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who's quiting...yar tumharay liyay hi to mai nay essay post kiya tha..lakin ab competition hi nahiu raha...

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I know silv.. its just that.. what Bilal bhai sed.. I agree with him 100%.. really.. but too sad I dun have time to sit and think abt it.. I love Pakistan .. this time when I went back to pak for vacation.. I realized why I loved Pak before and what is it that won't ever make me change my views.. my love for Pak! But this topic/ debate is not abt what is it that u love abt Pakistan.. its abt the land itself.. my beloved pakistan.. and yeah u gotta think outside the box..

But silver.. dun u quit.. I loved urs.. seriously.. u know u won my heart with ur writing.. lolz.. it doesn't even seem like ur writing.. u amazed me.. :) .. ok I hope no one else is reading this.. khwah makhwah mai ppl like to make stories and think sumthing bad bad bad.. :firing: and im cheering for u bud..anyways ur the winner.. (hey really doesn't matter who wins because to me ur the real winner) :) luv u partner..

Aimon.

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Pakistan is an all seasons' country. From the highest mountains of the Himalayas to the shores of the Arabian sea, Pakistan is covered by numerous beautiful regions and the nature is offering to its the most exciting views in the world. When the snow of the north meet the burning deserts of south, there only Pakistan gives us the natural rainbow in our heart.

The poete Allama Iqbal made the shape of this Muslim Nation. Chaudhary Rahmat Ali wrote the name P.A.K.I.S.TAN.Which mean the Land of the Pure and also derived from : P for Punjab, A for Afghanistan, K for Kashmir, I for river Indus, S for Sindh and TAN for Land.

Only on 14th August 1947, Muhammad Ali Jinnah turned the dream into reality : Pakistan was made !

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Judge sahib...plz...aap mera yeh wala reply consider karain...okz....

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Aslmao LAikum every one :D

NaDan its real nIce and Timely topic ... i have always felt .. there should be chellenge and postitive competion

and seeing such mature topic really rejoices mee ... GOOD WORK nadan :yes: and thx for HONORING me as a judge !!

iNSHALLAH i shall try to join the competion as well

and sorry for being late .. i just returned from Hyderabad.

Keep it up ! every one

Mansoor

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KHUDA NEH AAJH TAK USH KOOM KI HALAT NAHE BADLE

NA HO. JISS KO KHAYAAL AAP APNI HALAT BADALNY KA

dearzz frndzzzzzzzzzzzz aik format ka sentence keh dehna 14 august ko......mujey pakistan seh bout muhabbaat hei......kabhe hum neh soocha hei keh kya hei he kafe hei.......hum neh apney watan-e-azizi keh wastey kya keya hei.....sab loogh kehtey hein ish pakistan neh hum ko kya dya?lakin hum neh soocha hei keh hum neh pakistan ko kya dya........ish ki taraqe keh wasty kya keya hei........agar hum sab apney garebanoun meh.muj sameet deekhein tuh hum tuh ajh tak kuch kar he nahe sakhey...watan ko muhabaat tuh hamarey diloun meh hei hei nahe..........dunya ki sab seh barey islamic stateki heseyaat seh pakistan ka kayaam.jis qadar azim-o-shaan waqeyaah thaa..aajh pakistan ki tareeq . hamarey ghalatteyoun..baadamaleyoun ka natejaah hei.pakistan ki taraqee tuh bout door ko baat.aaj tuhhamein apney tahafuuz aur baqee manda pakistan ki salamte ka khatraah para howa heiish waqat ish pyara watan meh sazashein ho rahey hein lakin hum.hum.14 carore ki awam aabe tak ghaflaat ki neend meh hein..mulki salmeyat keh kelaaf sab sargaraam hein.provinces meh aik dosrey ko laraya ja raha hei lakin aaj b hamarey leaders kehtey hein .sab theek hei............ :crying:

religious leaders ko deekhein tuh unh ki apny he dunya hei..........sab iktedaar ka masla hei kohe b deen keh mamley meh honest nahe.....kabhe kya masla leh aahtey hein kabhe kya...........ajh kal jehsy hisba bill peh larahe ho rahey hei

app sab saach saach batahein kya ish waqat pakistan ka masla hisba bill. hei...nahe har gizz anhe...........

hamara masla tuh do waqat ki rooti hei ..........ghareeb ko rooti chaheyeh hisba bill nahe...ALLAH ka shukar hei sab pakey muslims hein..yeh ALLAH jnata hei koun acha muslim hei.....kya hisba bill seh sab pakhey muslims ho jahein ge?

loogoun ko rooti chahheye.......?

kohe hei jo agey aahey sish 14 august ko aur 14 carore wam ko hosla dei......

ajh kal ko pakistan meh ho raha hei yehn sab ALLAH ki de howe saza hei.....

hum har saal 14 august shuuk seh manatey hein lakin.kabhe yeh ghoor kya keh 14aug1947 seh 14 augut 2005 tak pakistan neh kitney taraqee ki..........

kaasssssssss hamarey qauid pakistan hasil karny keh baad jald na footh ho jateh mujy yakin hei agar ehsa na hota tuh ajh pakintan world keh unh countries homhota jo pure dunya meh hakoomat kar rahey hein

quaid keh baad ajh tak kohe honest leader nahe aahya.....hamarey leaders sab apny mafadaat ka soochtey hein...........agar kabhe kohe ehsa leader aah gaya tuh watan-e-aziz ki qesmaat badaal jahey ge.........

lakin hum ko mayoos nahe hona chaheyeh...ahein ajh aik promise kareinaik nahey azam seh.pakistan ki taraqee keh lehyeh kaam karney ka.......pakistan ko youth ko he aagey aahna ho ga..........pakistan hei tuh hum hein...............warna kuch b nahe hei........ SHAM-E-WATAN KUCH APNEY WATAN KEH SHAHEDOUN KA ZIKAR KAR

JIN KEH LAHOO SEH SUBAH KA CHEHRAA NIKAAR GAYA HEI :flower:

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Hmmm a great idea indeed…. I’ll post my debate soon. Now Im in hurry so couldn’t read all the replies.

Im sure all members contributed greatly.

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aree sachi mujhe debate nahen karni ati

meri apni awaz hi mushkil se nikalti hai to taqrer kahan se karon gi

aur rahi baat hidden talent ki to art corner shuru karein phir mera kam dekhain

im a fine painter itni achi nahen mager theek thak

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Ibadat  Today, 09:25 PM 

i really would like 2 share my opinion here ab 14th Auguest 19547

"Kia ke Mulk Islam ke NAam Par Azad howa Tha?"

Bachpan se main yahi suntii aai thi ke Musalmanu ne Islam ke liye ye Mulk azzad karwaya...

ye Mulk Islam nibhane ke liye Azad howa tha... kiukey Hindustan main hindu Islam nibhane nahi de

rahey they....

Lekin jab main barii hotii gai tu dekhtii gaii ke kaun se Islam nibhaya ja raha hian yahan?? yahan tu sab Indian hain ya phir Magrib ke Ashiq rehtey hain..Musalman kaha kahan hain? Phir aik khiyal aya kafii soochne ke bad ke

kia Wakai YE MULK ISLAM KE NAAM PAR AZAD HOWA THA???

Tu merey damagh ne is ka jawab dia ke NAHI...Quaid e Azan ne azad karwaya ye mulk..??? kehtey they apni taqereeroon main ke ye mulk Islam ke naam par ho ga... hansii ati hain un ke jumle par ..6fit k insaan apne ghar main tu Islam la nahi saka.. apni BEhan ko tu parda karwa nahi saka.. .itneee barey Mulk main Islam pheelaye ga....

Islam ne tu kahii Aurat ko hakoomat ki ijazat nahi dii lekin Quaid e Azam ne ye bhi kar dekheya... ye bataya apni behan ko har jaga sath rakh kar ke Islam ne tu barii behayyii ka hukum dia hain kiukey ISlam ne kabhi esa nahi kaha.. hameesah ye kaha hain ke Parde par rahi , bila zaroorat baat na karoo geer mardon se ,

Aurat ko tilawat ki bhi ijazat nahi hain unchi awaz se.. lekin

Quaid e Azam ne Azad tu karwya lekin Islam ke naam par sirf naam par ..usey nibhane ka un ka na koi irada tha ...or na unhu ne apne 1 sala azadi ke bad ki zindgai main esa kuch kanoon bana kar dekhaya....

Mujhy Afsoos ke sath yahi kehna par raha hain ke Mulk Islam ke lie nahi azad howa tha...is liye yahan Islami taleemat par koi chal bhi nahi raha hain ... agar ye Azad karaya jata sacchey dil se Islam ke liye tu aaj yahan Islami taleemat pheeli hwii nazar atii... : sad :

Well I am Quoting IBADAT'S Opinion regarding 14th Aug to this Topic! as i tHINK IT Is worth sharing .

Well To let You all Know.. That Today is Last day Of Competetion1 so Judges! B ready! and all who want to Participate should submi their By Tonight. :)

Gosh It will be Fun! ,,

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salam 2 all

Ajj Alhamdulillah hum 58th anniversary mana rahe hain AZADI ki apne dil pe hath rakh kar kahain kia wakai yahi azadi thi jis ki hamare baron ne demand ki thi wakt bata raha hai k jaise jaise saal guzarte jarahe hain hamari azadian khatam hoti jarahi hain ham kitni asani se sunlete hain aur batate hain doosron ko k pehle afghanistan, iraq, iran, sham aur phir pakistan ham kehte hain sochte nahi hain din badin ham kafiron k kaid main aate jarahe hain Pakistan hamari pehchan hai aur is ki shinakht Quaid-e-Azam, Allama Iqbal, Sir Syed Ahmed Khan jaise log the jab k aaj kal hamare ideals Shahrukh, hrhitik roshan etc hain. ham log ghulam hain jaise jaise din guzar rahe hain bure log mazeed bure hote jarahe hain ghareeb aur ghareeb horahe hain ameer aur ameer horahe hain kia yahi pakistan socha gaya tha magar phir bhi aise bohat se log hain jo Pakistan se pyar karte hain sache dil se jin ki badolat Allah hum se khush hai bawajood is k aaj hum namaz bhi masjid main dar se parhte hain magar phir bhi yahi dua hai meri

Aye paak watan tujhe mera khuda yunhi kaim daim shaad rakhe shaad rakhe aabaad rakhe. AMEEN

Regards

its me

AD

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:) hello...nadan ur suggetions or idea very intersting or good way...but i have not a good debater so i m realy sorryyyyyyy...but i reallly enjoy this topic ......bht zaber dast hain keeep it uppppppppp :goodpost: god job

asma :flower:

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HAPPY INDEPENDENT DAY..........

aj youm-e-azadi hei.58 years pehly aj keh he din dunya keh naqshey peh pakistan wajood meh aahya.........sab janty hein keh ab yeh kohe nahe baat nahe 58 years seh yahe hota aah raha hei har saal 14 august ko youm-e-azadi ka ehsaasdelaya jata heilakin najany keoun hamein aazadi mehssoss nahe hote.......har nahe 14 august previous 14 august ki tarah hota hei.........yes aik 14 august different theeee.....wooh 14 august 1947 ki theee jab hamarey quadi hum meh thee.....

aaj b radio...tv...newpaper meh sab speeches karein gey....aur atlast sham ko aazadi ka sooraj gharoob ho jahy ga........kya kohe hei jo hum ko batahey keh hum aazad hein? <_<

app ka jawab kuch b ho mehrey kuch views app sab seh share hein...

kya hamareygovernment institute azad hein?

kya hamarey government officers azad hein?

kyahamarey educational institute azad hein?

kya hamare intezameya azad hei?

kya hamarey courts azad hein?

kya hamare aasembleyaan azad hein?

kya hamare parliment azad hei?

kya hamaraaprint media azad hei?

kya hamara electronic media azad hei?

kya hamare jobs azad hein?

kya hamarey bazar azad hein?

kya hamarey hospitals azad hein?

if not tuh phir kya azad hein?.............

YES OF COURSE.....

rich tabqaa azad hei...

politition azad hein...

black marketer azad hein...

ismaglar azad hein...

hamarey hukamraan azad hein..

donumber kaam karney waley azad hein... :(

yahe loogh ajh ...AZADI ...ki nehmatoun seh hamoor hein..aur mubarak baad inhe ko milney chaheyeh.so inh sab ko mubarak WATAN-E-AZIZ ka youn-e-azadi :crying:

aur ghareeb tuh ush waqat azad houn geh jab unh ko aram seh do waqat ki roote mil salkhe ge.......

lakin hum sab umed seh hein keh aik din zaroor aahey ga.bkzALLAH keh yaan deer hein par aandheer nahe

rich tabqaa azad hei..

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nice reply every1....kool...hey...when is the result gonna get out??

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Very well every one :yes:

i have been reading and re-reading thoroughly every one's speeches .. and sum ppl have really amazed me.

its really hard to be a judge ....

i will post my humble judgment after isha INSHALLAH

Mansoor

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oopps... m I late.. I think time hasn't up now

My beloved Pakistan

We owe the deepest thanks to those who sacrificed their lives for the sake of our future, our freedom and saved our impending benefits for the rest of time. They got an earthly heaven for us…. named Pakistan on the great day of 14th August 1947. That one day we found dignity, greatness and peace again.

Pakistan is a country of beautiful lands, fascinating valleys, enchanting heavenly forests and mountains, and mysteriously charming desserts.

It’s divided geographically into four regions: the great highlands, the Balochistan Plateau, the Indus Plain, and the desert areas. The Himaliya and Trans- Himaliya Mountain ranges (the Karakoram and the Pamirs) including some of the world's highest peaks, such as K2 and Nanga Parbat, make up the great highlands. The Balochistan is a broken highland in elevation with many ridges crossing it from northeast to southwest. The Indus Plain is the most prosperous agricultural region of Pakistan, southward to the Arabian Sea. In the southeast are the desert areas, the Thal, the Cholistan, and the Thar. The southwestward-flowing Indus is the principal river; its major tributaries are the Chenab, Jhelum, Ravi, and Sutlej.

It has extreme variations of temperature, both seasonally and daily. Very high altitudes modify cold climate, snow-covered northern mountains. Along the coastal strip the climate is modified by sea breezes. Each season has its particular beauty and charm.

The foundation of Pakistan is Islam, now it’s our duty to make it an Islamic country indeed. For all the evils here, Pakistan is not liable but Pakistanis are liable, off course we are.

It’s our beloved country, no matter right or wrong…. But it’s a great country

because it kept our Islamic Ideology and culture alive in severe deviating circumstances in subcontinent. It gave us identification. Pakistan protected us from ruthless slavery. It saved Muslims away from the exploitation of prejudice Hindus and predatory British.

We must love Pakistan with all its virtues and evils, with all its merits and imperfection, with all its purity and corruption, with all the good and bad people in it… we must love it. It’s our protecting home and no person should disregard and curse his home. It has given so much to us which is hard to return.

Cherish the day ….14 August!

Love Pakistan!

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OK .. I Guess Time Is Off!.. :)

No more Essay's will b Included! After Charmer's :)

MM Mansoor! yes i can imagen such a Tough Task!..

neways Hope Both of our judges will discuss and end up wid

WINNER.

So i am waiting for THAT.....

Shew Now pressure is On You Judges :)

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Assalamaoalikum!

Nadan as u know that I have left to post at Cy but when I got your pm and I came to know about this topic I could not stop myself without participating in this topic coz it was about my Lovely Pakistan

First this topic “why I love Pakistan†is very nice and write on this topic is always less. now I tell u something ... when I had written almost 150 words on this topic but then deleted it at the very next second coz that debate had converted into typical essay that we can find in our English compositions so I thought to make it different and wrote all this. I am writing it in urdu coz u will more enjoy it…..

Sorry Nadan but i can't stop myself :( ...hey abi 14th of August hai na :(

Main kion Pakistan sai payaar kerti hon

“Main Pakistan sai kion payaar kerti hon†sab sai pehlay tou aap ko payaar kai meanings pata honay chahein…jab hum ye kehtay hain “I Love u†tou hum kesi ko os ke her khoobi or khaami kai sath chahtay hain...mujay Pakistan sai es liyee payaar hai k jo Azadi hum ko yahaan milee hai wo kesi be or mulk kai shahriyoon kai naseeb main nahi hai…ab Azadi kai baray main her aik ke philosophy thoree mukhtalif hai….lakin mujay Apna PAkistan sari khoobiyaoon or khamiyaoon kai sath payara lagta hai.

yahaan sab nai apnay apnay asool yeni code of conduct lago ker rakhein hain..yeni aap aapni manmani kernay k liyee pori tarah Azad hain...tou phir kion hum wo nahi kertay jou hum soch rahay hotay hain ya apni taqreeron main bol rahay hotay hain??

Aakher main main ye kehna chahoon ge k her tasweer kai do rukh hotay hain or mujay or aap sab ko Pakistan sai payaar hai...yehi waja hai k hum mernay kai bad be apnay mulk ke mati main dafan hona chahtay hain.

thanks

( i can't express my true feelings due to lack of time :( )

Edited by AAMAN_EMAN

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nice reply emaan,....really interesting..but y did u delete ur 1 st reply...haiun????

acha/....where r the results?????

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hey today is 15 od august but where are results :(

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Hold On Guys..!

Results Wil be Here By Tonight INSHALLAH.

So best ofLuck to all Participents..

Emman! Good to c YOU! :) its really is a blessed feeling to knwo that You are no more angry widne of us :). Thanks alot.

ok GUYS, I Amwaiting for results too! so keep Your finger cross :)

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Dear Friends.... i know i m late.as ever...its 15 agust today...but i have some thing to say.. so u never mind..

"Pakistan our beloved country....Our parents got it on the name of islam...contributing with their blood, blood of their beloved people. The Leader Quaid e Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah who prove this dream in real. what our elders did then....about 'mushraki pakistan, Kashmir' . and now what we are doing. Mazhab even divided in lot of firqa's .most of young ones are just taking life as fun. nothing more then joy. there is a law but Not for for rich people. Language, we have divided in PUNJABI, URDU AND ENGLISH. English necessary to progress , urdu nation and punjabi mother language.Education it is divided in different standards. poor man can not afford even education. "

i hve lot more to say..but..now i m ..........

ALLAH hafiz

abid

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Asim -- Thanks Alot, bUt where is YOur share :wacko: ?

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i ain't that creative :P

and i know i cant get that award so i am outie :P

let see who gets the award

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every 1's a quiter....don know y..?????/

khair....i have my fingers cross

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come on the judges should have posted the result :(

how loong will we have to wait... ???

i am feeling :sleep: :P

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Pakistani independence day kia.. India ka bhi guzar chuka .. ab kitna wait keraen ge judge sahiban.. man Im goin to bed too!

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