saadamin 0 Posted July 11, 2003 ;) hello room asslam alikum sher sunain choot ka nazaray sahat ka kabray Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 11, 2003 Salaam & a BIG welcome to the Shairi board for Asim & Saad!! Thanks Asim for ur compliments & showing ur appreciation for ALL the good contribuitions, that have been posted here, by the lovely members of CooLYar communtiy!! You are invited to share ur collection of poetry as we would all love to read it.. pehla nazarana tho bohot khoob hai ji.. wah wah!! patthar hai terey haath mey ya koiee phool hai jab tu qabool hai tera sab kuchh qabool hai phir tu ney diya hai naiya faisala mujhey sar par abhi to pichhali musaafat ki dhool hai tu dil pe bojh ley k mulaqaat ko na aa milna hai is tarah to bichharnaa qabool hai Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 11, 2003 Heyyy Saad sher sunain choot ka nazaray sahat ka kabray What does this mean???? Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 11, 2003 salam all , Sar-e-Rah Kahin Jo Mil Jaye Uss Say Kehna K Tera Matlashi Aaj Bhi Rah-e-Guzar Per Bethaa Hai Aur Wahan Say Guzarnay Walo Ko Tera Hulyaa Bata K Kehta Hai Tum Nay Iss Ko Kahin Dekha Hai Main Nay Uss Ko Yahin Khoya Thah udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted July 12, 2003 Thanks everybody, I appreciate. Here is another one which i like the most... Zabt lazim hai magar dukh hai qiyamat ka Faraz, Zalim ab ke bhe na roye ga tu mar jaye ga. Arz kiya hai... Tumhari yaad ke lamhe bare dilchasp hote hein, Bus itni dair he ahsaas-e-tanhai nahi hota. Thanks and have a nice day! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 12, 2003 salamm all , mehfilain lutt gain juzbaat ny dum tour dia saaz khamosh hain nughmaat ny du tour dia her musarret ghum-e-deeroz ka unwaan bani waqt ki goad main lumhaat ny dum tour dia un ginet mehfilain mehrom-e-chraghaan hain abhi koan kehta hai ky zulmaat ny dum tour dia aaj phir bujh gay jul jul ky umeedoon ky chraagh aaj phir taroon bhari raat ny dum tour dia jin sy afsan-ay hastti main tasulsul tha kabhi un mohbbat ki rwayaat ny dum tour dia jhilmilaty howay ashkoon ki larri tout gai jugmagatti hoi barsaat ny dum tour dia ha-ay adaab-e-mohabaat ky taqazay ............ lub hilay aur shikayaat ny dum tour dia udas : ( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 12, 2003 salam all of u guyzzz...... yar asim ur shairee was nice .......n adil yar u alwaz udas:p.....is liye shiaree mian bhie udasie.....anywaz shaireee to shairee hia ......is liye shairee to achie hia........ ;) ............to udas bhaie ajj aik poetry app ke naaam........umeed hia pasand ayee ghee app ko......here it is.... YAAD Kitne Aziyat Say Uss Nay Mujh Ko Bhulaya Ho ga... Mere Yadoon Nay Ussay Khub Rulaya Ho Ga.. Baat Be-Baat Aankh Uss Ki Jo Chalki Hoo Gi....... Uss Nay Chahray Ko Bazuoon Main Chupaya Ho Ga Soocha Hoo Ga Uss Nay Din Main Kaye Baar Mujhy....... Naam Hathele Par Bhe Likh Likh Kay Mitaya Ho Ga... Jahan Us Nay Mera Ziker Suna Hoo Ga Kisi Say.. Uss Ki Aankhoon Main Koe Aansoo Tu Aya Hoo Ga.. Raat Kay Bhegnay Tak Neind Na Aye Ho gi Tujhy........ Tuu Nay Takeye Ko Bhe Senay Say Lagaya Ho ga.. Hoo Kay Nidhal mere Yadoon Say Tuu Nay Jana......... Mere Tasveer Pay Sar Apna Tikaya Hoo Ga...... Poocha Hoo Ga Jo Kisi Nay Tere Halat Ka Sabab.... Tuu Nay Batoon Main Khub Us Say Chupaya Ho Ga.... himmmmmm .......hopefuly every one did like dat........ ok bye for now tc ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 12, 2003 "TU HEE BATA "ZINDAGI " TU HE BATA" ZINDAGI" JO BHI HUA KYUN HUA KHOI HAI KYUN HAR KHUSHI KIS KI LAGA BADDUAA KISE KISE JAWAAB DOON BHUJHA BHUJHA DIL HAI KYUN KIA MEIN KAHOOON BIKHRA KYUN SAPNA MERE bheghe bheghe din kali raatein aansoon ke jaise barsaatien tujh e mujh se joh dil ki baatein kia mein kahoon dard kyun dard ko mila tuhi bata "zindagi" joh bhi hua kyun hua sona sona se hai ab yeh mann doobi doobi see hai ab darkhan jaon kahan?ab hai yehi uljhan kiya mein kahoon khoya kyun rastaa mera tuhi bata" zindagi" joh bhi hua kyun hua ,,,,!!!!!! udas :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsalan 0 Posted July 12, 2003 agher app logo mai say mairai ko koi add karna chai tu is account mai add karsakta hai :o mohmmad_arsa321@hotmail.com :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 12, 2003 salam and welcome umair.zm bahi keya ho bary dino bad aaye :) thanksssssss ke app nay apni shaam hamary nam kar de ;) wahhhhh ji buhot khub , buhot achi hai app ki shayri :) udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 12, 2003 salam udas yara..... yar shaam app ke naam kariney ka maksad yehie tha k app ke udas chehrey par thodie hansee layien woh to miane dkeh lie..ab aik dost ke natey keh raha hooon koiee bhie baat ho jaye zindaghee mian hamesha muskura ke usey kabool karo kyoon k yeh sab KAM KHUDA KIE TARAF SE HOTEY HIAN aur hum UN KE FAISLEY AGHEY KUCH BHIE NAHIEN HIAN.........bas achey honey kie dua kya karo.......N ALWAZ DO TRUST ON GOD......mera expirience hia jo bhie hoTA hia achey ke liye hie hota hia..........SO NEVE MIND........ OK TC ALWAZ ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted July 14, 2003 Thanks Umair...and everybody else. Arz kiya hai... Badanaam mere pyaar kaa afsana hua hai deewane bhi kahte hain ki deewana hua hai Rishta tha tabhi tou kisi be-dard ne todaa apnaa tha tabhi tou koi be-gaanaa hua hai Baadal ki tarah aake baras jaaiye who ik din dil aap ke hote huye viraana hua hai Bajte hain Khayaalon mein teri yaad ke ghunghroo kuch din se mera ghar bhi pari-Khaanaa hua hai Mausam ne banaya hai nigaahon ko sharaabi jis phool ko dekhun wahi paimana hoa hai Take Care Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 14, 2003 salamm all :hi: thankssssss Umair bhai , buhot kushi hoi app ki batein parh kar shukrya yara ,, ha theek kaha hai app nay , par yar men udas nahi hoo , nick he udas rehta hai , men tau buhot kush hoo allah ke fazal o karam say , app ki dua chahye bass , :) aur app ko nam tau pata chala na ;) ok thanksssss yar app ki reply ka , chalta hoo allah hafiz adil Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 15, 2003 har ik sey kehtey hain k "Daag" bewafaa nikla yeh puchhey in se koiee wo Ghulaam kis ka tha?? Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 15, 2003 agar tum mujh ko mil jatey buhot mumkin thaa meray paoon, meri zeist ke kaantay nekal jatay buhot mumkin thaa meri rah ke phatar pegal jatay jo dewaray meray rstay men Haeil thein meray agee say Haat jatei agar tum ankh uotha kar deikh letay koHsaron ki tarf aik pall chatanay aik tumhari Jnbshh Aabro say kut jatein AanGaron bhari iss zindagani men tumhary paoon ke Uojlay kanwal kheltay rafaaqat ki sunHri jheel men dono ki Aakass zo fashan hiltay hamari ruh kab ham say Hafa rehti ye sab Een mumkin thaa AGAR tum mil jatay !!!!!! agar tum mil jatay !!!!!!! udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 15, 2003 Asay roktay bhi tau kes laye ? oh jo shehar thaa Uojar geya oh jo khuwab thaa bkheir geya kabhi musamo ki nazar lagi kabhi Wahmon nay Daara deya kabhi manzilo ki sarAb nay' hamein rastay men DAAGA deya kabhi zindagi ki ketab say ' hamein jes nay chaha mita deya bss issi laye ' oj ja raha thaa tau dur tak' Aesay deikhtay rahy mgar ' MAGAR nahi di "sada" Aesay ruktay bhi tau kes laye !!!!!! udas ::crying: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 16, 2003 “TERI YADOUN KI MEHAK!” TERI YADOUN KI MEHAK SATH LIYE…… AKSER HUM! DOOR KHAWABOUN KEY JAZEREY MAI OUTER JATEY HAIN…… “KION KEY HUM TUM”…… SIRF KHAWABOUN HI MAI MIL SAKTEY HAIN! MAI NEY SOCHA HAY KEY….. IS BAR TUMHAREY HAMRAAHUS JAGAH OUTROUN GI… AUR WO BAAT JO MAI KEH NAHIN PAAI TUM SEY…. SAMNEY TUM KO BITHA KER BARI HIMMAT KER KEY…. TUM SEY KEH DOUN GE…. TUM SEY KEH DOUN GI KEY TUM MEREY HO!!! TUM JO CHAHO….. MERI YAKTARFA MOHABBAT KO SAHARA DEY DO…. ZINDAGI YOUN TO BOHAT KUM HAY MOHABBAT KEY LIYE….. JITNA BHI PIYAAR MUJHEY DEY SAKO SARA DEY DO… APNI DUNIYA TO SADA PIYAAR SEY KHALI HI RAHI! TUM MERI DOOBTI KASHTI KO KINARA DEY DO….. KUCH TO BOLO…..! KUCH TO BOLO….. MUJHEY DER HAY KEY SEHER HOTEY HI…. TUM CHALEY JAO GEY….! AUR HUM PHIR SEY…. APNI DUNIYA MAI LOUT AAIN GEY…. YEHI YAADIN YEHI BATIN TO ASASA HAIN MERA….. BUS YEHI CHUND KHYAALAT LEYE….. TERE YAADOUN KI MEHAK SAATH LIYE”….! AKSER HUM ! DOOOR KHAWABOUN KEY JAZEREY MAI OUTER JATEY HAIN…..!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 16, 2003 Shabo jee I luv it..... I luv urdu shayari.... it haz shooooooo much emotion 'n realizm 2 it......!!!!!!! u can express anythin'!:) (well mayb not anythin')!:P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 16, 2003 wahhhhhhhhhhhhh buhot khub shabo ji , Hamain na Daikh Zamany Kee Gerd AankhooN Se Tujhay Khabber Nahin Ham Tujh Ko Kitna Chahtay Hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 16, 2003 salam all of u guyz....... thanx adil bhaie.......merey neeley merey peeley:p.........hamesha khush reh:d.........himmmmmmmm shabnam jie app kie poetry kie tareef karina ab fuzool laghta hia kyoon k ab hum sab janitey hian jab bhie app likhtee hian poetry us ka andaz nirala hota hia:)....... to chalo ajj mian bhie zara kuch poetry kar hie deta hoon......wesey hamarey yahan ka mousam kamal hia:)..........is mousam mai poetry karina ........wah wah wah kya maza aa ta hai....... so here is is gareeb kie poetry .......arz hia......... Mohbbat karna koi zulm nahi, Agar ki jaye usool se, Khuda ko bhi muhabbat thi, Apne rasoul se Hui hum se ye nadani, Kay teri mehfil mein aa baithe Ho kay zameen ki khakh Aasman se dil laga baithe Dil si cheez hai, dene ko hai de day Magar koi qabeel bhi to ho Hum to jaan de kay bhi khush hain Magar koi qateel bhi to ho Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi himmmmmmmm howz dat guyz........umeed hia kisee ko to achie laghee ho ghee.......anywaz tc alll ..........BYE FOR NOW ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 17, 2003 Salaaaaam all :hi: Hi Tabu I agree with u completely.. I think urdu shairi is the best!! Hi Adil & Umair,, nice shairi by u guys :) Jab kabhi khwaab ki umeed bhandha karti hay neend ankhoon may perashan phira karti hay Yaad rakhna bhi mohabat may hai sab kuch Bhool jana bhi baree bat hua karti hay..... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 17, 2003 salam all :hi: wah shabo buhot khub , keya bat hai ji app ki shayri ki :) aur umair keya hall hai ji app ke , wahhhhhhh ji buhot khub buhot achy , aur theek kaha Shabo jesi shayri ham kaha post kar saktay hai yar :) Bass Itna Kehna Mujhe bass itna kehna hai, kabhi main yaad aoon to Kabhi tanhayee ki raatain, tumhai zyada satayen to Kabhi titli na bole to, aur jugnu lot jaye to Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jaye, Koi jab sun na paye to Kabhi sab dost saathi bhi jo tum se rooth jayen to Kabhi jab khud se lad ker thakan se chur ho jao to Kabhi chahte huwe bhi khud akele roo na pao to Apni aankhon ko band kerna mujhe awaz de dena Phir mere tasawwur se jo chahai baatain keh dena Mere kandhe per sir rakh ker tum jitna chahe ro lena Jab main khud lout jaon to apni dunya chale jana Magar bass itna kehna hai Ke jab bhi dukh ya khusyoon main Humain dil se pukaro ge Humain tum saath pao ge udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 18, 2003 Jab bhi Aatha hai tera nam meray nam ke sath Janay kiu log mera nam say jal jate haiii ,,,,,,,,,!! udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 18, 2003 Salaam!! :hi: Wah wah ji nice shairi Adil :) This shair is for Umair on his "special" day today ;) Amn ki koshish mey har din guzar dey, Allah tujhay aisi khushbu baar baar dey... Happy birthday!!! :flower: Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 19, 2003 Jo hairaan hain tumharey zabt per keh do Qateel un sey Jo daman per nahi girta wo ansoo dil pey girtaa hai ,,, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
