adilkhan 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam all :hi: thanksss shabo ji , app ki shayri bhi buhot khub hai wahhhh :) [b] YAQEEN Tum Mujhay Bhool Nahi Saktay Kabhi Meray Naghmaat, Meri Dard Bharee Aawazain Meray Lafzon Main Mehaktay Huwe Yaadon K Gulaab Mari Aankhon Main Dehakta Hua Chahat Ka Aalao Umer Bhar Teray Ta'aqqub Main Rahain Gay Janah ... Waqt Har Ghaao Ko Bher Deta Hai Such Hai Lekin Jab Bhi Barsay Gi Ghata Jab Bhi Bahaar Aaaye Gi T eri Aankhon K Yeh Paymaanay Chalak Jayain Gay Teray Daman Main Sitaray Say Utar Aayain Gay Tujh Ko Aazaad Na Honay Day Ga Mere Chahat Ka Fason, Mere Mohabbat Ka Hisaar Meray Hamrah Guzaray Huwe Lamhon Ka Khumaar Rayegaan Yun Hi Na Jayein Gi Wafayein Meri Toot Bhi Jaye Agar Saz-e-Hayaat Tujh Ko Aayein Gi Shab-o-Roz Sadayein meri Tum Mujh Ko Bhool Nahi Saktay Kabhi ..... udas [/b] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 :hi: aik kHaak-e-hind teri azmat meN kya gumaaN hai dariya-e-faiz-e-qudrat tere liye rawaaN hai teri jabiN se noor-e-husn-e-azal ayaaN hai allah re zeb-o-zeenat ki kya oj-e-washaaN hai har subah hai ye kHidmat khushid-e-pur-ziya ki kirnoN se gundhta hai choTi himalya ki r_s_:flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam.. sahbo .:hi: Han!Mujhe yaad hai... kabhi chale the hum sahilon pe saath saath, leke ek doosre ka haathon mein haath, kya khushgawar lamhe the jab hum tumse mile the, meri har dharkan mein bas tum hi tum base the, Han!yaad hai mujhe tumse hui har mulaqaat! li the kitni kasme ek duuje ke saath, Leke aaye the tum mere ghar baraat, han!mujhe yaad hai woh chaandni raat! jisme ki thi humne pyaar bhari baat! kitne sapne the aaNkhon mein hamari, guzri thi har shab baahon mein tumhari, hamare darmiyaan the kitne hi jazbaat, nahi bhool sakti hoon main woh lamhaat! Han!mujhe yaad hai har woh ek baat! phir achanak ye kya hua ke aaj barso baad.. phir wohi sahil hai, wohi shaam,wohi baat, wohi tum,wohi main, wohi saath.. magar is baar.. nahi hain to woh pehle jaise jazbaat, na hi hai ek doosre ke haathon mein haath, chale ja rahe ho tum kisi soch mein, chale ja rahe hain hum kisi soch mein, BAS!yuhin guzar rahi hai ab to ye hayaat!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 r_s_:hA ik woh din thaa.. jub too aur maiN huaa kartay thay kisii khoobsoorat ghazal ke dilkash matlay kee tarah too ghazal kaa thaa pehlaa misraa aur maiN doosraa. Hum donoN kee behar aik thee qaafiyaa bhee aik hee thaa. Aik aaj kaa din hai... too aur maiN ab bhee haiN do misroN kee tarah. Par jub se tujh meiN se lafz-e-apnaapan huT gayaa tub se teraa meraa qaafiyaa nahiN miltaa aur apnay sher kee behar bhee gir gayee hai. :crying: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam all :hi: hahhahah rs wellcme ji , app yahha bhi wahhhhhhhhhh buhot khub keya shayri hai wahhhh , maza aaya ;) aur ye keya sirf shabo ko salam , aur hamein kuch nahi :( ab suno ji zara gawar say ,,,,,adil ki dil ki awaz :) Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Ke Koi Dosra Dekhay Tumhari Sharbati Aankhen Lab-o-Rukhsaar Aur Pakein Siyah Lambi Ghanee Zulfein Seharay Dosra Koi Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Kare Jab Tazkara Koi Kare Jab Tabsara Koi Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay Tumhari Baat Ko Soochay Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Tumhari Muskurahat Per Hazaroon Loag Martay Hoon Tumhari Aik Aahat Par Hazaroon Dil Dharaktay Hoon Kise Ka Tum Pe Yuun Marna Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kar Na Hoga Zabt Yeh Mujhse Karey Gustakhi Tumse Tumhari Zulfein Bikhar Jayen Tumharay Lams Pe Jayen Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Ke Tum Ko Phool Bhi Dekhain Tumhare Paas Se Mehkein Ya Chanda Ki Guzarish Hoo Ke Apni Roshni Bakhshoon Rukh-e-Jana Koi Dekhay Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 1. Hon.Th uske gazalo.n ke misrey aa.Nkhon me.n afsaane they GaaloN ke do til bhi uske kuchh jaane pahchaney they..... 2`.uss pe hi ghazleen banteen theen, aur shehar woh sara sunta tha pall pall saaray uss k thay, uss k hi to zamaanay thay .... 3 Ek nazr mein usne mujhko aisa ghayal kar dala Waise to mainey bhi uspar saadhey kayee nishaaney they ... 4 uskee baatoN me gunjan thi uske geet sayaaney the meethey shahad se bol jiya ke duniya ne pahchane the ... 5 aankh aur lab to aik taraf, sir say pa taranay thay awaazoon main janay kioon, goongay rang basanay thay ... 6 Waqt kee gucchee dekh kay hum kucch ghoom gaey chakra say gaey Oos mein jo na sulajh sakein, kucch aisay taanay baanaythay 7 Honth us ke ghazlon ke misre aankhon main afsaane thay" Nazm main kuchh nasar main kai khud se kiye bahaane thay 8 bhuri mehfil mein jo julti thi, ussi shuma ke hum purwaney they hount uske gazal k misrey, ankhoun mein afsaney they 9 Julterang aisay bej ouThay,hum soun kay jinhain sudh budh Qulqul, malhaar our jhernay thay,ya chutkay laboon kay kuch tazyaanay thay .r_s_ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam every 1 here......... adil bhaie tujhey khas tor par.....:Pkyoon k tooo badie jaldie naraz ho gaya r_s bhaie se jab is se shabo ji ko salam kya........anywaz.......yaron aik din main itnie poetries bhie likh deen app ne wow!!!!!!!!......... shabo jie ur as usual gr8.......lakin r_s yar kya kha kar aye ho itnie poetries aur woh bhie itnie achien zabardast....... to ab zara main bhie kuch keh doon........ KUCCH TO APNEE NISHAANEEYAN RAAKH JAA IN KITAABON MEIN TITLIYAAN RAKKH JAA LOG TANHA NA LAUT JAAYEIN KAHEEN TU RAASTON MEIN KAHAANIYAN RAKKH JAA HO RAHA HAI AGAR JUDA MUJHSE MERI AANKHON PE UNGLIYAAN RAKKH JAA AAJ TOOFAN BHI AKELAA HAI TU KINAARON PE KASHTIYAAN RAKKH JAA ok guyzzzzz bye for now tc alll ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 23, 2003 hi! kiran here wow tum bohat achi collection share ker rahe ho i like it. main bhi koshish kerti hoon tum loogoo ki tarah. NA MAIN PAAS USKO BULA SAKA NA MAIN DIL KI BAAT SUNA SAKA WOH HANSI HANSI MAIN HI CHAL DIYA MAIN HAATH TAK NA HILA SAKA NA DUSHMANI KI DIN SE ABH NA HAI DOSTI KI RAAT SE HAI BACHA HI KIYA JO WOH LEGAYA MUJHE CHEEN KER MERI ZAAT SE YEH MAKAM KITNA AJEEB THA KE MAIN KHUD KO BHI NA BACHA SAKA NA MAIN PAAS USKO BULA SAKA NA MAIN DIL KI BAAT SUNA SAKA YEH BHI THEEK HAI WOH CHALA GAYA MUJHE BAND RASTE PE CHOR KER YEH BHI THEEK HAI NA AIGA KABHI BUTT ANA KA WOH TOOR KER WOH JUDA BHI KAISE HOWA KE MAIN KOI RASAM BHI NA NIBHA SAKA NA MAIN PAAS USKO BULA SAKA NA MAIN DIL KI BAAT SUNA SAKA bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 dil cheez hai kiya jana ye jaaN bhi tumhari hai teri bahoon mein dum nikle hasrat ye hamari hai roti hoon taRapti hoon kaTti hi nahien zalim aik raat judaie ki so(100) raat pe bhari hai hum ishq-o-muhabbat ke chalo puchlien "Sadiq" se aik bazi muhabbat ki us shakhs ne hari hai _________________r_s_ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam all :hi: aur wasalam umair bahi kesay ho , hahahhaha nahi yar men naraz nahi hoo , oh tau men mazak kar raha thaa r s say , aur app ki shayri buhot achi hai ji app ki tarha ;) ab men bhi kuch sunaooo :) mgar ye khass kesi kelay hai ;) deikhna aik din meri yadein tumhein sataey gi aur tum lut aao ge aapnay Mazi men aur yaad karo ge meri baton ko un khubsorat lamHo ko un narazgion ko jo ham dono men hotei thei aur pir tumein yaad aaye ga oh aik dusray ko mana na hamara oh aik dusray par jaan charkna aur phir tumhari ankhin bhar aayei gi aur tim kaho ge ke waqye mujhy tum say sachi muhabbat thei !!!!!! udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 Jahan phoolon ko khilna tha waheen khiltey toh accha tha Tumhi ko hum ney chaha tha tumhi miltey toh accha tha r_s_ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzzzz........ yar adil zabardast shairee yar......:) kiran jie app kie shiaree kie kya baat kahiyee zabardast ....app kie shiaree parh kar aesa lagh k jesey yeh shiaree main keh raha hoon aur mere liye hie bani huee hia:).......anywaz........r_s bhaie nice shaiee urs too........ bye for now TC AL ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 Intezar-e-saba raha barsoun Eik dareecha khula raha barsoun Eik din Us ka piyar barsa tha Aur main bheegta raha barsoun Tab kahee jaa k eik ghazal likhee Main tujhay sochta raha barsoun ........r_s_ :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 kahey jatey ho ro ro key hamara haal duina sey yeh kesi raaz dari hai sitaro tum to so jao waahh bahot khoob aur hamein bi neend aa hi jay gi hum bhi so hi jaein gayey abhi kuch beqarari hai sitaro tum to so jao.. r_s_ ok by ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 23, 2003 r_s.......bhaie salam....... yar koun c shaireee kie book hath laghee hia app ko jo har 2 min ke baad app ki new shiaree yahan post ho rahee hia......:D.........arey yar mazak kar raha tha nice shiareee:)....... keep it up....... yar tumharey pass koie aese shiaree ho ghee jis main apni us ki tareefain kahieee hueee hon:)....... if so dan yar plz yahan post karina ok........ ill be waiting for urs post....... bye for now ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 23, 2003 r_s salam :hi: hahahhaha r s wahhh ji shabasy , hahahhaha aur umair books nahi yar aala din ka cheraG laga hai rs ke [/B]Hath Yeh raaz-e-bahaar-e-gulshan hai, is raaz ko samjhay kya koi Shabnam ko rulaya phoolon ney yah shabnam raat ko khud royi Mere Haal Pay Hairat Kaisi Dard K Tanha Mosam Main Pathar Bhi Ro Partay Hain Insaan Tou Phir Insaan Huwa udas ok ji ab allah hafiz all ham tau chalay susral ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 23, 2003 ok ji ab allah hafiz all ham tau chalay susral ;) ok ab allah hafiz :hi: rs chal bahi jaldi kar deir ho rahi hai , oiiii rukna yar start he nahi ho rahi :) umair bahi zara deika laga na plzzzz byeee :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 24, 2003 hi! adil FANTASTIC i liked ur reply that was tooooo good bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 24, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzzzzz........ yar adil main dhaka laghney ke liye tayar hoon lakin too mujhey peechey se dhoowan to mat mar:P........... chal main zor lagh raha hoon ab res de aur chalita ban:D......... ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 24, 2003 Salaaaaam ALL Yahaan tho achi khasi mehfil jami hai.. wow W/salam r_s_ :hi: aap ki cut and paste shairi tho wah wah bohot hee achi hai ji... "dil cheez hai kya janaa" wala song bhi bohot khoob hai.. thanks :D Adil & Umair ur shairi is also very nice... aap loog bhi khoob haal e dil baiyaan kar rahay hain.. maza aa gaiya parh k I'll be back with some more shairi.. very SOON!! Aur haan kisi ko lift chahiay tho meri haazir hai... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 24, 2003 :hi: Salaam.. I'm back!! fasalaa to hai magar koiee fasalaa nahi mujh sey tum judaa sahi dil se to juda nahi aasman ka fikr kya aasman Khafa sahi aap ye bataiyn aap to Khafaa nahi kashtiyaan nahi to kya hosaley to paas hain keh do naaKhudaaon se, tum koiee Khudaa nahi lijiye bulaa liyaa aap ko Khayaalon mey ab to dekhiye hamen koiee dekhata nahi aaiye chiraaG-e-dil aaj hee jalaayen hum kaisi kal hawa chale koiee jantaa nahi Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 26, 2003 Salam all :hi: hahhaha umair bahi ab choro yar ab tau men pahunch bhi geya , aur thanksssss kiran ji :) aur shabo ji thanksssss ;) aur app ki shayri wahhhh buhot khub ab ham bhi kuch Irshad kare ;) Masoom nazar , bhola mukraa , hunton pe tabasum shuH Aada , Tasweer ka jab ye Aalam hai , oh Husan e mujasam keya hoga , udas No thanks ji hamary pass apni hai na ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 26, 2003 Salaam Adil Wah wah.. bohot achay janaab, nice shairi! phir koiee aiya dil-e-zaar nahin koiee nahin raharau hoga kahin aur chala jaiyga Dhal chuki raat biKharane laga taaron ka Gubaar larkharane lagey aewaanon mey Khwabidaa chiraaG so gaiee rasta tak tak ke har ek rahaguzaar ajanabi Khaak ne dhundalaa diye qadamon ke suraaG gul karo shamein bara do mai-o-miinaa-o-ayaaG apne beKhwaab kiwaaron ko muqaffal kar lo ab yahaan koiee nahin, koiee nahin aiyega Sx OK ji aap apni scooteri pey jao phir :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted July 26, 2003 Hi Everyone, I don't know if this gazal has been posted before or not but i really like it and hope you will enjoy it. Take Care sunaa hai log use aankh bhar ke dekhate hain so us ke shahar mein kuchh din Thahar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai rabt hai us ko Kharaab haalon se so apane aap ko barbaad karake dekhate hain sunaa hai dard kii gaahak hai chashm-e-naazuk us kii so ham bhii us kii galii se guzar kar dekhate hain sunaa hai us ko bhii hai sher-o-shaayarii se shagaf so ham bhii mojaze apane hunar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai bole to baaton se phuul jharte hain ye baat hai to chalo baat kar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai raat use chaand takataa rahataa hai sitaare baam-e-falak se utar kar dekhate hain sunaa hai hashr hain us kii Gazaal sii aankhein sunaa hai us ko hiran dasht bhar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai din ko use titaliyaan sataatii hain sunaa hai raat ko jugnuu Thahar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai raat se barh kar hain kaakulen us kii sunaa hai shaam ko saaye guzar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai us kii siyaah chashmagii qayaamat hai so us ko surmaafarosh aankh bhar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai us ke labon se gulaab jalate hain so ham bahaar par ilzaam dhar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai aa_iinaa tamasaal hai jabin us kaa jo saadaa dil hain ban sanvar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai jab se hamaa-il hain us kii gardan mein mizaaj aur hii laal-o-gauhar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai chashm-e-tasavvur se dasht-e-imkaan mein pelang zaave us kii kamar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai us ke badan ke taraash aise hai ke phuul apanii qabaayein katar ke dekhate hain vo sarv-qad hai magar be-gul-e-muraad nahi ke us shajar pe shaguufe samar ke dekhate hain bas ek nigaah se luTataa hai qaafilaa dil kaa so rah_ravaan-e-tamannaa bhii Dar ke dekhate hain sunaa hai us ke shabistaan se muttasil hai bahisht makiin udhar ke bhii jalve idhar ke dekhate hain ruke to gardishein us kaa tavaaf karatii hain chale to us ko zamaane Thahar ke dekhate hain kise nasiib ke be-pairahan use dekhe kabhii kabhii dar-o-diivaar ghar ke dekhate hain kahaaniyaan hi sahii sab mubaalaGe hii sahi agar vo Khvaab hai taabiir kar ke dekhate hain ab us ke shahar mein Thaharein ki kuuch kar jaayein 'Faraz' aao sitaare safar ke dekhate hain Thanks. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
