Nazish 0 Posted November 12, 2003 mai.n ne dekhaa diivaano.n ko shaam ke baad mai.n ne dekhaa diivaano.n ko shaam ke baad Dhuu.NDh rahe the viiraano.n ko shaam ke baad taariikii phir saare aib chhupaa legii le aanaa ghar mahamaano.n ko shaam ke baad mai.n ne us kaa sog manayaa kuchh aisaa Khaalii rakhaa paimaano.n ko shaam ke baad yaad kare jab mujh ko terii tanhaa_ii dekhaa karanaa gul_daano.n ko shaam ke baad "Farhat" chaa.Nd ke Khauf se kar letaa huu.N band kamare ke raushan_daano.n ko shaam ke baad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted November 12, 2003 you welcome arsi :) hey i wrote a poem too about friendship too but i forgot some parts of it. so jub ghar jaoongi tub likhongi and ur is very cute too and also thankx umair :) tataz allz Allah Hafiz love yaz allz Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 12, 2003 ek zara si runjish say shuk ki zard tehni par phool budgumani kay is tarha say khiltay hain zindagi say piyaray bhi ajnabi say lagtay hain muazrat kay lufzoon ko, roushni nahi milti luzaty puzeeraie phir kabhi nahi milti khuwab toot jatay hain,wahmoon kay sa`ey say umar bhar ki mehnat ko pal main loot jatay hain ek zara si runjish say saath chhout jatay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 12, 2003 na janay kon saa Aaseeb dil men theHra hai ke jo bhi aaya akheir makaan chor geya ,,,, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 13, 2003 buhot Veeran hai be noor hai ankhein meri ye deye kes nay bhujaye hai tumhein keya malum , Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 14, 2003 :hi: Hi All Hi Naz... nice poetry :D Teri rahon may kab say aakhein bichhaye baithay hain is dil kay tufan may mohabat ki shama jalay baithay hain aai zaalim kiss mord pay laakar chora hai tumnay mujh ko abhi bhi milnay ki hasrat say teri yaad ko dil say lagaye baithay hain dil ko aadat si ho gaye hai chout khanay ki bhigi hui palkon kay saath muskuranay ki kash anjaam-e-wafa pehlay say jaan jaatay tou koshish bhi nahi kartay dil lagaanay ki Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 15, 2003 nice shabo :) Haal - E - Dil Mera Haal-E-Dil Kuch Aaisa Hai Kay Koi Bata Nahin Sakta Suntay Hain Loog Per Koi Suna Nahin Sakta Hawaoon Pay Likha Hai Main Nay Qissa Apni Hayat Ka Kay Koi Lakh Chahay Bhi To Mitaa Nahin Sakta Har Eik Ki Tamanna Hai Kay Phooloon Pay Guzaray Zindagee Per Raah Main Padray Kantoon Ko Koi Hata Nahin Sakta Dil Main Dukh Samooo Kay Kab Tak Hunstay Rahoo Gay Aankhoon Main Aaisay Aansowoon Ko Koi Chupa Nahin Sakta Lakh Chahay In Mast Mailoon Main Gum Ho Jayay Mager Beetay Huay Lamhoon Ko Koi Bhulla Nahin Sakta Koi Rooth Jayay Tum Say To Mana Laina Kay Janay Waloon Ko Koi Wapis Bula Nahin Sakta Her Rooshan Cheez Ko Paa Lainay Ki Arzoo Na Ker Kay Suraj Nikalta Hai Per Us Ki Taraf Koi Aankh Utha Nahin Sakta Samander Ki Lehroon Pay Un Ka Naam Likhta Hoon Saad Kay Koi Aag Laga Bhi Day Per Jala Nahin Sakta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 15, 2003 Nice, deep, meaningful poetry Umair! Koi Rooth Jayay Tum Say To Mana Laina Kay Janay Waloon Ko Koi Wapis Bula Nahin Sakta Thanks for sharing! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 15, 2003 thanx shabo .... wesey yeh poetry mujhey bohut achi laghee to pesh kar dee :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 15, 2003 thanks all of u for such a gr8 response and nazish jie aap ki poetry ka intezaar ker rahe hain hum and shabo jie aap to ho hi nice aur nadan badi nadan ho gayee hai and guyz u all have posted very nice poetries i m realy enjoying this community very well achaa jie sab friends k liye eid ki dher sari wishes in advance laughter,cheer and lots of fun may ur eid be a happiest one so wish u all ma new friends a warm wish for eid Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 15, 2003 kesi din meray ghar aao meray kamrae m,en beitho aur aik aik shy ko gawar say deikho book sheef men pari hoi ketabein aur dayreyan meez par rakhi tasweere aur guldan men mujhaye hoy phool tumhein bateinge daraz men maojood cassettes dewaro par leikhi hoy Haroof aur bestar par naqsh be qarari tum par aayan kar de gi ke meri arzoon nay kes tarh tumhari aarzo ki hai aur kesay meray khawabon nay tumhary khawab deikhy hai agar ho saky ! tu kesi din meray ghar aao !!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 16, 2003 book shelef men pari hoi ketabein aur dayreyan aur guldan men murjhaye hoy phool soorry for mistake :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 adil bhai thats gr8 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 17, 2003 thankssss arsii :) Muhabbaton men bad Gumani nahi honi chahye muhabbat ki hai tu itbar karna bhi seikho , oh hafa hai tu uss ko mana lo , ke muhabbat Hamesha iss maan say rothti hai ke ussay manya jaye !! Buhot udas hai aik shakhs tere janay say , jo ho saky tu Lut aa issi ke khatir tau ,,,,, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 18, 2003 Yaadon Mey Baste Ho, Khiyaloon Mey Miltey Ho, Ankoon Sey Door Ho, Magar Phir Bhi Kareeb Ho. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 18, 2003 Broken Heart..! I'll never forget da days we once had.. The days when u were everything to me,, My mind used to tell me we’d b together forever.. But now I realized that was all a big dream.. The feeling I have for u will never go.. I wish I cud take back that one regretful day, The day when I willingly let u slide from my arms.. Never did I think of the astonishing pain of regrets.. That I would once have to live through.. The sight of u in someone else’s arm.. Makes my heart shatter into million pieces.. I sometimes wonder if u still think of me… Or if to u, I’m just a face in the crowd.. I wish so very much tht one-day we can have it all back, But for now, I’ll sit here silently, Remembering all the memories, we once shared.. Everyday my love grows much more stronger.,. Hoping that one day u will feel the same,.. And put the pieces of my broken heart..!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 18, 2003 nice replies shabo and sleepy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 18, 2003 Zindagi jab bhi keis shhy ki talab karti hai , meray honto pe tera naam machal jata hai , Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted November 18, 2003 Phaila Howa kajal Qasam To Khali Hai Tum Ne. Mujhe Kabhi Bhi na yaad Karne Ki. Magar mai Janta hoon... Tum Mujhe Kabhi Na Bhola Sakogi.. Din Bhar Hansata Khilte Rahne Me Shayad Meri Yaad Na Aaye Tumhe Mager Suno! Subha Jab Aankh Khule Tumhari To Takye Per ... Phaile Howe Apne Kajal Ko.. Chhupa Liya Karna.. Ke Koi Jan Na Salke... Tum Raat Dair Tak Roti Rahi Ho . Meri Yaaad Me.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted November 19, 2003 hi, jab raat ki naagan dastti hai nas nas zehar utarta hai jab chaand ki kirney taizi sai iss dil ko cheer ke aati hai jab aankh ke andar hi aansoo zanjeero mai bandh jaatey hai sab jazbo par chaa jaatey ho tab yaad bohat tum aatey ho jab dard ki jhaanjhar bajhti hai jab raqs ghamo ka hota hai khuwaabo ki taal pe saarey dukh wehshat ke saaz bajaatey hai gaatey hai khuwaahish ki lay mai masti mai jhootmey jaatey hai sab jazbo par chaa jaatey ho tab yaad bohat tum aatey ho! tab yaad bohat tum aatey ho! take care babye! sam! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 19, 2003 hey very nice Sameer! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 19, 2003 Hello all ma dear friends sorry for not coming in the community for two or three days coz ma pc net was not connecting But I must tell u that I m back wid a poetry of mine I hope u would appreciate that one Fiqar not zikar not Masalay ki nahin hai koi baat So baaton ki hai ek baat Jab arsii tumharay saath To kisi aur ki kya auqaat So ma dear friends I m always wid u : Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 19, 2003 Heyy arsii Fikar na faaka.. aiysh kar kaaka :P ur funny!! jab raat ki naagan dastti hai nas nas zehar utarta hai jab chaand ki kirney taizi sai iss dil ko cheer ke aati hai Wah wah Sam.. acha hai did u mean nas nas or naz naz ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 20, 2003 shabo samjha karo :P nas nas hia ;) jigar arsii u r going superb :) sameer ur posting is gr8 yara :hi: keep dat all up guyss .... :) ""Parkhoo Mat" Parakhana Mat Parakhnay Say Koi Apna Nahi Rehta..... Kisi Bhi Aainay Main Deer Tak Chehra Nahi Rehta..... Baray Logon Say Milnay Main Humesha Fasla Rakhna..... Janhan Dariya Samander Say Mila Dariya Nahi Rahta.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
