adilkhan 0 Posted November 6, 2003 salam all :hi: and thankss Shabo aur umair :y: Kabhi na tootnay wala khesar ban jaoo , oh meri zat men rehnay ka faesla tu kare ,, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 7, 2003 Salaam all :hi: mairee jaan mairey humdum mairee aarzoo tum hee ho mairee zinadagi ka maqsad mairay jeenay ka silsilaa ho mairee bandagi tum hee ho mairee roshni tum hee ho mairee ulfat hai tum hee say mairee muhabbat bhi tum hee ho mairee aaashnaa tum hee ho mairee rahguzar tum hee ho mairee her duaa tum hee hoon mairee her khuwahish tum hee ho mairee sub kuch tum hee ho mairee zindagee tum hee ho mairee zindagee tum hee ho Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 nice poetry guyss :) shabo n adil u r going gr8 :hi: aur adil ma pleasure yar..... kat jaie gi zindagi ki he rah "Aj ki dunyia main jeeena chata hoon Najanie kis ki asss main rehna chata hoon Mere yaadon k agan main na koi phool Tere Janie k baad se rastoon pay dhool Bsss us ki kushi k agie hum chook gaie Na chata hue bhi hum esa ker gai Kishti ko hamri zindagi ka kinara na mila Pyar k pancheoon ko un ka ghar na mila Hum wo sun na sakie jo unhonie keh dia Hum wo kern a sakie jo unhonie dekha dia Herpal yahi souchta hoon k pyar q hota hai Roonie k liye yia zindagi k liye esa hota hai K hum na rootie hai na zindagi milti hai Bussss ek dosrie k hoker reh jatie hai Na milie ga rasta na milie gi rah Yuhi kat jaie gi zindagi ki her rah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 8, 2003 salam all :hi: thanks umair ::) Shabo ji wah wah buhot khub JO mujh pocha hai , hai ajj tum nay men tumhara ho keya batao ,,,, tu tum khud he socho aik paal ko bhala men tumhein kesay batao hai tum say mera wahi taluq jo apnay saaye say hai shajar ka wahi jo khurshed say qamar ka gulon say hota hai meHek ka kesi ki ankhon ke mast doroon say iss ki meHbob ki jhalak say wahi taluq hai tum say mera ,, jo dil say hota hai dharkanon ka khumar say hai mey kashon ka jo shayr say hai ma weshoon ka jo husan walo say dil jalo ka hai zahid say ji zahidon ka jo manzilon say hai rahbaron ka Aazal say dharti say paar baton ka wahi jo sagar say sahilon ka jo Ruh say hai badan ka jo bareshon ka kesi zameen say Ibadaton ka jabeen say hai wahi TALUQ Aazal say apnay darmeyan bhi hai tum he baharon ki dil kashein ho tum he tu ankhon ki roshni ho jo sach kaho , tum he meri kushi ho tum he Uojala tum he saba ho tum Aarzoo ho , tum he wafa ho tamam jazbo ki inteha ho tau kiu na tum pe ye dil pida ho batao JANAN ! hai atna kafi ke aur kuch bhi tumhein batao ,,,,,, adil Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 8, 2003 Main Nay Socha Thah K Aaj Aap Aayein Gay Aap Poochein Gay Tou Sab Haal Keh Doon Ga Keh Doon Ga K Kitnay Din Huwe Hain Soya Nahi Woh Kown Si Bhool Hai Jo Huwi Nahi Kitaab Fridge Main Shelf Per Glass Rakha Peer Ka Din Thah Khat Main Jumeraat Likha Dost Say Shikwa Kerna Thah Ussay Sipas Likha Kiya Haal Ker Diya Mera Mujhay Kisi Kaam Ka Na Rakha Aur Jab Aap Nay Aa Ker Poocha Tou Bus Main Itna Keh Saka K Main Theek Hoon !!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 8, 2003 nice shairi Adil Yeh tho wohi hua na phir k; jab na maana dil deewana, kalam utta k jaaney jana... khat mey ney teray naam likha haal e dil tamaam likha Umair>:hi: Hi Sx :ph34r: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 8, 2003 :) nice adil ..... keep wear dopata shabnam :D specially jab merey samney aoo to ;) Tanhai " NA KOI HAWAISH HAI...NA KOI CHARAGH HAI......NA KOI MOHABAT HAI...NA KOI MAHBOOB HAI.....NA KOI NASHA HAI...NA KOI DAWA HAI....NA KOI ASHIQ HAI...NA KOI ASHIKI WALI HUM MAI CHEEZ.... MAIRI ZINDAGI KIA HAI.....EK AJAB TANHAI HAI..SIRF TANHAI JIS MAI RAIH KAR SHAID YAI BI PATA NAHI KAI DUNIYA MAI HAI YA OS SAI ILAIDA HAI..AKSAR JAB MOJAY GOMAN HOTA HAI KAI SHAID YAI ZINDAGI JO MAI GOZAAR RAHA HO WO ZINDAGI HI HAI...IS TANHAI MAI EK AJAB SI FEELING HAI JIS KA BIAN KARNA....SHAID MOMKIN NAHI.. EK AJAB TANHAI DOONTA HOO TANHAI MAI... JANAI WO KAISI RAAT THI JIS KA THA SHOOR BOHAT... IS TANHAI MAI YAAD KAR OS KO JO DOONTA HAI TOJAY MAILOO MAI...LIKEN HUMARAY IS OJRAY DIYAAL MAI KOI NAHI...KOI HO GA TO YAAD KARAY GA...ITNA ANDHAIRA HAI MAIRI DUNIYA MAI KAI MOJAY SHAID AINA BE DOOND KA NAAM DAI DAY... LAFZ KO BAITHATA HO JAB BIAN KARNAY KA WAQT ATA HAI.... KAI SHAID KOI IS WAIRAAN KHANDAR MAI BI ROOSHNI KARAY... KABI KABI SOOCHTA HOO KIO NA SAMAJ PAIYA YAI DUNIYA MOJAY YAA KIO NA SAMAJ PAIYA MAI DUNIYA KO... ARAY HAMAY KIA BATATAY HO ZAMANAI KA DARD... JO HOD GIRA RAIHTA HAI EK DARD MAI.. IS TAKLEEF KAI SHAID NISHANAT NAHI... PAR RAHTA HAI HAR WAQT MEHBOOB KI TARHA... IS TARHA KI ZINDAGI KO KIA ZINDAGI KAHAI GA KOI... JO MAAND HAI SIRF SOKAI PATAY KI TARHA.... JO SIRF EK HAWA KAI JONKAI SAI GIRTA HAI.. OR DUNIYA SAATH DAINI KI BAJAY KOCHAL DAITI HAI.. MAIRI ZINDAGI IS SOKAY PATAY KI TARHA HAI JO JAB SARD THA KHILA THA BALKAI ANNKH KA TARA THA LIKEN AHIR KIO DUNIYA BAIWAFA HAI..KIO..KIO... JIS KO SARI ZINDAGI MAI DAITA RAHA KHOSHIA... OS NAI HI KIO ROONDA HAI IS TARHA... MAIRI IS CHOTI SI ZINDAGI MAI KIO NAHI BAHAAR HAI...ITNA ROO BAITHAY KAI ABB ANSOYO KI JAGA LAHOO KAI KATRAY BAIHTAY HAI...YAI SHAM HAI KAI AB DALTI NAHI..YAI RAAT HATAM HONAI KA NAAM KIO NAHI LAITI.. HAMARI ZINDAGI MAI BI KABI SORAJ TALOU GA...SHAID..SHAID.. EK AJEEB SA SONATA HAI RAAT KAI PAHAR MAI...SHAID DIKH JAI OS KI EK JALAK IS RAAT KAI PAIHAR MAI...PAR IS KAHANDAR MAI KOON AIY GA...SAWAI OS KAI JIS NAI JAAN LAINI HAI..PAR KIA FAIDA JAAN LAINAI KA ...JIS JAAN MAI APNAI JANANAI KI SAKAT NA HOO WO KIA MARAY GA.. MAI AISI KHOLI KABAR KI BAISABAR LAASH HO...JISAY BAAR BAAR ZINDAGI WARGALA KAR LAI JATI HAI.. KIA IS INSAAN KAI KHANDAR MAI BI KOI KEERAN GIRAY GI...KIA..KIA..KIA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 8, 2003 mansoob jo log meray zindagi ke sath Aaksar wahi milay hai bari be ruhi ke sath U tu men hanss para hoo tumhary leye magar ketnay setary toot pary aik hansi ke sath Fursat milay tu apna gareban bhi deikh le AIY DOST U NA KHEIL MERAY BE BASI KE SATH majboruo ki bat chali hai tu mie hai kahan ham nay piya hai zahir bhi aksar kushi ke sath mukhsan karam ki le bhi ho jes men khalus bhi mujh ko gazab ka pyar hai iss dushmani ke sath Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 8, 2003 Iss Duniya Ki Bheer Meiun Koi Tanha Na hoo Ye Zaroori Tu Nahi Hanstey Laboon Kay Peechay Koi Siski Na Ho Ye Zaroori Tu Nahi Muskarati Aankhoon Kay Peechey Koi Aansoo Na Ho Ye Zaroori Tu Nahi Ye Dil Under Say Tootey Or Chanak Bahar Bhi Sunai Day Ye Zaroori Tu Nahi Hum Under Say Jal Jaeen Or Dhuaa Bahar Bhi Dekhai Day Ye Zaroori Tu Nahi Duniya Aapne Diya Hue Zakhmoo Per Marham Bhi Rakhey Ye Zaroori Tu Nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted November 9, 2003 Assalamu Alaikum Allz *~*~*~*Namaz Parh ker Jisay mein Parhta Tha Rasheed Aissa Howa kay Mujh say Kaza ho Gya Wo Shakksh*~*~*~* Love Yaz Allz Allah Hafiz *~*Naz*~* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 9, 2003 nice adil gr8 nazish .... gr8 stuff .... :) ZINDAGI MOUT KA GHER HAY "WAQT KAY SAKHT PAHAROON SAY GUZAR JANA HAY. ZINDAGI MOUT KA GHER HAY,GHER TO MAGAR JAANA HAY. SHAAM AYE TO MAKANOON MIAN SIMAT AATAY HAIN. AHL_E DANISH NAY, SIYAANOON NAY KIDHER JAANA HAY. MAIRAY HAATHOON KI MAHARAT SAY SAHER CHOOTAY GEE. ZULF_E_JAANAAN NAY KAHAN AAP SANWAR JAANA HAY. DAY KAY DASTAK MAIN PALAT AYA ZARA DAIR KAY BAAD. APNAY DAR KO BHI KISI AUR KAY DAR JAANA HAY. MUJHSAY MILNA HO TO SAPNOON KAY ILAWA MILNA MAIRAY KHUWAABOON NAY KISI ROOZ BIKHAR JANA HAY. MUJHKO IQRAAT HAY TUM HI HO MUHABBAT MAIRI. YEH ALAG BAAT HAY KAY TUM NAY HI MUKAR JAANA HAY. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 9, 2003 hi i m a new bie i have written some poetrys and i m looking for ur response and this is a nice community i hope i will find ma new friends over here so read ma poetries here and on the main page and give me response so that i can write more me, what about me? me , I'm me so let me be me me, what about me? me, what about me? hold on, I am me so who am I? I AM ME! so please co operate wid me I have a diary that is red, I hide it underneath my bed. I keep it for my very own, I write in it when I'm all alone. I write about the things I do, like going to the park or the zoo. I write about the things I see, about my friends, what shall I be? Sometimes I write about my dreams, and they become more real it seems. I use my diary every night, and then when I turn off the light, I take my diary that is red, and hide it underneath my bed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted November 9, 2003 ASsalamu Alaikum awwwwwww Arsi your poems are so c ute :) and so innocent. bohat achi hai. i like the me one :P and umair thankx :) ur is good too Mein paraya shakhs bana howa ho wajood mein mein khud apni rooh mein ajnabi key tarha ho teray naksh naksh nay zindagi key kitaab say mera lafz lafz mita dia mein khud musafir-e-ishq tha mujhay khak khaak saja dia TERAY DUKH NAY RASTA BANA DIA Allah Hafiz Love yaz allz Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted November 10, 2003 yun zindagi ki rah mein majboor ho gaye itna huye kareeb ke hum duur ho gaye aisa nahi ke humko koi bhi khushi nahi lekin yeh zindagi toh koi zindagi nahi kyun es ke faslay humhe manzoor ho gaye paiya tumhe toh humhe laga tum ko kho diya hum dil pay roye aur yeh dil hum pay ro diya palkon se khwaab kyun giraye ,kyun chuur ho gaye yun zindagi ki raah mein majboor ho gaye itna huye kareeb ke hum duur ho gaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 10, 2003 thanx nazish .... :) aur arsiii u juss don worry ur posting is gr8 yar .... main kya hamaree poori community waley surely appriciate ur gr8 stuff..... keep dat up arsal ....... jaan ur poetry is also nice .... ab main kuch shiar arz karita hoon :) ''kuch shair'' "Wo mujh sai pouch raha tha batao kissa laga tum aglay zakmoon ko choro yai gao kissa laga ajab sawal kiya andeeuon nai patoon sai shajar sai toot kar girna batao kissa laga... -------------------------------------------------- jis peer ke chaon bhe lagay dhoop ke manand aus paeer par panche bhe basera nahe kartay ankhoon sai parh lai na kio dil ke udasee ais dar sai to wo zikar bhe mera nahe kartay.... -------------------------------------------------- kis ko piyara nahe jewan lekin app kehtay hain to mar jatay hain roz wo ahday wafa kartay hain roz waday sai mukar jatay hain.... -------------------------------------------------- harchand kai aun sai taqaza nahe kartay kis dil sai kahain aun ke tammanna nahe kartay tanhayee mai bhe lab par na aayai ga tera naam hum tujh ko bhool jayain gain yai dawa nahe kartay.. -------------------------------------------------- lahroon mai dobtay rahay darya nahe milla aus sai bhechar kar phir kio waisa nahe milla kuch loog thoree deer to achay lagay magar hum jis kai ho sakain kio aissa nahe milla -------------------------------------------------- tera tazkara karay har shaks ya kio hum sai goftogoo na karay....... -------------------------------------------------- umer kitnee manzelain tah kar chokee lekin dil jahan tehra tha tehra rah gaya........ -------------------------------------------------- mai aus ko bhool jaon yai ho nahe sakta wo mujhay bhool jayai yai mai honay nahe doon geen.................... -------------------------------------------------- karam karo ya sitam karo,gilla hum nahe kartay yaqeenan kheza mai phool kheela nahe kartay beshak khaq mai milla do ham ko hum jissay loog bar bar milla nahe kartay... ------------------------------------------------- ab na aayai ga zindagi mai kio teray beghair aik soorat hai jis ke qasam nahe deetee -------------------------------------------------- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 10, 2003 umair and nazish thanx for ur response u know all that umair is ma best friend and he has insisted me to come in this community but u believe this community is realy gr8 and the people r also gr8 thnx for response ma new poetry abt friendship Friendship is like a river Flowing without end When you're boating in it It is like a friend Life is like a maze That you cannot get through But if you have a friend That person will help you So if you are in danger Hang on to your friend And if you lose them Your friendship will never end i hope u will like that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 10, 2003 nice poetry arsi, jaan and inoccent, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 11, 2003 thanx arsii :) ur stuff is gr8 ..... sanober gr8 yar.... kab........ "KAB MERA HAAL-E-DIL POCHOO GAY TUM AA SANAM iSS INTEZAR MAI , MAR HI NA JAAIN HUM AAJA AAJA ,AAJA NILKAL NA JAII DUM CHAND KUDH MAI NA HOO JAII GUM JAAN KAB AAOO GAY TUM KAB TAK CHALAIN IS AAG PER MAI OR MERI DEWANGI JAAN KAB AOO GAY TUM KABHI YE BHI SOCHA KABHI YE BHI JANA K MAR MAR KE ZINDA HAIN HUM KAB MERA HAAL-E-DIL POCHOO GAY TUM AA SANAM Iss intezar mai, mar na jain hum uthnay laga dil se duhan chalnay lagi tanhiyaan iss raat mai ab saath hai mai or meri perchaiiyaan pagal hawa pagal samaan lagnay laga dusman jahan meray khawab suun loo sadaa merii sunn loo tumhay zindagi ki qasam ab mera haal dil pochoo gay tum aa sanam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 11, 2003 slaam all of u guys u guys r realy gr8 and ur poetry too i m realy enjoying here achaa to yeh lijiye humaari gham bhari dastaaan YEH NA THII HUMAARI QISMAT K VISAAL-E-YAAR HOTAAA AGER AUR JEETAY REHTE, YEHI INTEZAAR HOTAA TIRAY VAADAY PE JIYAY HUM, TO YEH JAAN JHOOT JANAA K KHUSHI SE MAR NA JATAY, AGER AITBAAR HOTAA TIRI NAZUKI SE JANAA K BANDHA THAA AHD-E-BODAA KABHI TO NA TOD SAKTA, AGER ISTAVAAR HOTAA YEH KAHAN KI DOSTI HAI K, BANAY HAIN DOST, NAASAAH KOI CHAARA SAAZ HOTAA, KOI GAMKASAAR HOTAA RAH-E- SANG SE TAPAKTAA WHO LAHUU, PHIR NA THAMTAA JISE GAM SAMAJH RAHAY HO, YEH AGER SHARAAR HOTAA GAM AGERCHA JAAN GUSUL HAI, YEH KAHAN BACHAIN K DIL HAI GHAM-E-ISHQ GER NA HOTAA, GHAM-E-ROZGAAR HOTAA KAHOON KIS SE MEIN K KYAA HAI, SHAB-E-GHAM BURI BALA HAI MUJHYA KYAA BURAA THA MARNAA, AGER IK BAAR HOTAA HUAY MAR K HUM JO RUSWAA’ HUAY KIYOON NA GARQ-E-DARYAA NA KABHI JANAZAA UTHTAA, NA KAHIN MAZAAR HOTAA YAH MASAIL-E-TASAVUF’ YEH TIRAA BAYAAN’ AARSII TUJHAY HUM VALLI SAMAJHTAY, JO TU NA ITNA KHUWAAR HOTAA inshllah u all would like that :star; Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 11, 2003 :hi: Hi Arsii Salaam & welcome to the shairi Board... haan ji sorry I'm a little late in welcoming u here but ??? ok no excuses I was offline for a few days so thats y ;) Wah wah bohot khoob nice shairi and nice English poetry.. heyyyyy just some friendly advice this topic is for URDU shairi only so plz aham aham u samjhing na ;) English poetry k liay doosrey topics hain so do feel free to post ur creations there :) I look forward to reading more of ur fantastic work Umair > :hi: Sx :ph34r: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 11, 2003 thanx umair, and i agrea with shabo,it's a urdu poetry section :) :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 11, 2003 Meray Hamsafar "Meray Hamsafar Meray Hamnasheen Main nay Rab say manga to kuch Nahin Main nay jab bhi mangi koi dua Nahin Manga kuch bhi Teray siwa Yeh talab kia keh meray Khuda Naey saal ki yeh masafatain Sabhi rahatain sabhi chahatain Woh atta karay tujhay manzilain Yeh talab kia keh mera Khuda Tujhay takht day,Tujhay Taaj day,Tujhay bakht day Meri Iltijaeen sunay kabhi Woh meri duaen sunay kabhi Inhain bakhsh day Woh kabooliyyat Meray hamsafar Meray charagar Meray saath chalna yeh soch kar Keh hay dosti ka kathin safar Na main shehr main barra motabar Meray pass zar na koi hunnar Sabhi theek hay yeh baja magar Zara dekh to mera hosla Meray pass jo kuch sabhi tera Nahin aur kuch bhi teray siwa Nahin manga kuch bhi teray siwa Yeh meri dua keh mera Khuda Meri dosti meri khamshi Meri har khushi meri zindagi Meri subha bhi meri shaam bhi Mera ehd bhi mera naam bhi Meray Shehr kay dar-o-baam bhi KEH JO MIL SAKAIN MERAY DAAM BHI Sabhi kuch tujhay Woh atta karray Woh Meri dua jo suna karay Meray hamsafar tu yaqeen kar Keh gawahi day ga mera Khuda Mera dast-e-talab jo kabhi utha Mujhay mangna to na aa saka Main nay jab bhi mangi koi dua Nahin manga kuch bhi teray siwa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 12, 2003 shabo jie salaamz to u no problem that u welcomed me late but the thing is that u did it and u did it warm heartedly realy very much thanx for that i will try ma level best to post urdu shairi more den english i hope u all r liking ma poetries kaash tamaam haseenon k baap mar jayein maut ka bahana ho aur hum un k gher jayein howzat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 12, 2003 :hi: Hi arsii U r most welcome here... hmmmm about ur shairi???? LBW :P Nice poetry adil & sanober Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 12, 2003 thanx shabo jie aap ka karam k mujhay aap sab friends ne itna achaa response diyaa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
