adilkhan 0 Posted May 28, 2003 Salammmmmmm bheegte rahy palkhain , pieta raha teri yaad mai tanhai say naata jorr ke peitaa raha teri yaad mai peitaa raha raat bhar sadion ki pyasay ki tarha khushk hontt leyay chalta raat , teri yaad mai Qasam tau khaye thei tum nay bhi , ansoo anay na deingi kabhi , Qatra Qatra bun geya aaj samndar . sirf teri yaad mai udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 28, 2003 salam Jab teri dhun mai jiya kartay thay HUB BHI CHUP CHAP PHIRA KARTAY THAY Ankh mai piays piyas huwa kartei thei dil mai tofan utha kartay thay Log aatay thay gazal sunnay ko hum teri bat keya kartay thay sach samjhty thay teri wado ko Raat din ghar mai raha kartay thay kesi weeranay mai tujh say mil kar dil mai kiya phool khila kartay thay ghar ki dewaar sajanay key liyay hum tera nam lekha karty thay oh bhi keya din thay bhula kar tujh ko hum tujhay yaad kya kartay thay jab teray dard mai dil dukhta thaa ham teray Haq men dua kartay thay Cherta hai gham e Dunya jab bhi hum teray gham say gila kartay hai , udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted May 31, 2003 salam to all guyzzzz......... sorry i was not writing shairs for quite some time.........but me was missing u al guyz of community specialy shabo jie app i don know kya hua hai bohut arsey se app se baat nahien huee hai........hope to c u soon...... ab guyz i m back to app ke liye kuch khasss shairs laya hoon wesey pyaar vyaar ke shair to sab ne likhey hain lakin main zara mazahiye shair arz karta hoon .........hope fully u alll guyzzzzzz surely love dem.......... :D so der dez r.......... >Kon kehta hai pyaar may pakray jaeen gay? >Waqt aanay per behen bhai ban jaeen gay > >Teray husn ki kia taareef karoo?tera bander jaisa mu >Teri zulfo ki kia tareef karoo?teray ek ek baal pe joon > >Mohabbat mujhay un jawano se hai >Jo khatay peetay gharano se hain > >Aj bagh may kali hai, kal gulaab ho ga >Mujh se shadi karlo,tum ko sawab ho ga > >Itnay dino se jalanay nahi aya >Jalti hui aag ko bujhanay nahi aya >Kehta tha saath jiyen gay saath marain gay >Ab rooth gai hoon to ullu ka patha mananay bhi nahi aya. > >Ghar se roz jata hai wo, Maa ko bohot rulata hai wo >Kambakht baap, Sab ko hi satata hai wo > >Hathi nay kaha ja kar hathni ki kabar per >Sadqay jaoo tumhari patli kamar per > >Tum bhi becahara,hum bhi becahara >Fittay mu tumhara,fittay mu hamara > >Hum nay usay dekha angle badal kar >Us nay hamay mara sandle badal kar > >Dil kay armaa aanso'oo may bah gaye >Un kay bachay hamay mamu kah gaye > >Hum nay tumhay dil diya dildar samajh kar >Tum kha gaye is ko naswaar samajh kar > >Dabbay may dabba dabbay may khargosh >Nana nay aankh mari nani behosh > >Khuda karay sab haseenaao ke baap mar jaeen >Maut ka bahana ho aur hum in kay ghar jaeen > >Ishq kay samander main ghota lagaya >Pani both thanda tha main bahar nikal aya > >Un ki gali say guzray,ajab ittefaq tha >Unho nay phool phanka,gamla bhi saath tha > >Log kehtay hain kayamat kay din marr jaeen gay >Hum bhi bohot chalaak hai,mangi thallay war jaeen gay > >Wo ankh bari pyaari thi jo hum nay usay mari thi >Wo sandle bari bhari thi jo us nay hamay mari thi > >Mera dil para hai loose Is ko matt karo tum use >Warna parain gay tum ko shoes > >"Sahib Zaday kiya karte hain" Larki Waloon ne poocha >"Jab dekho farigh phirte hain ya tambako pite hain" >Larkay ki amman yeh bolin....kam kare us ki joti >"do bhai bhatta lete hain--abba khair se daku hain" > >nakam muhabbat ka har eik dukh sehna.. >.har haal main anjam se darte rehna >Qudrat ka barra anjam hai jaidi........ >mehbooba ki olad ka "mamoon" kehna! > >Rab na dikhaye >Tooba Tooba! >nanga pinda >nanga sina >bara kam33na >Dish Antena > >Ishq main fanni kharabi...........Munqata hi ho geya saab silsila >Is tarha toota hai un se wasta....jis tarha T.V main toote rabta > >Rat ka waqt hai or masjid hai qareeb >uthiye jaldi se ke peghame amal laya hoon >ghar main hain filhal jitne bhi purane jote >aap bhi jake badal lain main badal aya hoon > >or bhi chizain lut chuki hain dil ke sath >yeh batayen doston ne ishq farmane ke baad >is liye kamre ki eik eik chiz check karta hoon main >" eik tere ane se pehle eik tere jane ke baad" > >bhains rakhne ka takalluf hamse ho sakta nahin >ham ne sokhe doodh ka dabba jo hai rakha hua >ghar main rakhain ghair mehrm ko mulazim kis liye >kam karne ke liye abba jo hai rakha hua > > >Utha kar phool ki patti, nazaakat se masal daali >Ishaarey se kaha Hum dil "Aisa" haal kartey hain > >dil karta hai keh uss kay nazook hontoon koo chuum loonnnnn >magar uss kee behteee hooyee naak nay meraa iradaa hee badal diyaaa > >chandni chand se hogi to sitaroon ka kiya ho ga >mohabbat eik se hogi to hazaroon ga kiya ho ga > >Abhi abhi to pyaar ka computer kiya hai chaaloo >Aab main dil ki hard disk pe aur kitni files daaloo > >Apne chehare se ruswaai ka error to hatao >Ai jaaneman apne dil ka password to batao > >Woh to hum hain jo aap ki chahat dil main rakhte hain >Warna aap jaise kitney hi softwares bazaar main bikte hain > >Roz raat ko aap mere sapne main aate ho >Mere pyar ko mouse bana ke ungaliyon pe nachaate ho > >Tere pyar ka email mere dil ko Lubhataa hai >Par beech main tere baap ka virus aataa hai > >Aur karvaaoge humse kitnaa intezaar >Hamaare dil ki site pe kabhi enter to maro yaar > >Apni insult ka badalaa dekhna main kaise loonga >Jaaneman tere baap ko Shift Delete kar doonga > >Aap jaiso ke liye dil ko cut ker diya karte hai >Warna baaki cases main to copy paste kiya karte hai > >Aapka hasnaa aap ka chalnaa aap ki woh style >Aapke adaaon ki hamne save hai kar li file > acha bas yar...........hope u guyzzzz surely love demmmmmmmmm........hope to c u guyzzzz soon......... bye u alll:y: TAKE CARES ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 2, 2003 W/salam Umair Nice cut & paste job!! :P Jin patharon ko hum nay ataa kee thee dharkanain Unko zabaan mili to wo hum per hee baras paray!!!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 2, 2003 salam guyz........ thanks shabo jie........ :P kuch to kadar hai app ho........himmmmmmmmmm copy paste karna bhie koiiee mamoolie kam hai kya...... :P wesey yar yeh shair jo app ne likha hai ,app ko merie taraf se........ :D: ok bye tc Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted June 2, 2003 Tum sub... abb lertay hee raho gay.. yan kuch meri shari perhanay kay liya bhi waqat nikaloo gay,... :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 3, 2003 Salaam Babarleo Yahaan koiee ladaiee nahi ho rahi ji... pyar jitha rahay hain hum loog.. :inlove: Arz kiya hai:- bhigi bhigi, shaam Dhaley tanha tanha, chand taley door kahiN, kuchh saayoN sey dhundhlayee si, raahon sey aati hai, ek aawaaz, kabhi kuchh jaani hui, kuch ajnabi sunkar jisey, na jaaneiN kyuN hota hai kuchh, ehsaas yuN koi, kahiN, aisa bhi hai karta mujhe, jo yaad hai. Umair ----> :shabo: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 3, 2003 hehehhe U got that shabs .... sab say baree Psychology Truth kee hai .... And Urdu main kehtay hain na .... "sanchhh koo anchh nahi " :D " abb koo gharbraa kay yaa kehtay hain marr gayeenn gay Goo mar kar bhee chan na payaa too kidhar gayeen gay :O regards Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 3, 2003 Mansoor!! Thanks for the compliments and the shairi!!! Here's one for u kuchh to sun k haiN hastay to kuchh haiN rotay teray meray qissay ab bhi haiN galiyoN meiN hotay kuchh tujhay mujhay ilzaam detay haiN kuchh tujhay mujhay nakaam kehtay haiN teray meray qissay logoN kay zubaan per aam rehtay haiN kuchh tujhay bewafaa kehtay haiN kuchh mujhay bewafaa kehtay haiN ishq kya balaa hai, log tera mera naam lekay kehtay haiN kuchh log tujhay badnaam kartay haiN kuchh log mujhay badnaam kartay haiN lekin ishq kay naam per dono ko salaam detay haiN kuchh log teray qabar per aatay haiN kuchh log meri qabar per aatay haiN hum phir jee uTheNgay ek doojay kay liye yeh dava karkay jaatay haiN :) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 3, 2003 ??? :;): hahha wahh jeee wahh shabo jeee kia bat hai :D i like dat :D reply ... zara kuch shayree kee web site daikh loonn phir reply karoon ga :D Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted June 4, 2003 salammmmm all kisi khamush lamhay mai kaha jab tum nay mujh say thaa hamaray pyar ko UonHe hamein pur jush rakhna hoga " ye jenay marnay ki batein ye hansatay din ye barsatay hamari pyar ki Maa nind hamesha khul ke barsengi yaa oh din bhi Taluo ho ga jab ham tum sath tau honge mgar aik be nam sa reshta hamaray darmiyan hoga tumhari aisee baton ko mai heraani say sunta hoo mai kehta thaa jo hona hai ousay choro meray socho ke ruston par oh jo anjan bastei hai uosay basti ke aik konay mai hamara chota saa aangan apni tamam tar ronaqon ko laye muskurata hai magar ab manta hoo mai tumhari fikr sachi thi mai hi galtei pe thaa shaed na tum pehlay si lagtei thei ha badla mai bhi thaa shaeid MAGAR TUM TAU ZAMANE KI BADALTEI RUTT SE WAQIF THEI tumhari an kahi batein mujhy jab yaad aathei hai tau meray dil ke angan ko ghamoo say toot'ta badal hamesha dhaank deta hai CHALAY AAO MERAY HAMDAM CHALAY AOO KE MERAY DIL KE AANGAN MAI BHARO'N KA BASERA PHIR SE HOJAYE CHALAY AAO KE IN PUR AASHOOB RATO'N KA SAWERA PHIR HO JAYE CHALE AAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO UDAS Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted June 4, 2003 buhat khoob.... so read this one a punjabi nazam.. of muneer nizaee... at wagha boarder.. " Kis da doosh see kis da nahi Ahh galan hun karan diya naee walay lungh gaya toba walay rataan hokay puhran deeya naee Jo howa aa aay hona ee see tay honi rukya rukdeenai.. aik wari jadoon shuroo hoo jaway gul fair aawain mukdee nai kugh aing we rahwan ukhiyan see kuch gul wich we ghum ta took see kugh shair day loog we zalam san kugh manoo we maran de shook see. translation.. Kis ki ghati thee kis ki nahi.. yeh batain ub kernay ki nahi waqat nikal gaya tuba wala ratain ub aahain bhernay ki nahi jo hua yeh huna hee tha honi rokay rokti nahi aik mertaba jub shuroo hoo jay phir baat is terhan khutum hoti nahi kuch rastay bhi mushkil thay kuch baat main bhi gum tha kuch shair kay loo bhi zalim thay kuch mujhay bhi mernay ka shook tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 4, 2003 Salaam all! zikr us pareewash kaa, aur phir bayaaN apnaa ban gayaa raqeeb aaKHir thaa jo raazdaaN apnaa Main wo kyoN bahut peete bazm-e-ghair meN yarab Aaj hi hua manzoor un ko imtihaaN apna manzar ik bulandee par aur ham banaa sakte 'arsh se idhar hotaa kaash ke makaaN apnaa De woh jis qadar zillat hum haNsee meN taleNge Baarey Aashna nikla unka paasbaN apna dard-e-dil likhooN kab tak? jaaooN unko dikhlaa dooN -- uNgliyaaN figaar apni KHaamaa_KHooN chakaaN apnaa ghiste ghiste mit jaata aap ne ????? badla naNg-e-sajdaH se mere sang-e-aastaN apna ta kare na ghammazee, kar liya hai dushman ko dost kee shikayat meN hum ne hum-zabaaN apna ham kahaaN ke daanaa the? kis hunar meiN yaktaa the? be_sabab huaa 'GHalib' dushman aasmaaN apnaa Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 4, 2003 Punjabi poetry from me.... jey hass ke yaar naal gal kar laan, loki aakhde yaar naal rali hoi hai. jey paasa wat ke yaar kolo lang ja, loki aakhde yaar naal ladaiee hoi hai. bulle shah main lokan diyan ki aakha, meri jaan kuriki 'ch fasi hoi hai!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 5, 2003 salam guyz........... adil aur babar app kie shairee is gr8............. shabo app kie punjabi one is gr8............ :P abhie main koiee shairee nahien likh raha hoon,i ll do dis laters........... ok bye take cares u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 5, 2003 hahaha ..shabs :D Urdu Ur punjabi donoo Khoob hain ... lagta hai Punjabi walee poem tumharee apnee hai ? Waisay buulay sahah Koo beech main kuin lay ayee :D: hmmm I love punjabi poetry :) achaa ik hamaree taraf say Ghulam fareeda yaree oothay layee JIthay agla qaar peechanayee kikkkar tayy angorrr charhayaaa Har Guuchaa zakhmayyyaaa :D Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted June 5, 2003 Mansoor.. kya yeh words meray liya hain "lagta hai Punjabi walee poem tumharee apnee hai ? " if yes.. than my answer is No... main jub khud ki likhoon ga tu apn kahoon ga.. aur kya app ghulam fareed ki is kalam ka.. ko defnie kersaktay hoo .. yan koi bhi... aur hann... mera appni likhi hui ghazals main colloection baqi hai.. share karoon ka na.. yeh app loog bataoo.. kyun ka main diopint hoota. hoo responce per.. jo meri shari ko yaqeenan groom kernay main help nahi keta... u got my point ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted June 18, 2003 Salammmmmm all dhonda hai jesay Hazaro barss mai nay Qareb rehtay hoi bhi dur payaa takrar hai uss ki ke mera hai oh fareeb mai aa kar muhabbat ka yaqeen delaya Rehti hai talab har roz uss ki deid ki iss jazbay nay hamein rswaa kar waya uss ki tau adaat hai har aik say muskurany ki jes say har aik ko ham nay apna raqeeb paya udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted June 18, 2003 salam janan tumhein ijazat hai !!!!!!! ke in tareek raho par thakan sii khud mai paoo tau andheroo say kabhi dil dool jaye thak si jao tau meray jaltay hoi lamho meray KAngal khatho say chora ke apnay khath ko feza ki nagmaagi say tum naye geitoon ko chun lena haseen palkoon ki noko par naye kuch khuwab bun lena koi gaar poch le mera tau uss say mera zekar mat karna meray jewan ki jaltei Dupehar say be Garaz ho kar tum apni chandni raaton men jugno paltei rehna mery tanhaiyo ki wekhshato ki fekar na karna tumhein iss ki ijazat hai meray sab khat jala dena meray har yaad ko dil say kurechna aue metta dena tumhein bilkul ijazat hai ke jab chaho bhula dena mgar atni guzaresh hai AAgar aesa NA ho Janan TAU Acha hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 22, 2003 Salaam all! koee ummeed bar naheeN aatee koee soorat nazar naheeN aatee maut ka ek din mu'ayyan hai neeNd kyoN raat bhar naheeN aatee ? aage aatee thee haal-e-dil pe haNsee ab kisee baat par naheeN aatee jaanta hooN sawaab-e-taa'at-o-zahad par tabeeyat idhar naheeN aatee hai kuchch 'eisee hee baat jo chup hooN warna kya baat kar naheeN aatee ? kyoN na cheeKHooN ki yaad karate haiN meree aawaaz gar naheeN aatee daaGH-e-dil gar nazar naheeN aata boo bhee 'ei chaaraagar ! naheeN aatee ham wahaaN haiN jahaaN se hamko bhee kuchh hamaaree KHabar naheeN aatee marte haiN aarzoo meiN marne ki maut aatee hai par naheeN aatee kaaba'a kis muNh se jaaoge 'GHalib' sharm tumko magar naheeN aatee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted June 25, 2003 salamm all Aasman pe aik chamakta setara thei oh Sabhe rang jes men shamil thay , aik aesa kush kun nezara thei oh Gulab jesay thay lab o RuHsar uss ke jab oh bat kartei thei , tau hazaro motei zameen boss hotay thay oh chalti tau baharay uss ke hamsafar hotei Muhabbatein uss ke ham rah hoti thei Jab oh Palke uothatei tau do setara ankhein kuch kehnay ko be tab hotei oh jes kelay hazaro dil dharktay thay rotay tarptay AaH bhartay Reshmi fezaye uss ki muskan thei phool setaray uss ki dharkaan thei :shabo: :shabo: pir na janay keya huwa . phir U huwa ke kesi ki nazar lag gaye uss Noor e SaHar ko Shab e gham nay ghera iss ke ghar ko Cheray ki shaadabeyan gaye Maand par gaye oh ankho ki chamak khatam huwa oh Ruf oh saj daj oh damak dukh ussay buhot thaa , mgar oh hanstei rehtei thei jeet jaongi zamanay say yahhe kehtei rehtei thei phir dua'n bhi kaam na aaye dawaein bhi Apno ke dil say jo nekli thay oh sadaein bhi kaam na aaei PAGAL thei dewani thei Dunya ko kab oh mantei thei thkra deya tere pyar men zamane ko yahhe kehthei oh tanha iss qadar hoi , udas rehthei thei itbar na kartei thei apnay app say batein karti thei , muhabbat say Peish aa thei thei ye alag bat hai ye iss zamanay nay kuch bhi na deya uss ko , pir bhi muhabbat say peish aathei thei , oh PAGAL larki !!!!!!!!! :shabo: udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 26, 2003 saans layna bhee kaisee adat hay saans layna bhee kaisee adat hay jiyae jana bhee kia reevayat hay koi ahaat nahi badan may kaheen koi saaya nahi hay ankhaoon may paaon bay his hain chaltay jatay hain ek safar hay jo bhta rhta hay kitnay barsoon say kitni saadiyoun say jeeyae jatay hain jeeyae jatay hain addatain bhee ajeeb hote hain... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted June 27, 2003 salam Meri Aarzoo hai atni choti sii Meray Aankhon men aa ke bus jao udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted June 28, 2003 Mera aik he Arzoo hai ,,,,, KAy Tau aaye aur phir na jaye Huamesha Meray sath Meray sang rahay.... Jaisay Phool aur KAntay,Khizan aur Bahar Tua Is tarha say meray dil men rahay kay Men Lakh tujahy bhulana Bhi chahoon per Bhulaa na sakoo ye he meri arzoo hai Aur Akhri tamana hai udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 28, 2003 Hi Adil Paas jab tak woh rahe dard thama rehta hai PHailta jata hai pHir aankH ke kajal ki tarah. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Woh chaand ban k merey satH satH chalta raha Mey uske hijar ki raatooN meiN kab akailee huiee Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
