Udas 0 Posted January 17, 2003 Salaam!!Salaam FarhaNN Sahib.. nice shaiyri ji :) Kya kahun tum se main ke kya hai ishq, Jaan ka rog hai, bala hai ishq. Ishq hi ishq hai jahaan dekho, Saare aalam mein bhar raha hai ishq. Ishq maashuq ishq aashiq hai, Yaani apna hi mubtala hai ishq. Ishq hai tarz-o-taur ishq ke taeen, Kahin banda kahin Khuda hai ishq. Kaun maqsad ko ishq bin pohuncha, Aarzoo ishq wa mudda hai ishq. Koi khwaahan nahin mahabbat ka, Tu kahe jins-e-narawa hai ishq. Mir ji zarad hote jaate hain, Kya kahin tum ne bhi kiya hai ishq? Sx mai sar ke bil gera thaa ,nghahoo ki buhj say, dunya samjh rahi they ke sajdy mai gera hai, jab ger geya sajdy mai,tu dunya nay ye jana, zalem nay buhot pe hai,madkhush para hai,, udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Udas 0 Posted January 17, 2003 jes par barsa hoo sada piyar ka badl ban kar , haye oh shakhss mery hoon ka piyasa nekla, udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 17, 2003 Salaam All Salaam Udas welcome to the Shairi board.... Nice shairi u posted! Ye pyar ka khel ajab hai k kuch paana nahi sab kuch khona hai, Aik jaisay hain din raath yahaan bas rona hai, bas rona hain. Ye likhi thi thakdeer meri bas dair sey thum ko milna tha, Ab kis ko dain hum dosh yahaan jo likha hai wo hona hai. Ye DOSTI ka jo rishtha hai iss risthe pey koiee shak nahi, Ye rishtha nahi hai khoon ka par ye chandi hai ye sona hai. Hai yaad teri jaageer meri aur ansu meri dolat hai, Yun jal jal kar hee marna hai aur lehad mey ja k sona hai... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Udas 0 Posted January 18, 2003 [ mrey shab o roz bhi ajeeb thy na khesab thaa na shumar thaa, kabhi uomar bhar ki khabar na theyi,kabhi aik pal ko sadi khha, mujhy janta bhi koi na thaa,mery be niyaz tery siwa, na shekaste dil na shekast e jan,kh tery kushi ko kushi khha, udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhaan 0 Posted January 20, 2003 salamz udas & shabo jee, ham too samjhay thay k ham bhool gaey hain unko kya hua aaj ye kis bat pay rona aya farhaNN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Udas 0 Posted January 20, 2003 salammmmmmmm,kesy ho sab? tujh ko panay ki tamna tu mita dey mai nay dil say lekin tery dedar ki khasrat na gayei,, udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rabbia 0 Posted January 21, 2003 :;): salam 2 alllllll, arz kiya hai! ish hazaron kartay hain par ashiq sab ka nam nahi ishq bohat hi mushqil hai yeh sab k bas ka kam nahi yeh subject bohat hi mushqil hai, :D koi theory main pass to koi practicle main fail Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted January 22, 2003 sallamz to allz!!!!!!!!!!!!! how r u alllz????? well in this board it is my first contribution so here it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and haan also tell me key hows it? Har Khushee Main koi kami See Hai Har Khushee main koi kami si hai Hansti aankhoon main bhi nami si hai Din bhi chup chaap sar jhukaaye thaa Raat ki nabz bhi thami si hai Kis ko samajhaayen kisi ki baat nahin Zahan aur dil main phir Thani si hai Khuaab thaa yaa Gubaar thaa koi Gard in palakon pay jami si hai Keh gaye hum kaise dil ki baat Shahar main ek sansani si hai Hasaratain raakh ho gain lekin Aag ab bhii kahin dabi si hai okz gtg babayez see u ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhaan 0 Posted January 22, 2003 salamz Rabbia & Arzoo, Good poetry both of u, pathar tha magr barf k galoon ki tarhan tha aik shux andherey may ujaloon ki tarhan tha uljha hoaa esey k kabhi khul na paya suljha hooa esey k misaloon ki tarhan tha who mil too geya tha magr apna hii muqadr shatrang ki uljhii hooii chaloon ki tarhan tha Loves All farhaNN. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Udas 0 Posted January 23, 2003 app dosto ko Udasv ka salam, you to maalom hai Anjaam-e-Duaa kiya hoga Un ki taskeen ke liye Haath uThaa dete haiN ,,, udas, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted January 23, 2003 Salam to all :) How are you ji!! ??? dil se agar kabhi teraa aramaan jaayegaa ghar ko lagaake Aaj ye mehamaan jaayegaa sab honge us se apane taarruf ke fikar mein mujh ko mere sukuut se pahachaan jaayegaa is kufr-e-ishq se mujhe kiyun roktey ho tum imaan vaalo meraa hi imaan jaayegaa aaj us se main ne shikavaa kiyaa thaa sharaaratan kis ko Khabar thi itanaa buraa maan jaayegaa ab us muqaam par hain meri beqaraariyaan samajhane vaalaa hoke pashemaan jaayegaa LOVE Ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Najeeb 0 Posted January 27, 2003 Salam, aaina kyuun na duun ke tamaashaa kahein jise aisaa kahaan se laauun ke tujhasaa kahei jise hasarat ne laa rakhaa terii bazm-e-Khayaal mein guladastaa-e-nigaah suvedaa kahein jise phuunkaa hai kisane goshe muhabbat mein ai Khudaa afasuun-e-intazaar tamannaa kahein jise sar par hujuum-e-dard-e-Gariibii se Daliye vo ek musht-e-Khaak ke saharaa kahein jise hai chashm-e-tar mein hasarat-e-diidaar se nihaan shauq-e-inaan guseKhtaa dariyaa kahein jise darakaar hai shiguftan-e-gul haaye aish ko sub_h-e-bahaar painbaa-e-miinaa kahein jise "Ghalib" buraa na maan jo vaaiz buraa kahe aisaa bhii koii hai ke sab achchhaa kahein jise [Mirza Asadullah Khan Ghalib] Trully he was the greates of all poets. TC Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khamush 0 Posted February 18, 2003 Salam,ji kya hall hai,app sab ke, hello salam ji kya hall hai app sab ke? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sameer 0 Posted February 20, 2003 hello everyone! mai to yeh kaho0nga ke ab jo log yahan post kartey hai unke liye mai stranger hi ho0 kyounke bohat se naye log aagaye hai aur ab introduction karwaana maine chor diya hai kyounke pehchaan hojaaney ke baad log bhool jaye yeh kuch achi baat nahi hai...... han magr yeh ghazal meri life fav. hai ispar comments zaroor deyna agr achi lagey to ek chota sa ladka tha mai jin dino ek mailey mai pohancha chamakta huwa jee machalta tha ek ek sheh par magr jaib khaali thi kuch moul le na saka laut aaya liye hasratein sainkro ek chota sa ladka tha mai jin dino khair! mehroomiyo ke woh din to gaye aaj maila laga hai phir ussi shaan se aaj chaaho0 to ek ek dukaan moul lo0 aaj chaaho0 to saara jahaan moul lo0 narasaayi ka ab jee mai dharka kahan par woh chota sa allarh sa larka kahan bye take care everyone! stranger Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted February 23, 2003 salaamz Stranger hey nice ghazal, mein bhi koi ghazal likhtey but abhi koi yaad nahi hai. well aik ghazal hai abhi meiray pass but wo tumhari he ghazal hai (yay wali nahi dosri wali). so oh well. but thankx for sharing it sameer gotta go lovez Allah Hafiz Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted February 24, 2003 salams gr88888888 ghazal i really liked themm well done all :) main poetry isss liyeee nahi likh raha yaa merry DOC nay poetry say perhaiz ka maswara dia hai... :p again good woork keep it up mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 24, 2003 Salaam all! Youn haath ki khamoosh lakiron mei aagaya lafzoun ki rahguzar say woh dil mei sama gaya jo nukta soochta raha mein tamam umr lamhoun mei sara falsafa mujhko bata gaya Youn chahatein samait lein daaman-e-yaar nay bakhshi qubooliat dil-e-be-ikhtiyaar nay sunli duayein bhi meri parwardigar nay woh bandagi ka mujhko saleeqa sikha gaya Uska khayaal subha hai uska khayaal shaam jaisay pila gaya wo mujhay chahaton ka jaam matla'a bhi uskay naam hai maqta'a bhi uskay naam diwaan-e-shayeri mera kuch youN saja gaya Youn haath ki lakeer hina ban kay chah gayee tasweer uski meri hathaili mei aa gayi khushboo qaba say sari fiza mei sama gayee chashm-e-ghazal mei meri kajal laga gaya Karkay meray wajood ko makhmoor lay gaya anjaan rastoun pay mujhay dooor lay gaya madhoushioun mei istarha mas-hoor lay gaya taza ghamoun ki raah woh mujhko dikha gaya Woh aik shakhs saray jahan say zara juda umeed meri aas meri hausla mera aiwan-e-dil mei aatish-e-chahat laga gaya din ka sukoon raat ki neendein chura gaya Toofaan jaisay shahar mei aakar guzar gaya chookar meray badan ko sehar mujh pay kar gaya jisko thapak thapak kay sulaya tha aik umr ek shakhs chahatoun kay woh armaan jaga gaya Har shaama'e intizaar sulagti rahi bahut roti kabhi rahi kabhi hansti rahi bahut khushboo'e gul chaman mei bhatakti rahi bahut deewangi ki ek nayee duniya dikha gaya Bay-aasra bhi ho kay bahalna qubool hai shamma ki tarha mujhko pighalna qubool hai purkhar raastoun pay bhi chalna qubool hai kaanton ki rahguzar say ulajhna sikha gaya Youn falsafa hayat ka mujhko bata gaya Youn haath ki khamoosh lakeeron mei aagaya Hey Mansoor thats cheating,,, to participate in this section u must contribute with shairi :P Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooldewana1 0 Posted February 26, 2003 hi salamzzz too alll hi nazish and shaboo and alll hay hi salamzz to all hi shabo and nazish zindgi kay baray main bas itna hi jana hai ...hum jahan say ayaae hai bas idher hi jana hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 26, 2003 Hello & Salaam cooldewana1 Aap ki shairi pasand aiyee mujhay, thanks for sharing it with us! Yeh chhota sa nazaraana meri taraf sey to welcome u here!! Mai Sochti hoon Jaane Kyoun Saare DEEWANE Pyaar K Ik Din Juda Ho Jatay Hain Dil Jeet K Jaan Haar K Barbaad Hotee Preet Hai Duniya Kee Kyoun Yeh Reet Hai Jab Ishq Khud Hee Hai Khuda Hotay Hain Kyoun Do Dil Juda... ?? Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooldewana1 0 Posted February 27, 2003 salam shabo how r u thx saying something about me eek umer ho gai hai kay dil ki ketab main kuch pateyoon kay sawa kuch nahe raha yadeen kuch is tarah say samaht pay chaa gai pechlee rafaqtoon kay sawa kuch nahe raha jazbay tamam kho gay lamooh ki dhool main abb dil main daherkanoon kay sawa kuch nahe raha take care Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted March 2, 2003 welll shabo jeee waqaee its not cheating :P .... acha gar tum kehtee hoo tooo yaa loo hazir hai janab :) its a ghazal by saleem kausar .. it was sung bye najam sheraz a pop single of pakiustan... its the title song of its first and mah favourite albom KHAZANA relesed in 94 ,95 and guitar on that particular song is played by amir zaki :P..... its here http://poetry.urdupoint.com/selecte....ney.gif hmm surprising :p ..its difficult to translate such a pure urdu here ..soo enjoy the real spirit :D mnsoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daanish 0 Posted March 3, 2003 how are u all membere my name is dainsh ali my e_mail address is danish_ali_458@hotmail.com i love u very much my friend ok your lover danish ali Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daanish 0 Posted March 3, 2003 W/salaam Rubab Hey what a beautiful shair you posted.. wah wah janaab bohoth khoob Thanks for the compliments ji.. so nice of u Take care daanish danish_ali_458@hotmail.com Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted March 7, 2003 Wah Wah Mansoor sahib... u r not just a cheat ur a MAHA cheat :P Nice 1 I like it..... I will chek that link out sum time!! This is from me:- Dil gumsum zubaan khamosh yeh aankhein aaj kyun nam hain? Tumhe kabhi paiya hi na tha to aaj khoney ka kyun ghum hai? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kaash banaaney waley ney dil kaanch k banaiey hothay, Todney walay k haathon par zakham tho aiey hothay.... Take care :inlove: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted March 28, 2003 Lijiye bula liya aapko khayal meiN Ab to dekhiye hameN koi dekhta nahiN. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PalkeN bhi chamak uthti haiN sote maiN hamaari AankhoN ko abhi khwaab chhupane nahiN aate. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tum ne aakar mizaaaj poochh liya Ab tabeeyat kahaN sambhalti hai. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jaane de ae tasavvwur-e-janaN na kar talaash Aisa na ho ki wo kahiN dushman ke ghar miley. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yaad aaye haiN uff gunaah kyaa-kyaa Haath uThaye haiN jab dua ke liye. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
