SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 16, 2003 2nd episode aakhir wo din bhi aapuhuncha jis din maryam ko aana tha.papa ki office ma meeting thi is lia wo subah hi sa ghar par nahi tha chonkay mujhay ghar par "iklota farzand"honay ka aazaz hasil tha is lia taay ya paya ka ma hi maryam ko airport lanay jao.maray to til ma laddo phoot rahay tha lakin ammi ka samnay thori si acting ki.aur phir in ka kaafi israr par airport janay k lia raazi ho gaya magar is shart par k apni car"jo ka phateechar ka name sa famous thi"os par nahi balkay papa ki new car jis ko papa maray shadow sa bhi door rakhtay tha os ma jaoonga ma car ma batha"wah new car ka mazaa hi kuch aur hay" airport par maryam ko dakh kar mary aankhay chamak othi is ko to ma 10000 ma bhi pahchan sakta tha aur ma jaldi sa os ka kareeb gaya aur kaha "excuse me aap maryam ha na"? yes i am maryam na idhar odhar dakh kar kaha "wo ma aap hi ko lanay aaya hu.is par os sungdil na kaha q accha kia aap afridi uncle ka driver hay? is par ma na kaha nahi bilkul nahi ma to onka bata hu ma to SLLeepy hu.ma na sharminda hotay hua kaha.aur khud par nazar dorai mujh par hazaro hassenay dum dati ha aur ya mosoofa....khair ma mayoos kadmo sa car ki taraf aanay laga ma na to soacha tha ka mohtarma pahli nazar ma mujh par fida ho jay gi.aur to aur is ko sunanay k lia ma na aik ghazal bhi yaad kar li thi jo halki halki aawaz ma maray honto par par gardish kar rahi thi. "baad muddat ka milay ho...kaho itnay din kasay guzaray? umeedo ka khwab khareeday ya raat jago ka aazab khareeday.... lakin kia karta yaha to bisaat hi ulat chuki thi. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 16, 2003 Nice story SLLeepy.. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted November 16, 2003 lolll very very nice .. sleepy bhiya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 17, 2003 hey Nice Story!!>. but no contribuion!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 17, 2003 hahahahaahha sleepy zaberdast ...cy kai asfsana nigar ban gaye app to :D mariuam bohat zaheen kaisa sahee pehchana DRIVER ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted November 17, 2003 Sleepy ...baad muddat kay is topic ki kismat jageey.. waiting 4 next episode.. Rukh aur Sidd par bhi kahani banaooo plzzzzzzzzzzz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 18, 2003 hey Sleepy rest episod..!!?/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted November 18, 2003 sleepy is sleeping i think... ya shayad maryam ne jo kiya phir unke saath.. woh likhne ke kabil hi nahi :P issi liye unhoon ne socha ki iss novel ko idher tak hi chhor diya jaye :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 18, 2003 kis nay sleepy kay sath kiya kiya..? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted November 18, 2003 miss manchester .. inki story waleeen khatoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 18, 2003 ghar aakar ma na maryam ko apni taraf mail karnay ki bharpoor koshish ki magar dhaak ka wahi teen paat...aur to aur mujhay to moo par hi kahty thi majnoo sahab!lagta hay !ahmakana harkato ma aap na PHD ki hay mujhay to kisi mature life partner ki talaash hay is lia pahlay hi sa apna intizam kahi aur kar lo.aur to aur maray papa ka khayal ma bhi in ka ahmak,inmature,farzand kisi tarah sa maryam ka laiq nahi tha ammi ka khayalaat bhi papa sa miltay jultay tha.ma na soach lia tha k ab intihai qadam otha loonga.q k ammi papa aur is nak chiri hassena ka tarz-e amal na mujhay aasay karnay par oksaya tha.aglay din ma na subah hi subah apnay kamray ma band horaya aur dhaar saari golia kha kar sheeshi hath ma pakar kar so gaya....aakhir ko khud kushi karnay jaraha tha koi mazzak to nahi tha aur jub maira maray kamray ki safai karnay k lia kamray ma aai to baat pooray ghar ma jungle ki aag ki tarah phaal gai.aur mujhay forna ali ka clinick puhunchaya gaya jo ka mara langootia yaar tha do din baad mujhay hospital sa farigh kar dia gaya.maira baar baar maray kaan ma chupkay chupkay sa kah rahi thi bhai aap ka ghar ma koi intizaar kar raha hay.jasay hi car ghar ma dakhil hui maray khayal ko mazbooti mil gai.maryam ki soojhi soojhi aankhay hal-e dil bayan kar rahi thi.wo kahtay hay na muhabbat to dil ka andar kahi chupi hoti hay.is ko koi hadisa hi bahir nikaal sakta hay.goya hadsa ho chuka tha mujhay is waqt shadeed harat hui jub papa na new car ki keys maray hath ma da di.aur kaha raat ko tumhari mangni ka function hay.is waqt mara khud ko daad danay ko jee chah raha tha k ya drama ma na pahlay q nahi kia ya to Allah ka shukar hay ka ghar walo na neend ki golio ki dabbi ma jhanka nahi q k is mabadolat na soda mint ko golia daal rakhi thi.aur sath hi ma ali ka shukar guzaar hu ka os na mary is dramay ma khoob saath dia.raat ko maryam ko anghooti pahnatay huay ma na sargoshi ma kaha"baad muddat ka milay ho kaho itnay din kasay rahay"aakhir ko itnu mahnat sa ya nazam yaad ki thi.aur maryam par roab bhi to dalna tha lakin saath saath ya bhi soach raha tha ka ali sa jo dinner ka wada kia hay is par kharcha kitna aay ga.? lakin aik baat zahan ma aatay hi maray chahray par muskurahat phaal gai "papa to muthi ma hay" The end!!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 18, 2003 wel Good happy Ending!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 18, 2003 yes jub the end sleepy karta hay to aasay hi hota hay :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted November 18, 2003 ShabO kee kahni Kidhar poohnchi ??? i think i need some dozen hours to grasp it ;) :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted November 19, 2003 aray mansoor bhai woh tu kab khatam ho gaye darmian main tu najanay kitni manchester oh sorry khanyan shroo ho gaye hain In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted November 19, 2003 nice storiessss. sleepy.. ap to mahan ho :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 19, 2003 aray Mansorr ab sleepy or Shabo ke dono ke end ho gai hay ab app he new start ker dain!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 20, 2003 becharee meriunm :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 20, 2003 ufff..... yeh kahaniyan.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 20, 2003 bus khanioon main hee aisa hota hai .. jis ko chaho jis sai mila do haqqeqat main to app ki khanai ka iktyar opper walai ko hota or wohe us ka end kerta hai ...:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 21, 2003 han Right Rukh.. or Shuker hay Allha ka kay He take decisions for us!! otherwise.. kiya hota hamara!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 22, 2003 ...otherwise NaDaN - YOU would make ur own decisions Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
