Kiran 2 Posted July 19, 2003 hi there! hey tum loog to bohat achi achi poetry collection share ker rahe ho well i m late kher aap sab ko Kiran ki taraf se salam after salam i'd like to intoduce myself kiran here from karachi. well ek nazam jo main aap loogoo se share kerna chati hoon. SUNO..!! YEH LAFZ JHOOTE HAIN TUMHARE WASTE MERE DIL JITNI MOHABBAT HAI KISI KE BHI WASTE MERI JAAN WOH HO NAHI SAKTI KAROON MAIN KIYA MOHABBAT CHAR LAFZOON MAIN BAYAN BHI HO NAHI SAKTI KE..APNE SARE LAFZ JANTA PHECHANTA HOON MAIN TUMHARE SAMNE YEH BENAWAI MANTA HOON MAIN YEH HI EK BAAT HAI KE BOHAT CHUP CHAP REHTA HOON CHALO IZHAR KERTA HOON..... MAIN TUM SE PYAAR KERTA HOON..!! BYE KIRAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 19, 2003 Jo hairaan hain tumharey zabt per keh do Qateel un sey Jo daman per nahi girta wo ansoo dil pey girtaa hai ,,, I luv it...... i agree wid it 2! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 19, 2003 BICHARTE LAMHE WOH BOHAT DER TAK ROYA THA WOH ISS SE BERH KER MERA AITERAF KIYA KERTA YAHAN TO PAL MAIN BADAL LETE HAIN KHUDA BHI KAI WOH TAMAM UMER MERA TAWAF KIYA KERTA...???? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 19, 2003 Salam all :hi: shabo aur kiran wahhhhhhhhhh ji buhot khub :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 19, 2003 Aissa kabhi na hoo Tum rooth jao mujh say aisa kabhi na hoo Main ek nazar ko tarsoon aisa kabhi na hoo Main pooch pooch haroon soo soo sawal kar kay Tum kuch jawab na do aisa kabhi na hoo Kuch main bhi janooni hoon kuch meri Mohabbat bhi Yea janoon tham na jaye aisa kabhi na hoo Mery hi sath hasna mujh say hi mill kay roona Mujh say beechar kay jee loo aisa kabhi na hoo Tum chand ban kay rehna main dekhta rahoon gaa Kissi rooz tum na nikloo aisa kabhi na hoo udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 19, 2003 hmmmmmmmmmm well thanx adil here some more 4 my friends. MERI ANKHOON KE JADOO SE SHAYAD TUM NAWAKIF HO JIS PE MUJHE PYAAR AJAYE US KO PAGAL KER DETA HOON CHOR KER MUJH KO JANE WALA LOOT KER WAPAS AYEGA!! DAIN BAIN(LEFT RIGHT) AAG LAGA KER AGAY JUNGLE KER DETA HOON BYE KIRAN:girl: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 19, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzzzz........ shabam jie i m really very very much thank full for wishing me .......app kaho ghe is thanks kie koie zaroorat nahien........lakin main yeh kehna chahoon gha is duniya main ajj kal har kisee ko matlab kie paree hia koun hia jo kisee aur taraf dekhita bhie hia.......app merey ghum to na sahie lakin khushie main shamil hueeen i m thank full jie........ n adil bhaie main theek hoon,.........bas woh barishian ho rahen hian hamarey yahan to zara kam ana ho raha hia yahan........aur tussee sunao.....howz goign life....... himmmmmmmmmm ab zara shairon ke maidan main aya hoon to shairee to kar ke jaoon gah na.......so here is is gareeb kie gareebani shiaree......:) Wo qayamat ho sitara ho ke dil kuch na kuch jigr me tootay to sahi hum wahin per hi basa lein khud ko wo kabhi rah me rokey to sahi sab se hat ker hi manana ha isay ham se aik bar wo roothay to sahi dil usi waqt sambhal jay ga dil ka ehwal wo poochay to sahi us ki nafrat bhi mohabat ho gi meray barey me wo soochay to sahi us ke qadmoon me bicha doon aankhain meri basti se wo guzrey to sahi us ke sab jhoot bhi sach hain mohsin shart ha wo bolay to sahi howz dat guyzzzzz......nice na.......wesey shiaree to aur bhie hia lakin bakie aik break ke baad kahoon gha ok........ till dan bye all f u guyzzzzz. tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 20, 2003 Salam :hi: umair bhai kesay ho , hmmm bareshy tau yahha bhi dil khul ke baras rahe hai , khub mazay ho rahy hai ;) Aarzo hai samnay tujh ko beitha kar deikh le , Apni dunya , teri dunay pe luta kar deikh le Apni ankhoon men nahi koi ,Najam, uss ke sewa, deikhna chahye Aagar , nazray mila kar deikh le , udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 21, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzzzzzz........... wah adil bhai nice shair yar......zabardast yar....yar wesey hum sab shabo jie kie shiareee ko manitey hian lakin yar ajj jo main shiaree laya hoon mujhey yakeen hai u guyz will surely like it........so it is ma shiareee........ Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... jab hum tum saath hotey they, woh geelay neem k neechay, geelee ghaas pe baithe, chandnee raat main, main tumharee zulfain gina kerta tha, aur tum madhosh see masoom se , meree soorat taktee theen, Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... jab tum merey pehlo main baithee, un udaas palon ko yaad kia kartee theen, jab tum mujh se rootha kertee theen, kuch naraaz naraaz see tumharee soorat, mujh main khalish see paida kertee thee, jaisey pooree dunya mujh se rooth gayee ho, Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... jab main tumharey kandhey pe ser rakh k, roya kerta tha, aur dua kerta tha, k hum kabhee juda na hon, tum bhee kia khoob larkee theen, tum bhee ro dya kertee theen, phir hum donon, ek doosrey k, ansoo poncha kertey they, aur phir achanak khilkhila k, hansney lagtey they, Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... jab tum ek phool k saath, mujh se milney aya kertee theen, aur phir kuch hee dair main, janey kee zid kia kertee theen, aur main tumhain, rokta rehta tha, woh ek ek lamha gina kerta tha, aur phir achanak tum, pyar se khuda hafiz kehteen, aur, sangeet kee dhunon kee tarha, hawa main gum ho jaya kertee theen, Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... jab tumharey diyey hoey woh phool, gin gin ker main rakhta tha, jin kee khushboo se , meree almaree mehek see jatee thee, aur phir us khushbo main main, aisa sama sa jata tha, jaisey merey jeewan main udasee, Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... jab tum barkha rut main akeilee, chhat pe aya kertee theen, apney sundar hathon se, kaprey phailaya kertee theen, main ghar kee mundair pe charha, tumhain hath hilaya kerta tha, aur tum anjaan se ban k, neechay bhag jayaa kertee theen, Woh Kitney Haseen Lamhey They... Ab to koi bhee naheen hai, woh lamhay woh yadain hain, na koi soorat na koi kandha, aur na koi dhanda hai, na koi roothney wala hai k, jis ko ab manaya jayey, na koi matha hai k jis pe, bosa sa lagaya jayey, na koi haath hai k jisko, apney haath main thaama jayey, aur na koi masoom see soorat, k jis pe pyar sa aya jayey, ab to sirf un lamhon kee, kuch qeemtee see yadain hain, k jin k saharey jeeney kee, tamanna main hum harey hain, HUM HAREY HAIN....HUM HAREY HAIN.... yaron umeed hia u all guyzz must have love dat.......hai na.........ok yar bye for now...... tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 21, 2003 nice! tum ko maloom bhi shayad yeh kabhi ho k na ho meri raatain teri yaadon se saji rehti hain meri sansain teri khushboo mein basi rehti hain meri ankhon mein tera sapna saja rehta hai haan mere dil mein tera aks basa rehta hai iss tarhan mere dil k bohat pass ho tum jis tarhan pass hi shahragg k khuda rehta hai tum ko maloom bhi shayad yeh kabhi ho ka na ho mere aangan mein lage phool gawahi dainge maine arse se kisi phool ko dekha bhi nahi tujh ko socha hai tu phir tujh ko hi socha hai faqat tere siwa kisi aur ko socha bhi nahi tum ko maloom bhi shayad yeh kabhi ho ke na ho BOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 21, 2003 A nice effort by u all.. great shairi Heyyy Umair... mention not :D Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 21, 2003 salam every 1...... shabo jie app se pangha nahien hia jie...... bas thorie koshish kie achie shiaree kie aur kuch nahein jie.......:) ok bye for now tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 21, 2003 thnx shabo. (were u saying it to me too?) anyways were is ur contribution? good shairi by umair! BOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 21, 2003 thanx fati jie.......:)......... ma pleasure.........JIEEEEEEEE......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 21, 2003 thanx fati jie.......:)......... ma pleasure.........JIEEEEEEEE......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 21, 2003 thanx fati jie.......:)......... ma pleasure.........JIEEEEEEEE......... WESEY APP KIE SHAIREE SO NICE........ MUJH KO MALOOM NA THA APP ITNIE ACHIE SHIARE LIKHTEEN HIAN......:)....... ok bye for now ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 22, 2003 Heyyyy Umair its cool na ur shairi is good so I complemented u on it ;) no panga at all :) OF COURSE FATI... ur shairi is also toooooo good ;) I really like it! Here is my contribution for 2day.. hope u like it! Phir aya mausam tanhaiee ka Kya karoon is akelay pan ka Doondthi hoon apnay aap ko, kissi ki ankhon mey Afsos meri dosti bassi hai unh ankhoon mey Ik pal k liyay sochthi hoon, kaisa hota agar woh mujhse pyar kartha Ye na ho zindagi guzar jaiy sochthey sochthey Unki khushi mey mojood ho kar, thora sa muskra k Apnay dil ko thhaam lethi hoon Phir aya mausam tanhaiee ka Its not mine but hope u like it all the same!! Does it make sense???!!! lol Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 22, 2003 Heyyyy Umair its cool na ur shairi is good so I complemented u on it ;) no panga at all :)OF COURSE FATI... ur shairi is also toooooo good ;) I really like it! Here is my contribution for 2day.. hope u like it! Phir aya mausam tanhaiee ka Kya karoon is akelay pan ka Doondthi hoon apnay aap ko, kissi ki ankhon mey Afsos meri dosti bassi hai unh ankhoon mey Ik pal k liyay sochthi hoon, kaisa hota agar woh mujhse pyar kartha Ye na ho zindagi guzar jaiy sochthey sochthey Unki khushi mey mojood ho kar, thora sa muskra k Apnay dil ko thhaam lethi hoon Phir aya mausam tanhaiee ka Its not mine but hope u like it all the same!! Does it make sense???!!! lol Sx ahhhhh.... A ghazal ismade neither in 2 days nor in 2 months or years. It is just a feeling of our heart. When we feel somthing , we write it , and this is called a Poetry! Well , there is a quote of someone , i like this very much. "Agar Pyaar Aik lamhay main mukammal na ho sukay to ye na saalon' main mukammal ho sekta hay na k sadyoon' main" May b love at first sight , hehehe nice haan! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 22, 2003 Salam all :hi: waa waa ji sab nay buhot khub leikha , aur Umair buhot khub yar wawawwa ,ab men bhi kuch leikho kesi kelay ;) Suna Hai Waqt Merham Hai Zamanay Bher K Zakhmo Ka So Ek Din Bher He Jayien Gay Jo Ghao Chohray Jatay Ho Mager Jib Bhi Koi Sadma Kahin Say Bhi Milay Mujh Ko Ghamo Ki Sab Ruto Main Tum Bohat He Yaad Aatay Ho !!!! udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 22, 2003 shabo and umair. ap loog kayun mujhay sherminda kartay hain. ya meri shairi nahi. i just have saved good verses and in this section i posted selected ones. nice poem shabo! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 22, 2003 BADLA NA APNY APP KO JO THY WAHI RAHY . MILTY RAHAY SABHI SE MAGER AJNABEE RAHY, ,,,,,,,,,,,, aik Umar guzarnay pe bhi samjh men na teray andaz aaye "ZindaGi " choor dey pechaa mera men baaZ aaya ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Aajeeb rang men guzri hai zindagi apni dilon pe raj keya pir bhi pyar ko tarsaa , udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 22, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzzzzzzz......... thnax shabnam jie....himmmmmm ur shaireee is gr8 yara....aur han fatima jie wesey mian koun sa apni shiaree karta hoon:p.......main bhie yahan wahan se hath karita hoon......shiareee...........lakin woh sab app ke liye pesh to main kairta hoon na is liye naam bhie mera ho gha na.........:).....anywaz....ohh adil bhaie......ur shiaree kie kya baat kahiyee har shiar mian dil kie ghehraiyon se word kahey hoey laghtey hian.........chalo ajj main bhie dil kie ghehraiyon se shiareee pesh karta hoon........... umeed hia u guyz must love dat.......... so here it is.......... Teri judaai mein roney ki aadat hogayee "BEWAFAII KI YEH INTEHA HOGAYEE ke tujhse juda hokar bhi jeeney ki aadat hogayee tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney roz dil ko behlaney ki aadat hogayee terey waadey pe kya bharosa kiya humney keh shab bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayee khushi mein bhi hum kya muskuratey keh teri judaai mein roney ki aadat hogayee kaafiley nikal gaye humein chhor keh keh ab tou tanha safar ki aadat hogayee har morh par mili ghum ki parchhaiyaan zindagi se samjhota karney ki aadat hogayee jaantey thay keh nahi hosaktey kabhi tum hamarey phir bhi khuda se tujhey maangney ki aadat hogayee paiman-e-wafaa kya hai humey kya maloom *saahil* keh bewafaaon se dil laganey ki aadat hogayee ............................................................................................... how was dat guyz.....gr8 na....... anywaz bye for now tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted July 22, 2003 salam :hi: wahhhh buhot khub umair :) di ko teri chahat per bharosa bhi bhot hay aur tujh say biccher janay ka der bhi nahin jata ,,,,,,,,,, Itni shidaat pehlee kabhi ansoon ,mein na thei . dekhaa apne naseeb ko to sar-e-aam ro dyee.. udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 23, 2003 Salaam all u shaiyars! :hi: Wah wah ji kya baat hai... Thanks Munnibhai for expressing ur views and I really like the way u explained the meaning of shairi Heyyy Fati.. hum sharminda thori na kar rahay hain aap ko, jaisa k Umair ney likha even if the poetry is not ur own achi shairi dhoond k yahan paish karney thak.. aap ka haq banta hai k ussey apna naam dein.. rite na? ;) Thanks Umair for the compliment :P Nice shairi Adil.. hamesha ki tarha UDAS hai :( This is from me!! haath chhuuTe bhii to rishte nahii.n chho.Daa karate vaqt kii shaaKh se lamhe.n nahii.n to.Daa karate jis kii aavaaz me.n silvat ho nigaaho.n me.n shikan aisii tasviir ke tuka.De nahii.n jo.Daa karate shahad jiine kaa milaa karataa hai tho.Daa tho.Daa jaane vaalo.n ke liye dil nahii.n tho.Daa karate lag ke saahil se jo bahataa hai use bahane do aisii dariyaa kaa kabhii ruKh nahii.n mo.Daa karate vaqt kii shaaKh se lamhe.n nahii.n to.Daa karate jis kii aavaaz me.n silvat ho nigaaho.n me.n shikan aisii tasviir ke tuka.De nahii.n jo.Daa karate shahad jiine kaa milaa karataa hai tho.Daa tho.Daa jaane vaalo.n ke liye dil nahii.n tho.Daa karate lag ke saahil se jo bahataa hai use bahane do aisii dariyaa kaa kabhii ruKh nahii.n mo.Daa karate Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted July 23, 2003 salam :)yeH maujooda tareeqe raahi-e-mulk-e-adam hoNge nai tahzeeb hogi, aur naye saamaaN baham hoNge [ adam= absence, tahzeeb= culture, baham= available] naye unwaan say zeenat dikhaayegi haseeN apni na aisa pech zulfoN meiN, na gesoo meiN yeH kHam hoNge [ unwaan= title, zeenat= spectacle, haseen= beauty, pech= entagled, zulf/gesoo= hair, kHam= curls] na to kHaatoonoN meiN rah jaayegi parde ki yeH paabandi na ghooNghaT iss tarah say haajib-e-roo-e-sanam hoNge [ kHaatoon= ladies, paabandi= punctuality, haajib= guard/protector, roo-e-sanam= face of the beloved] badal jaayega andaaz-e-tabaa'e daur-e-gardooN say nai surat ki kHooshiyaaN aur naye asbaab-e-gHam hoNge [ tabaa'e= nature, daur-e-gardoon= movement of the sky(== changing time) surat= kind, asbaab= things] na paida hoNgi kHat-e-naskH say shaan-e-adab aageeN na nastaleeq harf iss taur say zeb-e-raqam hoNge [ kHat-e-naskH= a very old Arabic font, shaan-e-adab= crown of literature, aageeN= is a Persian term which comes after a noun to make it adjective , nastaleeq= common Urdu font, zeb-e-raqam= beautiful writing] kHabar deti hai tahreek-e-hawa tabdeel-e-mausam ki khileNge aur hi gul, zamzame bulbul kay kam hoNge [ tahreek= movement, tabdeel= change, zamzama= song] aqaayid par qayamat aayegi tarmeem-e-millat say naya kaaba banega, magHribi putle sanam hoNge [ aqaayid= plural of faith, tarmeem= correction, millat= community magHrib= west, putle= dolls, sanam= God/ beloved] bahut hoNge mugHanni nagHma taqleed europe kay magar bejoRh hoNge, iss liye betaal-o-sam hoNge [ mugHanni= singer, nagHma= song, taqleed= copy cat, bejoRh= without topic, betaal-o-sam= out of tune/ off metre] humaari istalaahoN say zabaaN na-aashna hogi logHaat-e-magHribi, bazaar ki bhaka say zam hoNge [ istalaah= assigning a different meaning to a word by a literary person, na-aashna= unrecognizable, logHat=dictionary, bhaka= common language, zam= included] badal jaayega mayaar-e-sharafat chashm-e-duniya meiN zyada thay jo apne zo'am meiN, woH sab kam hoNge [ mayaar= scale, sharafat= civilized, chashm= eyes, zo'am= pride] guzishta azmatoN kay tazkare bhi rah na jaayeNge kitaaboN hi meiN dafan afsaana-e-jaah-o-hasham hoNge [ guzishta= past, azmat=magnificence, tazkara= remembrance afsaana= story, jaah= grandeur/dignity, hasham= pomp/glory] kisi ko iss tagHayyir ka na hiss hoga na gHam hoga huay jis saaz say paida, usi kay zer-o-bam hoNge [ tagHayyir= change, hiss= sensation/feeling, saaz= musical instrument zer-o-bam= high and low musical notes] tumheiN iss inqilaab-e-dahar ka kya gHam hai? ai AKBAR bahut nazdeek haiN woH din na tum hoge, na hum hoNge [ inqilaab= revoultion, dahar= world] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
