NaDaN 0 Posted December 18, 2003 Sooraj dheerey dheerey paharoun kai peechey dooor kahin badloun main doob raha tha…barish ka zour toot raha tha…faza main mitti ki sondhi sondhi mehak rachi hui thi…ye wohi mousam hai na….!jisey ham hamra mousam kaha kartey they…Tum kehtey they kai dekho aaj aasman khul kar roya hai aur Main kehti,dekho!phir kabhi aisa na kehna…aasman tou hamaree khooshiyon main khul kar barsa hai aaj …tum meri aankhoun main gour sey dekhtey aur muskura detey,phir kehtey,acha suno…ab nahin kahoon ga. Aah…barsoun beet gaye lekin aaj bhi iss nam faza main merey kahey inn lafzoun ki goonj baqi hai,lekin na janey kiun mera dil aaj tumharey kahey huye alfaz dohra raha hai kai dekho!aaj aasman khul kar roya hai….!aaj bhi faza main mitti wohi mehak aur barish ki wohi khooshboo hai…!main dheerey dheerey qadam uthati issi rah guzar par inhi darakhtoun kai saye taley chal rahi hoon,jahan hamaree mohabbat ka janam hua tha,main ney chaha kai hamaisha ki tarah barish ki khooshbooo apney dil main basa loon,lekin khayyaal aaya…Tum bhi tou aik mashoor kun khooshboo ki tarah merey dil main basey they…meri sansoun main sama gaye they…aur be-wafa hawa kai aik jhoun kai ki tarah kahin dooor…bohat doooor judayi ki kohar main kho gaye…. Aah ye souch kar kai barish ki khooshboo bhi kahin kohar main….iss dhud main….kho na jaye main faza main barish ki ye khooshboo bikhraye apni raah chal di. main barish ki ye khooshboo apney dil main na basa saki….suno Tum jahan bhi ho…barish ki ye khooshboo hamisha mujhey tumharee qurbat ka aehsaas dilaye gi….kai tum merey qareeb ho….bohat qareeb……!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted December 18, 2003 awwwwwwwww dont cry NaDaN .. i m here :D very nice RaBbIe" :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 18, 2003 Thanks Rythm!! .. :flower: i wont Cry!! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted December 18, 2003 (edited) Nadoo :flower: buddy kuch garbar lag rahi hai pehlay last sentence ab yeh CHAKAR kia hai Mojhay bhi geeli mitti ki sondhi sondhi khoshbo bohat pasan hai.. mojhay pakistan bohat yaad araha hai Edited December 18, 2003 by sanum Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 18, 2003 Hey Sanum!! chakker kiya hona hay!! but han miti ke khushboo tu sab ko pasand hote hay!! dont worry Sanum!! dont Cry!! b happy!! hum sab akhtay he tu haina idher!! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted December 18, 2003 ekathy sirf chand pal k lye na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 18, 2003 hey stop Sanum!!.. kuch nahe hota!! pal ke khushi b koi asan baat hay,,?.. bolo bolo!!? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted December 18, 2003 U r rite dear :flower: Cy k pal meray leye really happiest moment hotay hain.. bas aaj zara mood khrab hogaya hai thora sa... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 18, 2003 Dont worry hota hay asa kabhi kabhi!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 19, 2003 nadan... tumhari wording dil ko cho lene wali thi.... kabhi kabhi kuch batain bohat apni si lagti hain.. :) well wish u best of luck for ur future Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 19, 2003 awwwwwww so nice NaDaN Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 19, 2003 Hey Shabo Dont Cry!! Kabhi Kabhi asa hota hay..! Be Happy!! always!! :).. Thanks Kiran!! yeah batan hote he ase hain kay apni apni lagte hain mager apni ho nahee patee :(... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 19, 2003 mm sab ro kinu rahey hain!! share Yours .. koi Lamha Jo abhi b yaad ho, Kuch batin Jo Zehan ka sath chornay ko razi na hon!.. koi Yadd jo ird gird dewar tanay abhi b zidi bachay ke tarhan janay na date ho!! kuch tu ho ga.. Koi Kal .. jo Guzar tu gaya Mager Lagta wo AJJ hay!! ...? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 19, 2003 ahhhhhhhhh SO touching !!!!! i just dont want to spoil the beautiful "atmosphere" of the Scene" by comminting ,even Good about it .. still Sehar that was gr88 .. U know ! its my ever first time on community that i m using emicons of crying .. it just .... Remembered me alot ......... Inshaa jeee Uthooo abb Kooch karooo Iss shahar main jee ka lagana kia ?? Jab shahar kay lOog na rastaa dain ,kuin bann main na jaa Bisraamm karaYy dewanoon kee see na bat karay Phir aur karay Dewanaa kia ? (Ibne Insha) Bathhhh kar sayyaa GUll main nasir Hamm bHut Royee Jab woo yad ayyaa .... Dill main aikk Lahar see uthee hai abheee Koee tazaa hawaa chalee hai abheee Din achay bhee ayeen gay Nasir Gham na kar zindagi paree hai abhee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 19, 2003 haan nadan u r right... tumhare iss topic se yaad ai ek NAZAM... so tum sab se share ker rahi hoon Aaj jab baarish hoi yeh bhi ek khayal ayya kyon na ek baadal ko raazdan banaon main jo bhi mujh pe guzri hai us ko sab sunaon main jo bhi tum se kahna hai us ko sab bataon main phir tumhare dil per woh Aaj hi baras jaye.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted December 19, 2003 Haw haye yeh saray sad kiu hain .. ;) khair hai na. maar to nai khani kisi ne? ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 20, 2003 Oh Kiran Verrryy Nice!.. Mansoor yeah i love both of 'em.. Insha (My Life!) Nasir..! Zindage hay he ase kay itnay diffrent shades dete hay kay hum jo nahee chatay kabhi kabhi wo ho jata hay .. jo Socha nahee hota wo Haqeqat ban ker Ankhon kay samnay khara ho jata hay!! Jo sunanay ke himat nahe hotee.. wo ilfaz kabhi kabhi poree omer kay liya zehan may gunjtay rehtay hain..! buhat kuch wsay hota hay jasay kisee ke b marzee na ho!! lakin Yeah baat b jhotlai nahee ja sakte kay sab kuch ho jata hay mager hum phir b zinda he rehtay hain!! Sirf ek he Hastee hay jo Hum ko mazboot kkiya howa hay!! her dam Hamaray sath hay jo sirf kuch he faslay per jab Pukaroo suntee hay!! Beshak wo Allha he tu hay jo hum ko her tarhay say sanbhalay howa hay! hum ko saber ke himat de hoi hay!! asee batin soch ker hum udas tu hotay hain mager suhker hay pereshan hona choor diya hay!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 20, 2003 yaar aaj kuch sad environment hai na??? or i m feeling.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted December 20, 2003 Kiran same here...kuch maza nahi... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 20, 2003 ho yaar is topic may aoo tu sad ho jatay hain!! acha ab is topic may tabhee ain gay jab SAD honay ka mood ho!! theek :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 20, 2003 no nadan... there is something SAD.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted December 20, 2003 har time sad. har time sad :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
