Nazish 0 Posted October 2, 2002 salaamz all wuz up u guyz:) long time no see and i know aap logo nay mujh ko bohat zaada miss kya ho ga so here I am TADA! hehehehe well here is a shair frome me : Tou milley bhi tou chund sa'ton kay liyay Tujh say aye ZINDAGI gilay hai bohat. love u all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted October 3, 2002 w/salam shabnm jii, mey ne roka bhi nahee who tehra bhi nahee hadsa kya tha jese dil ne bholaya bhi nahee jane waloon ko kahan rook saka hai koi tum chaley hoo too koi rokne wala bhi nahee WHO TOO SADYOON KA SAFR KAR K YAHAN POHNCHA THA TOO NE MUN PHAIR K JISKO DEKHA BHI NAHEE loves farhaNN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 3, 2002 w/Salam Farhan ji... by the way who is "shabnm"??? lol sadaa detii hai Khushbuu chaa.Nd taare bol pa.Date hai.n nazar jaisii nazar ho to nazaare bol pa.Date hai.n tumhaari hii nigaaho.n ne kahaa hai ham se ye aksar tumhaare jism par to rang saare bol pa.Date hai.n mahak jaate hai.n gul jaise sabaa ke chuum lene se agar lahare.n muKhaatib ho.n kinaare bol pa.Date hai.n zabaa.N se baat karane me.n jahaa.N rusvaa_ii hotii hai vahaa.N Khaamosh aa.Nkho.n ke ishaare bol pa.Date hai.n chhupaanaa chaahate hai.n un se dil ka haal ham lekin hamaare aa.Nsuo.n me.n gam hamaare bol pa.Date hai.n terii paabandiyo.n se ruk nahi.n sakatii.n ye fariyaade.n agar ham chup rahe.n to zaKhm saare bol pa.Date hai.n Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 3, 2002 Salaam Naz Nice to have u back!!! Lovely shairi u posted... here's one from me... Har aik muskurahat muskaan nahi hothi, Nafrat ho ya mohabat aasaan nahi hothi, Ansoon ghum k aur khushi k aik jaisey hothay hain, In ki pehchaan asaan nahi hothi... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted October 3, 2002 salaamz all hey shabo that so so cute thing u wrote. so sad and sweet. and farhan ur shair so cool too. especially the last two lines which u wrote in caps:) here is one from me Jo hairaaN hai tumharay zabt pay keh do Kateel in say Jo daman per nahi girta wou AnsooN dil pay girta hai. love u all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 4, 2002 WOW Naz... kya shairi paish ki hai seedhi dil ko ja k lagee... very touching indeed!!! Dhoondain gai ager mulkoon mulkoon, milnay k nahi, nayaab hain hum, Thaabeer hai jis ki hasrath o gham, ai hum nafso, wo khwab hain hum..... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted October 4, 2002 salam shabo jee and naz, you know me that your real name is shabnam if your name is not shabnam than i will call u shabo okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk. and thank,s u naz apko sher pasand aya. pathar tha magr barf k galoon ki tarhan tha aik shux andherey mey ujaloon ki tarhan tha uljha howa esay k kabhi khul na paya sulgha howa esay k misaloon ki tarhan tha who mil too geya tha mgr apna hii muqadr satrang kii uljhi howii chaloon kii tarhan tha farhaNN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 7, 2002 Salaam Farhaan! Hey u know k my name is Shabnum.. but not "Shabnm".. u samjhing ji?!! Hey it's ok I was just joking... Your shairi is very nice too! dard apanaatey hain paraaey kaun kaun sunaata hai aur sunaaey kaun kaun doharaaey woh puraani baat gham abhi soyaa hai jagaaey kaun woh jo apney hain kya woh apney hain? kaun dukh jheley aazamaaey kaun ab sukuun hai to bhuulaney mey hai lekin us shaKhs ko bhulaaey kaun aaj phir dil hai kuch udaas udaas dekhiye aaj yaad aaey kaun Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted October 7, 2002 w/salam shabnum jiiiii, very nice poetry, chnd masoom say patton ka lahoo hai shayd jisko mehboob kay hathon kii hina kehtay hain farhaNN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted October 7, 2002 Salaam Farhan ji! Wah janaab very nice poetry.. acha shair hai :) This is from me... Ik haseen se mohabbat karna bhi badi bhul hoti hai Yahaan katal karne ki nahi katal hone ki saza hoti hai Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted October 8, 2002 w/salam shabnum jiii, ye ghazal meri favourite hai and i hope k apko bhi pasand aey gii. who dil hii kya tere milne kii joo dua na kare may tujhko bhool k zinda rahon kuda na kare rahe ga sath tera sath zindagi bankr ye aur bat meri zindagi wafa na kare ye theek hai nahee marta koi JUDAII may kuda kisi ko kisi say magr JUDA na kare agr wafa pe bharosa rahe na dunya koo too koi shux mohabat ka hosla na kare SUNA HAI ISKO MUHABAT DUAEEN DATI HAI JO DIL PE CHOOT TO KHAY MAGR GILA NA KARE farhaNN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted December 9, 2002 salaamz all awwwwwwwwwww so cute ghazal farhan. well here is a line from a ghazal that i love "Zindagi taiz, bohat taiz chali ho jaissay" love u all naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 9, 2002 Salaam ALL!!! Ek Be-wafa ke Zakham Pe Marham Lagane Hum Gaye Marham ki kasam, Marham na mila, Marham ki jagah Mar...hum...gaye..... I thought this was a nice shair to share with you all :;): Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 10, 2002 Ab bhi milthay hain magar pehlay jaisi baath nahi Na jaaney wo badla hai ya meray wo jazbaath nahi Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted December 19, 2002 Salam to All !!... How are you Ji! aashiqii be dilii se mushkil hai phir muhabbat usi se mushkil hai ishq aGaaz hii se mushkil hai sabr karnaa abhi se mushkil hai ham ?? aasaan hain aur hamaare liye dushmani dosti se mushkil hai jis ko sab be-vafaa samajhate hon bevafaaii usii se mushkil hai ek do duusare se sahel na jaan har koi har kisi se mushkil hai tuu baa-zid hai to jaa 'Ibrahim' magar vaapasi us galii se mushkil hai Love Ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 19, 2002 W/salaaaaaaaaaaaaaam JI! Nice to see u on the shairi board again.... :;): Achi shairi paish ki aap ney, thanks! Tanha Na Rehtay Bhari Mehfil Main Na Hoti Woh Halat Jo Ho Na Bayaan Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
muniba 0 Posted December 19, 2002 Salam 2 all, its nice 2 see u again in poetry Shabo ji well done! ROAK SAKO TU PEHLY BARISH KI BONDOON KO TUM ROKO KACHI MATI TU MAHKAY GI ,HAY MATI KI MAJBURI RuBaB :;): :;): :;): :;): Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 19, 2002 W/salaam Rubab Hey what a beautiful shair you posted.. wah wah janaab bohoth khoob :;): Thanks for the compliments ji.. so nice of u :) Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted December 20, 2002 dono jahan teri muhabbat mein haar kay woh ja raha hai koi shab e ghum guzar kay weeran hai maikada, khum o saghar udas hain tum kya gaye keh rooth gaye din bahar kay ik fursat e gunah mili, woh bhi chaar din daikhay hain humnay hoslay parwadigar kay duniya nay teri yaad say begaana kar diya tujh say bhi dilfareb hain ghum rozgar kay bhoolay say muskura to diyay thay woh aaj faiz mat pooch walwalay dil e nakarda kaar kay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 20, 2002 Hey cooooolll nice to see u on the shairi board too.. Ur shairi is so like ur name!!! :) Ehsaas k andaz badal jaathey hain warna Aanchal bhi ussi thaar sey bantha hai kafan bhi ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kis sey mangey Dawa Zakhmon ki Sabhi ne Chotein Khaiee hai kisi ka Sanam Bewafa hai to kisi ka Sajaan Harjaiee hai Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted December 20, 2002 Salaaaaaaam JI! Thanks :) Ek ghazal k chand Ashar hein jo pesh kar raha hoon ye kyaa ke sab se bayaan dil ki haalaten karani 'Ibrahim' tujh ko na Aaiee muhabbaten karani ye qurb kyaa hai ke tuu saamane hai aur hamen shumaar abhi se judaai ki sa'aten karani sab apne apne qariney se muntazir us ke kisi ko shukr kisi ko shikaayaten karani milen jab un se to mubaham si guftaguu karanaa phir apane aap se sau-sau vazaahaten karani love ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted December 20, 2002 W/salam ji Nice shairi!!! Duniya sirf nafrat ka naam hai magar, Sari duniya ka pyar mey ney paya hai tum sey. Yeh dil tha pehle veeran-e-gham, Ik bekaraar dil ko karaar aya hai tum sey. Apney dil ki har ik baat batayi hai tumhe jaan-e-man ?? , Nahi aaj tak hai kuch aisa jo chupaya hai tum sey. Aisa laga hai har khushi mili hai aaj mujhko, K mey ney sanam dil lagaya hai TUM sey..... :) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted December 21, 2002 salam 2 all, h r all of u jee! :) ao aik sajda karain alam-e-madhoshi main log kahtay hain sagar ko khuda yaad nahi rabbia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted December 21, 2002 Salam Ji! nice shair ji :) us ne kahaa sun ahad nibhaane ki Khaatir mat aanaa ahad nibhaane vaaley aksar majabuuri yaa mahajuuri ki thakan se lautaa karate hain tum jaao aur dariyaa dariyaa pyaas bujhaao jn aankhon mein Duubo jis dil mein bhi utroo meri talab aavaaz na degi lekin jab meri chaahat aur meri Khuaahish ki lau itani tez aur itani uuncchi ho jaaye jab dil rode tab laut aanaa ;) ;) Love Ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted December 22, 2002 well its great to see u all posting sum luvly stuff! :;): my turn now :) tunay dekha hai kabhi aik nazar shaam kay baad kitnay chup chap say lagtay hain shajar shaam kay baad Itnay chup chap keh raastay bhi rahain gay la ilm chorr jayen gay kisi roz nagar shaam kay baad maen nay aisay he gunah teri judaee mein kiyay jaisay tufaan mein koee chorr day ghar sham kay baad shaam say pehlay woh mast apni urranon mein raha jis kay haathon mein thay tootay huay per shaam kay baad waisay itni he kaafi hai..... :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
