NaDaN 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Chamakti aankhon main shoukh jazbay, Gulaab chehray pay muskurahatt, Wo jub bhi college ki seerhion say Sahailion ko liay utarti tou aisa lagta tha jaisay Dill main uter rahi ho........ Kuch iss tayaqqun(yaqeen) say baat kerti thi jaisay Dunnia usi ki nazron say daikhti ho Wo apnay rastay main dill bichati hoi nigahon say hass k kehti, "Tumharay jaisay buhat say lerkon say main yeh batain Buhat say berson say sunn rahi hon, Main sahilon ki hawa hon, neelay samandron kay liay bani hon" Wo sahilon ki hawa si lerki, jo rah chalti tou aisa lagta tha Jaisay dill main uter rahi ho Wo kall milli tou usi terha thi, Chamakti aankhon main shoukh jazbay, Gulaab chehray pay muskurahatt kay jaisay chandi pighal rahi ho, Mager jo booli tou us kay lehjay main wo thakan thi kay jaisay Saddion say dasht e zulmat main chall rahi ho................... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kidman 0 Posted January 9, 2004 hello, Bohot koshish kare lekin Musafir aa nahi sakta! Koi phir rok laita hai Use wapis palatne se Faqat mur kar hi takne se Aur uska muntazir lamha Kayi sadiyo, kayi janmo se Uska muntazir lamha...... Bil-aakhir beet jaata hai Muqaddar jeet jaata hai Kis liye pyar mai auhaam pala karte hai Ishq mai chor ke jaana koi nayee baat to nahi Fahd Danish Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted January 9, 2004 (edited) nice Edited January 9, 2004 by rythm Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 9, 2004 "Parda" Ek sach pe daal ke parda ek sach ko dhoondne main chalaa, Majboor hoon kis kadar main kyun hokar majboor main chalaa... Pyaar jo ye haqiqat hai jaise maut ka kadwa sach Mil ke bhi naa hum mile hain apno se kah rahe hain ab Majboor hai meri mohabbat ye zahar pite hue main chalaa... Majboor hoon kis kadar main kyun hokar majboor main chalaa... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Thanks a lot Shabo and Umair.... Aap dono ki poetry bohat he achi hai aur is khaaksaar ko welcome karnay k liye behud nawazish:T "Perda" [b]"Parda" Ek sach pe daal ke parda ek sach ko dhoondne main chalaa, Majboor hoon kis kadar main kyun hokar majboor main chalaa... Pyaar jo ye haqiqat hai jaise maut ka kadwa sach Mil ke bhi naa hum mile hain apno se kah rahe hain ab Majboor hai meri mohabbat ye zahar pite hue main chalaa... Majboor hoon kis kadar main kyun hokar majboor main chalaa... Ek jhooth jo liye baithe hain apne main unko yakin dilaaun kaise Jab apne hi nayan moond baithe hain main unhen haqiqat dikhaaun kaise Aankh kabhi khul jaae unki dil mein ye aas liye main chalaa... Majboor hoon kis kadar main kyun hokar majboor main chalaa...[/b] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted January 9, 2004 hey fahd. that song of AJ is gr8. nice post Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Salaam all :hi: Mujhe dariya nahi likhna mujhe sehra nahi likhna Tasalsul se safar main hon mujhe thehra nahi likhna Purane rabton ki rakhh ab tak dil main baqi he Meri jalti hatheli par nia wada nahi likhna Anna se jeet kar usko agar jo main ne khoya he Mera noha nahi likhna mera naghma nahi likhna Bisat-e-zindagi ki aakhri sarhad pe khadi hon Mujhe fateh nahi likhna mujhe muhra nahi likhna Gawahi apne dil se lo tumhara dil kia kehta he Mujhe jhota nahi likhna mujhe saccha nahi likhna Tumhari aankh main gar main kabhi chup chap jal joan Tum apni aankhon main lekin mera sadma nahi likhna Main uski yad main gum hon ke apne aap main gum hon Mujhe mehfil nahi likhna mujhe tanha nahi likhna Main apne lafzon se shuhrat tumhain de jaongi ik din Mujhe mash-hoor na karna mera charcha nahi likhna Ye na ho tum kabhi usko mitana chaho…na mitte Mujhe apna samjh lena magar apna nahi likhna Meri aankhon main batain hain magar chehre pe gehri chup Meri aankhain to likh dena mera chehra nahi likhna Kahin aisa na ho meri kasak us dil main reh jae Mera dukh dard likh dena magar gehra nahi likhna….! JO SOCHON TO YOUN LAGTI HE TUMHARI HAR NAZAR BIJJLI MERA DIL TOOR HOTA HE…….. TERA JALWA NAHI LIKHNA…..!!! Its "slightly" lengthy but worth the read :D Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Na Jee Bhar k dekha na kuch baat ki Bari Arzoo thi mulaqat__________ ki Ujalon ki Paryan Nahany laggin Nadi Gungunai Khayyalat__ ki Mein chup tha to chalti Hawa ruk gai Zaban sab samjhty hain Jazbat ki (Bashir Badar) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted January 9, 2004 ADIL UMAIR NADAN ZABURDUST BHE Mohabaat thi shiddat nahin thi rishtey they apnayiyat nahin thi ishhq thaa junoon nahin thaa chahaht thi amar nahin thi.. Pyar tha...mukamaal nahin thaa woh mera thaa saraa nahin tha mohabaat thi shiddat nahin thi rishtey they apnayiyat nahin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Thanks Snober! Very Nice ashar! Mohabbat Youn Bhi Hoti Hai Kisi Say Munsalik Cheezon Ko Pehroun Daikhtay Rehna........ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted January 9, 2004 thanx nadan zaburdust bhe Ussey kehna bhot na-murad shay hay janoon ussey kehna mujhey hay bhot janoon uss ka Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Sab Parindy Ro rahy thy Lash pay Bethy hoye Pair Borha girgaya tha Barishon ki Raat Mein Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 9, 2004 nadan.kidman,shabnam n all of u guysss gr8 stuff u have done.. ab kuch meri taraf se ;) KAISEY BATAEIN TUM KO ? ujrey lamhon ki dastane jo tum kaho tow sunaine tum ko buhat raaton ko jaagey hum .. chalo zara sa jagein tum ko tum hi ho jo roshni se ban kar hamari aankhon main aabase ho jab apni aankhein hi keh diya hai .. tow phir bhala kyon rulein tum ko tum aisa karna ke ek lamhe ko apni dharkan pe hath rakhna meri wafain, yeh mere jazbe agar kabhi yaad aaein tum ko ghubaar-alood raaston main talash kar kar ke thak gaye hain kahan pe ja kar base hue ho..kahan se hum dhoond kar laye tum ko tumhein tow sukh aagaye muyassar..tumhein tow hum yaad hi nahi hain magar batao ke hum jo chahein tow kis tarha se bhulain tum ko tum apni baton pe mut-maeen ho.. humain bhi sharmindagi nahi hai aao k dewwar ko gira kar apna banaye tum ko kaho aey Kiran! yeh jhoot hai na ke tum ne is ko bhula diya hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Salaam All :hi: Nice poetry everyone Umair> heyyy cheer up :) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kidman 0 Posted January 10, 2004 hello, thank you fati, nice post umair.. phir daaman-e-umeed woh phoolo se bhar gaya jaadu bhari nigaah se jaadu sa kar gaya bas dekhte hi dekhte duniya badal gai kuch sochte hi sochte chehra utar gaya betaab beqarar tha pehle hi dil bohat phir aap ka aana aur bhi betaab kar gaya ik bekhudi ka naam mohabbat hai dosto chaahat mai kis ko hosh hai kya kya guzar gaya kuch bhi pata nahi hai mohabbat mai ae dost kab raat subah ban gai kab din guzar gaya fahd danish. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 10, 2004 Khamoush chahaton ki mehuk us taraf bhi hai Jo mairay dill main hai wo kasak us taraf bhi hai Kerb e shaban e hijjer say hum bhi hain aashna Aankhon main ratjagoon ki jhalak us taraf bhi hai Hain iss taraf bhi taiz buhat dill ki dherkanain Baitaab choorion ki khanak us taraf bhi hai Samaan subb hai apnay tarapnay kay wastay Hai zakhm e dill idher tou namak us taraf bhi hai Nice You Alll!!! :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 10, 2004 nie posting nadan :) wah wah shabnam jie app kehtee hian to hans letey hian :D Kisi nay pucha mohbat kia "kisee nay pocha mohabbat kya hai? Samandar nay kaha.... Mohabbat samandar key gehraiyo may chepie hoe eik seepe hai.. JIss may chahat jessa anmol moti mojood hai. Baadal nay kaha .... Mohabbat eik ~dhanak hai . Jiss may har Rang Nomaya hota hai... Shairr nay kaha.... Mohabbat eik esse ghazal hai ,, Jo har eik sunay walay kay dil may uttar te chali jate hai ... Saaz nay kaha .... Mohabbat eik essa geet hai .. Jo Dil may uttar jata hai ... Malee nay kaha.... Mohabbat gulshan kay phool key woh dilkash khusboo hai... Jiss may sara gulshan mehak uttah hai... Ankhon nay kaha .... Mohabbat ansoo ka samandar hai.. jo kisse kay intezar may khamoshi say behta hai... Dil nay kaha .... Mohabbat kisse ko Khamoshi say chahay janay ka naam hai... kay aakhire waqt bhee Izhar na kiya jay... Naseeb nay kaha .... Mohabbat wala duniya ka khush Kismat tareen insaan hai .. Aur jiss kay Dil may Mohabbat nahin... Woh duniya ka Badd Tareen shakhs Hai... Nafrat nay kaha .... Aakhiri Jeet Mohabbat ki Hoti hai.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kidman 0 Posted January 11, 2004 hello, aaj wo muddat baad aaya bhi bus ye kehne jaanaan! mere saare khat lauta do sab tasveere kalam kitaabey wapis kardo saare tohfey mujhse sab kuch maange wala jaate jaate mere kamre ki chokhat par chor gaya hai...... apna aap Fahd Danish. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 11, 2004 na fikr-e-ferda na yaad-e-mazi na chain dil ko na bay qarare na had say guzra hoa junoon na bay kulli woh pehlai jaisee bus ik udasi dheeme dheeme bus ik khamoshi bay karan si bus ik bay nam si jalan hai bus ik derd si thakan hai jo zindgee kai adhoorai pan ko hadoon sai agay berha rahee hai ~~rukh~~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 11, 2004 Salamz to all :hi: hum ko milay wafa muqaddar mein nahin jalay pyar ka diya muqaddar mein nahin her baar yehi soch kar lota tery der say kahan sanaum aur kahan sanum kada muqaddar mein nahin kya gila karein teri be wafaee ka hum bas keh diya k wafa muqaddar mein nahin kya cheez hai khushi koi mujh ko bata de ik khushi ka kehka muqaddar mein nahin ghamoon ki dhoop he chaee rahi to kya gham thandi chaoon aur bad-e-saba muqaddar mein nahin akelay he karna hai yeh zindagi ka safer ik hamsafer ik hamnawa muqaddar mein nahin mayusi k andherey mein kuch aesa ghira hun aik bhi roshini ka diya muqaddar mein nahin apni asri hasaratoon ko yeh deta hun tasalli koi khushi ka silsila muqaddar mein nahin merey haath ki halkeeron mujhey itna bata do kya muqaddar mein hai aur kya muqaddar mein nahin thokrein he milien to kya huwa Ahsan koi rahber koi rahnuma muqaddar mein nahin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 11, 2004 tumhayn sochun to "yeh din yeh raat yeh lamhay mujhay acchay lagtay hain tumhayn sochun to saray silsilay acchay lagtay hain meray dil main daro deewar main saray manazir main tum hi tum ho mujhay yeh aainay acchay lagtay hain khafa hona ada say muskurana aur chup rehna mujhay yeh husn k sab hi zawiyey acchay lagtay hain buhat hi choti baaton pay kabhi baysakhta do dil buhat hi zor say hanstay huey acchay lagtay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 11, 2004 Salaam :hi: NaDaN, Rukh, Molajut> Wah wah bohot khoob!! Umair> Nice poetry n thanks :) Aap k shehar mein kaali ghata to chhati hogi, Taaron ko chhilmilaaney mey thori sharam to aati hogi, Aap laakh chupaieyn duniya sey magar Akeley mein humari yaad to aati hogi!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 12, 2004 Aap ko bhool jaayein hum itane to bewafaa nahi Aap se kyaa gila karain aap se kuch gila nahi Shisha-e-Dil ko tordena Unka to ek khel hai Hamase hi bhool ho gai unaki, koii Khataa nahi Kash wo apne gham mujhe de, de to kuch sukun mile Wo kitna badanasiib hai gham hi jise milaa nahi Kerni hai gar wafa to kiya, kaise wafaa ko chor doon Kehte hain is Gunah ki hoti koi SAZA nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted January 12, 2004 Tumhai udhaas see pata hoon main kai din sai Na janai kaon sai sadmai utha rahee hoo tum Woh shokian woh tabasum woh kahkai na rahai Her ek cheez ko hasrat sai daikhty hoo tum Chupa chupa kai kamoshee main apnee bai chainee Khud apnai raaz kee tasheer ban gayee ho tum Yeah gham buhat hain mery zindaganee mitanai ko Udhaas rah ker mere dil ko orr ranj na doo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted January 12, 2004 Thanks a lot Shabo :D and tussi tay beja beja karwa ditti poetry naal Mein ne kaha hum ko muhabbat ne keya diya Ous ne naqab chehray se apnay hata diya Seenay mein hum ne shamma-e-muhabbat jalaee thi jis ko tumharee yaad ne shola bana diya Jin raaston pay chal tay hooay they hum aashna Hum tou wohi hein, tum ne woh rasta bhola diya Barson mein jo babya thay marasim woh keya hooay Keyon faslon ko aap nein hud se barha diya Huns kar sahein gay ab tou sitamgar hay har sitam Hum ne bhi dil ko aaj se pathar bana diya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
