Waqas 48 Posted November 2, 2003 Thanks Everyone I like your Post Shabo NaDaN you have good Poems, i like "a question hurts me" others are nice too Thanks for sharing Waqas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 3, 2003 "She Misses Him" dedicated to Me ........... She misses being touched The way he used to touch her. The slight brush to her face.. A touch on the hand. A simple reminder He's happy to be her man. She misses his arms Holding her close in his hugs. She misses him being proud Of her being his Snuggle Bug. She misses the love That once danced in his eyes. Now she lays in bed at night And quietly cries. She misses the hunger That once was in his kiss The love he used to show for her She will forever miss coz I miss the me I used to be Back when she wanted to be with me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 3, 2003 well guys here i am this is my first try , i have written many poems but this poem is my first try for serious poetry.. tell me hows it..!! Forgive Me!! Forgive me for all the names of Love, I failed to adress You By; Forgive me for limiting Your memory, To a silent tear or sigh;... Forgive me for letting You go away, without saying good-bye...... Forgive my smile that blossomed upon, My lips to greet You well today.. Forgive my songs that fill my heart, and Yet You didn't hear You say; Forgive my prayers that were always sincere, and still failed to enlighten You way.... Forgive my word that were ment to heal, but they hurt you deep inside Forgive my eyes that burn with grief, but never reveal the tears they hide..... Forgive my voice that silenced not, when i looked away and deeply sighed; Forgive me for my love and patience, that I bear in my heart with lone despair..... Forgive me for all the pain i endure, to save you from the greatest pain, my dear, forgive me if i look back for once, and shed a single farewell tear.... Forgive Me For I Can Never Forget Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted November 5, 2003 :flower: nice waqas and NADaN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 5, 2003 nadan ur posts r reallly better dan best :) now i m back here in shiar o shiaree so its ma turn to post some thing so here it is :) Always Remember Always remember to forget The things that made you sad But never forget to remember The things that made you glad. Always remember to forget The friends that proved untrue. But don't forget to remember Those that have stuck by you. Always remember to forget The troubles that have passed away. But never forget to remember The blessings that come each day. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 5, 2003 tansk so much Umair ... and nice poem i really like it!! "Always remember to forget " buhat mushkil kam hay!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 6, 2003 Nice poems NaDaN & Umair MY WISH FOR YOU When u r lonely I wish u love. When u r down, I wish u joy. When u r troubled, I wish u peace. When things r complicated, I wish u simple beauty. When things r chaotic, I wish u inner silence. When things look empty, I wish u hope.... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 7, 2003 wow very Nice Shabo!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 lots of thanx shabo n nadan ..... :) ab app donon ke liye :D meri taraf se ..... ;) Muje intazar rehta hai... "Muje intazar rehta hai... Jab mousam badalta hai Jab din dhalta hai Jab suraj ubharta hai Muje intazar rehta hai Jab barish hoti hai Jab chand jag_magata hai Jab teez hawain chalti hain Muje intazar rehta hai Wo ajnabi hai wo apna bi hai Wo door hai wo pass bi hai Her pal her ghari us se milne ka Muje intazar rehta hai Mousam akar lot jate hain Suraj ubhar ker dhal jata hai Barish baras ker tham jati hai Mager intazar khatam nahi hota Muje intazar rehta hai....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 8, 2003 :hi: Hi Umair Wo ajnabi hai wo apna bi hai Wo door hai wo pass bi hai Her pal her ghari us se milne ka Muje intazar rehta hai Wah ji wah kya kehnay... bohot khoob!! Thanks for the dedication Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 8, 2003 shabo dopata tumhara kahan hia :bang: pehin kar rkaho :) dkha hai jub say tum ko "dhkha hai jub say tum ko ya dil kahi lagta nahi ya souchta tumko khta hai ya muj say bas ub yahi tamna hai bas ub yahi arzo milgaie koie asa banaie mujha apna dikhie mujha rasta' bas jaie maray dil kerday mujha wo pagal hogie kud bhi pagal dewana hoker bolay jub say dhkha hai utm ko ya dil khai lagta nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 10, 2003 mm nice Umiar..!! Tear! IT WAS a tale of passion that we read- Of two who loved, not happily, but well! And evermore her gentle breast did swell Like a twin-billow,-for her feelings fed Upon its rhythmic grief-and brimming shed Such dews of pity as can only fall From natures full of sweetness, when the pall Of tragedy o’ershadows them with dread. Then, as I looked, in her raised eye there stood A gem more excellent that ever shined Within my spirit’s transcendental sphere, And so embalmed its love with an immortal tear. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 10, 2003 A Lesson Learned They say they love you But I guess not enough They seem to leave you When things get tough They can't stay strong And fight till the end And they move on While we try to mend But now that I know This is the way they are I'll make sure next time It doesn't go that far I often wonder If they are all the same If any of them Really do fell pain And if they do I guess not enough Cause they always leave When things get tough Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 10, 2003 When I Close My Eyes When I close my eyes I sense you there It's from all our ties We made with care When I close my eyes A star twinkles in the sky I feel you're mine Just like when you kissed me, valentine When I close my eyes I think it's all lies That we are not together 'Cause we love each other When I close my eyes I forget all the byes 'Cause I can still feel your hands Soothing my hair strands When I close my eyes I sense you there It's from all our ties We made with care Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 11, 2003 Look KANJOOS Umair..... Orrh li chunariyaaaa mey ney USS k naam ki :ph34r: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xcuse Me 0 Posted November 11, 2003 Xcuse Me Nice Going everyone here Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 12, 2003 ahem ahem Shabo US KIS KON..!! :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 13, 2003 ahem ahem Shabo US KIS KON..!!:P errrrrrrrm he, him, Woh ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 13, 2003 When I Close My EyesWhen I close my eyes I sense you there It's from all our ties We made with care When I close my eyes A star twinkles in the sky I feel you're mine Just like when you kissed me, valentine When I close my eyes I think it's all lies That we are not together 'Cause we love each other When I close my eyes I forget all the byes 'Cause I can still feel your hands Soothing my hair strands When I close my eyes I sense you there It's from all our ties We made with care Heyyyy nice poem NaDaN.. it reminds me of the song; aankhein khuli ho ya ho band, deedar UN ka hota hai ... kaisay kahoon mey oh yaara ye pyar kaisay hota hai ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 13, 2003 haha wha HE, him ,woh.. BE SPECIFIC NA DEAR KUCH SAMH NAHEE AYYA..!! :pmm thanks for liking post!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 15, 2003 nice posting nadan :) nice views shaboooo :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 15, 2003 VERY NICE POETRIES DEAR FRIENDS now therer is something ab rainbow of love i hope u all would like that R is for Respect, because I have so much of it for you! A is for Amazing because that is what you are! I is for Immeasurable because my Love for you has no boundaries! N is for Never because that's how often I want to be apart from you! B is for Better because you keep getting better and better! O is for Ordinary, because you are anything but! W is for Welcome, because that's how you make everyone feel Howzat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
