rahee hay tumhay nahi pata kay bijlee kitni mahangee hay pakistan may ore opper say hum middle class log aur main akeela kamanay wala" :hi: Miss Sanum if u didn't know then i m informing u it's serious story if u don't want take part then plz avoid to turn it's topic hope u'd understand what i meant.... ;) well nice turn sidd welcome most welcome wajiha glad to saw u.... .....Nimra jab Humran ko dekhti hai to ek pal ko ruk si jati hai ke kahin yeh sab woh ghalat to nahi ker rahi...."Nimra kiya main apne Parents ko aap ke ghar bhej sakta hoon?"....nimra jo ke phicli raat jab mili thi us se, us ke hal-e-dil se wakif hogai thi (for ur information wajiha if u didn't read story with full attention) ....woh baghair kuch kahe pelti hi thi ke Humran ne us se rok liya "Please Nimra mujhe jawab do ....main tumhari merzi janna chata hoon"...Nimra ka dil us ke bas main nahi tha umer bher ki bechaini jaise pal main khatum hogai thi..."Jaisa aap behter sumjhain"....bas itna kehna tha aur Nimra ghar ki taraf tezi se holi iss se pehle koi aur dekhta din ki roshni main....."Aoo beti Nimra yeh Ali zara Shopping ke liye jana cha raha tha kuch help kerdo iss ki ....." Nimra jo abhi itni khush thi ek dam udas hogai aur majboran Ali ke saath holi...(yaad rahe Humran us ki life back groud se wakif tha) aur yun raat main jab neend ki aghosh main jane ke liye leti to subha ke woh haseen manazir uss ke andheri raat ko mehkagaye........ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fani 0 Posted September 13, 2003 meray khuyal sai kiran sab kuch ap hi decide kar rahi ho tu humhain in ki shadi ki date bhi bata do . jis din ap nai shadi karwani ho na tab hamain bhi batadena hum ajay gain... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fani 0 Posted September 13, 2003 i was just kidding about my nick Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 i was just kidding about my nick ok fani i won't decide anything :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fani 0 Posted September 13, 2003 u can ... i didnt mean that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 13, 2003 hey shabo great topic.. well alas i can't join it from biggining cus i was busy in my presentation stuff so where is the ending thread couldn't find it.. and hows all rest! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 hey shabo great topic..well alas i can't join it from biggining cus i was busy in my presentation stuff so where is the ending thread couldn't find it.. and hows all rest! welcome nadan waiting for ur replies......or contribution... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted September 13, 2003 hey Kiran..cool down baby.. narazgee ki kiya baat hay.. haan wasay aap ke seriousness dekh kar pata lag raha hay story kitni serious hay... tu dekho ab story ko edhar Nimra khaboon key hassen wadyoon may gum hay magar nadan yeah naa jantee thee kay zindagee itnee asan nahi naa hay woh hum insanoon kay hath may thori hay k hum jis tarha esay chaheen wasy hee hoo. badkismatee say Nimra kay father ko kuch dinoo kay leay office tour kay silsilay may shehar say bahar jana parta hay.ore onke geer mojeedgee may Humran apnay parents ko rishtay k leay bhajj deta hay.Jis par oskee step mother khoob naraz hotee hain.mahmanoon ke khoob insalt kartee hain ore onhay jawab day detee hain k "Nimra aur oskay Abu hum dono nay Nimra ka rishta tay kar deya hay Ali say."ore onhay khob bora bhala keh kar wapis bhajj daytee hay..idhar chalak borhiya sochtee hay kay moka acha hay kiyoon nay Nimra kay bap ki gharmojeedgee may hee sab kuch kar lay aur oskee shadee jald he apnay nephew ALi say kar day warna woh apnay eradoon may kabhi kamyab naa ho sakay gee.............. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted September 13, 2003 Oh Nadan Welcome Back :flower: Jaan a gaye kuch logon main tumhain dekh ker acha hua tum agayen warna ek member kam ho jata coolyar ka :P In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 ...... Beshak insaan ke haath main nahi apni taqdeer magar Allah Rehman O Raheem bhi hai aur howa yeh ke Humran apne parents ko sab bata chuka tha ke Nimra ki step mother bohat zulm kerti hain lehaza Humran ke parents Nimra ki mother ko kuch kahe baghair chale gaye...idher Nimra bohat preshan thi Allah bara Karsaaz hai woh yeh hi dil main sooch rahi thi ke itne main Phone ki bell hoi....."Hello...!" nimra ne derte aur preshani ke alam main phone attend kiya.."Hello...Nimra kaisi ho beta...?" Nimra ne papa ki awaz sunte hi runa shoro kerdiya aur sari baat papa ko batadi...Nimra ke papa ne kaha" Nimra tum preshan mat ho aur apni mummy ko phone do"... aur jane kiya baat ker ke papa ne mummy se phone band ker diya magar mummy ke expressions bata rahe thay ke koi baat aisa hoi hai jo mummy us ke saath pehle ki tarah peesh aa rahi hain.....aur yun next day hi papa sab chor char wapis agaye.....aur Humran ke papa se un ke office main personally mile aur jaisa ke Humran ke papa sab jante thay Lehaza baat ko daba diya gaya......aur...her taraf.....khushgawar fizza qaim hogai (ji Sanum abh kaisa turn hai story ka ;) )........ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 13, 2003 mm.. wha yaar you ppls are great in story making.. its only me.. i can't do it.. i better stay and enjoy reading thanks Kkiran and sidd thanks to you too wasay lagta hay kisi ke jan wapis aii hay tu kisi ke chalee bhi gai hay kiya khayal hay GANG! or coolyar bhi koi chornay wali cheez hay kiya.. i enjoy my stay here infact i love my stay here:offtopic: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 13, 2003 Oh Nadan Welcome Back :flower: Jaan a gaye kuch logon main tumhain dekh ker acha hua tum agayen warna ek member kam ho jata coolyar ka :P In Love :wub: " S I D D " hahahahaha sidd main nahi chorne wali CY bhi tum loog hi to ho jin ki waja se CY pe itni ronak hai warna main kabhi na atti :flower: oh CY Team as well :( ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 13, 2003 mm true Kiran .. Cool Yaar is infact the only best comunity here..! b4 this one i tried one but i get rid of that.. but here i love talking with all you guys..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
