adilkhan 0 Posted May 14, 2003 ret pe lekh ke mera naam mitaya na karo, ankhein sach boltei hai pyar chupayaa na karo log har bat ka afsaana banaa dety hai sab ko khalaat ki rudaad sunnaya na karo ye zarori tau nahi ke har shkhss masiikha hi ho pyar ki zakham Aamanat hai deikhayan na karo shehr e akhsass mai pathar buhot hai aiy dost dil ko shiishe ke jharokon mai sajayaan na karo udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted May 14, 2003 well nice piece of poetry but dont cryyyyyy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 14, 2003 Adil yeh tamana hai tujhay apna bana kar rakhoon sari duniya sey pare khud mein chupa kar rakhoon Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted May 15, 2003 heheehe shabo why dont u put it in to a bank locker :D haha MAnsoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 15, 2003 Salaam Mansoor Put WHAT into a locker??? Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted May 15, 2003 salam to all of u........ shabo jie masoor kie salah maan li jiyee locker main adil ko band kar dain...... :P ........bohut bolita hai adil...... ab janab ajj app ke liye main jo shairrr....arz karna chaita hoon woh zara ghore se suniyee......shayad main apnie dil se keh raha hoon..... arz hai. "is duniyan main dost tumhain kam milain ghey, is duniyan main tumhain ghum hie ghum milain ghe, jahan duniya nazar pher lay ghie tum se,wahan dost tumhain hum milain ghey" ................ :) ok guyz hope u ll love dis shair.... :D ....... ok bye TAKE CARES..... ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted May 16, 2003 yup gr8 shair umair. duniya nazrain phir le. oh my God . nana . cant think of that time. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 16, 2003 salammmmmmmmmmm shabo Sharma rahy hai app hi oh hussany be misal kes ka hasiin yaad ussay cheer kar gayee i ,, udas :hearts: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 16, 2003 salamm Na bichren gay Jeety Ji ham dosto hamein dosti ki Qasam dosto Pata koi pochta hai tau kehty hai ham ke Dil mai uss ke rehty hai ham yahhi pyar barsoon puranaa hamara salamat rahey dosTana hamara udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 16, 2003 Hiiiii :P @ MAD Max!!! Thanks Umair for explaining what he meant and ur shairi was nice Salaam Adil aap ki shairi bhi bohoth hee achi hai janaab.... thanks for sharing it :) Here is a COOOOOLLL one from me; Hum kyun chalain uss rah per, jis rah per sab hee chalain. Kyun na chunain wo rasta jis per nahin koiee gaiya.... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 16, 2003 salammmmmmmmm all APNA ADAT HI NAHI AUROO KO ZAKHAM DEIKHATY PHIRNA , MAI JANTA HOO TERAY PASS MASEKHAII HAIIIIIII ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, UDAS Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted May 16, 2003 hannnnnnnn jee shabo jee kia jungle janay ka irada hai .... ??? welll last shair aur yaa wala shair seems to be in "line" haha take care all Max :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 16, 2003 Salaam Mansoor sahib if u cant contribute with shaiyri then plz DONT contribute at all :p Much obliged Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 16, 2003 Kya kahun tum se main ke kya hai ishq, Jaan ka rog hai, bala hai ishq. Ishq hi ishq hai jahaan dekho, Saare aalam mein bhar raha hai ishq. Ishq maashuq ishq aashiq hai, Yaani apna hi mubtala hai ishq. Ishq hai tarz-o-taur ishq ke taeen, Kahin banda kahin Khuda hai ishq. Kaun maqsad ko ishq bin pohuncha, Aarzoo ishq wa mudda hai ishq. Koi khwaahan nahin mahabbat ka, Tu kahe jins-e-narawa hai ishq. Mir ji zarad hote jaate hain, Kya kahin tum ne bhi kiya hai ishq? Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted May 17, 2003 shayad wo phir udas raha tamam shub dekho to kitna sard hay ankhon ke paar chand. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 17, 2003 salammmmmmm keya pyar mai aesa bhi hota hai ke jesay dil chahay uss pey mar janay ko dil chah ta hai keya uss ke ansoo pi janay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ke har gham ko mita daynay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ko har paal muskurata hua deikhnay ko dil chahta hai ke uss par zindagi lutta daynay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ke khath pakar kar ura lay janay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ki ankhoon mai khoo janay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ki pyari pyari baton ko har pal sun nay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ko har chot say mehfooz rakhnay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ke rasty mai giray hoi har kantay ko uotha dayna ko dil chahta hai ke uss ko dil mai chupa laynay ko dil chahta hai ke uss ko har paal sapnon mai rakhnay ko dil chahta hai KIYA PYAR MAI AESA HOTA HAI ke uss ki parchayee ko hee deikh kar dil kush ho jata hai ke uss ki aik nazar say hee dil ko sukoon ho jata hai ke uss ka chehra charo tarf chajata hai ke uss ki bat bat pe pyar aa jata hai ke uss ki banhon dil mar jana chahta hai ke uss ki khatho ki rekhaon ko dil badal dey naa chahta hai ke uss ki naseeb mai likhi hoi har gham dil apnay nam kardena chahthaa hai ke uss ki har khwaHish ko dil pora kar dena chahta hai ke sari jahan ki kushyan dil uss ke qadmoo beicha dayna chahta hai kiya pyar mai aesa hota hai ke uss ke sath jena tau keya Uss ke sath maar janay ko dil chahta hai KEYA PYAR MAI AESA HOTA HAI UDAS Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted May 17, 2003 hioo udas welcome On comunity seen u first time here :D hmmm shabo , contribution poetry section for poetry :D well its here ham koo maloom hi jannat kee haqeeqat laiken Dil koo kushh rakhnay koo ghalib yaa khial acha hai " regards Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 17, 2003 everyone! Hi Mansoor... heyyy my reverse psychology worked!!! Nice shaiyri keep it coming W/salaaaaaaaaaam Udas.. pyar mey aksar aisa hee hotha hai ji :) Haath sey jaam chheen kar tum ney sharaab phaink di, Baath tho thab hai tum meray hontay sey pyaas chheen lo! Sunha hai inhey mohabat dua'ein dethi hai, Jo choat dil pe khaiey magar gila na karey!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 21, 2003 salammmmmmm wahhhhhhhhh shabo buhot khub , apnay Ehsass Se choo kar mujhy sandal kar do mai ke Sadion say Se Adhoora Hoon Mukammal kar do Na Tumhein Hosh rahy aur na mujhy hosh rahy Iss qadar toot ke chaho mujhy PAGAL kar do Tum Hatheli ko mere pyaar ki mehendi Se rango apni ankhon mai mere Naam ka kajal kardo Uss ke Saaye mai mere khuwaab mehek Uthenge mere chahray pe Umiidon bhaara Aanchal kar do apnay Honton say koi Muhar Lagao mujh par Aik nazar pyar Say deikho Mujhy GhaYal kardo udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 23, 2003 Salaam All!! Here's another couplet from me... Dil ki awaaz bhi sun meray fasaney pe na ja, Meri nazron ki tarf bhi dekh zameny pe na ja... Does it make sense?? Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted May 23, 2003 Nice couplets shabs ! i think i have wrote that shair aguan as well but still i like dat shair soo its here "nadann hain daratay hain joo dunyaa kay sitam say sahil nay bhala kon sa toofan nahi daikha" lolzzzzzzzz @ reverse psycology .. i wuld say what baout " counter reverse psycholgy ??? regards Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted May 23, 2003 A S A to all, As you know i just came into this superb forum to read understand and learn more from what ever we contibute each other, i really surprised to see how quick responce are out here.. The reason to selecting this forum to feel and enjoying our upcomings Shairs (poets) and as well as i want to participate among you all, and i was posted my first poem as u was readed :( in last day posts., Well freinds, See u soon. A. H Babar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Waqas 48 Posted May 24, 2003 Welcome Babarleo here hope you will have a nice time here Yes i checked you work thats great Waqas :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted May 25, 2003 hmmm babar leo U reached the right Place buddy ! surely coolyar is the best place o be in :D yaa app kee nazar "woo ayeenn hamaray "forums" kabhi ham unn koo aur kabhi phir Unn koo daikthay hain " :P welcome Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted May 26, 2003 Salaam Every1!! Hey Mansoor wah wah... nice shairi!! Oh & about "counter" reverse psychology.. well u need not apply it on me as I contribute freely on the shairi bored already... maybe u noticed???!!! W/salam Babarleo I just read your poem, it really was very enjoyable bohoth khoob likha app ney.. You are very welcome to join in with your choice of poetry, as we would all very much like to read it! You mentioned the response rate on the forums.. all members participate actively which makes the community a very interesting place to visit... everyone's views and opinions are valued and I hope this will encourage you also! At this moment I dont have any shiari to submit... but do watch this space!! Waqas... nice of u to drop by! Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
